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Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2012 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 5
So good to see that Edward has found ways to see Bella again and is not just interested in great sex but wants to know more about her personal life.
Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2012 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 5
I love it, more please
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh, boy, I see the eventual reveal of Edward's truths to be terribly ugly! Yes, please continue!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 5
Edward is clearly entranced by Bella. He's obviously not giving up on her! I was glad you gave us Bella's background, with the loss of her are parents, the going to school and needing money. She's not just looking to get rich stripping. Love the story! Looking forward to the next update! I'm not sure how she will deal with Tanya!! Gah!! How Tanya will feel too when she finds out? Great story!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wow, now Edward is really caught! He wants Bella, Burke his wife's girlfriend finds out, he's dead! The guys seem OK with it because they hate Tanya, lol. PoorBella. She will definitely feel like a hooker I'd she never sees Bella again, gah! I know it works out, but damn, a bumpy road is ahead, lol. Reading on!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 3
Damn, damn, damn. Bella is so horny, she's umber brave. Knowing where she was going and what would most likely happen, damn she's git balks. You write great lemons....and boy, to ear, "why didn't I meet you first". Yikes!!! Can't wait to see, reading on!!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
Ok, so I get the past, but technically he's not divorced yet? Angela doesn't seem so happy with their prior situation, and agrees to disagree with Edward. Now the new Mrs. Cullen, and adorable Addison are going to a new home?? Can't wait to see, so reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very interesting beginning. There appears to be more to the story, which we will find out later! The wedding was quick but very romantic! I can't wait, so I'm reading on!!
Reviewer: 19porsche (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 5
i have missed this storyplease continue it.
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
Please update asap!...Loving the story!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 5
Liking the back story.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 4
The way Edward let literally everyone see that he spent the night with Bella shows that he is not used to cheating. He couldn't be more indiscreet. Let ussee how he makes another rendezvous happen.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 4
Loved the premise of this story. Great new angle for how Edward and Bella meet for the first time. Also the circumstances surrounding Edward's situation when he falls for Bella. Hard choice of Bella's to stick around, but since that second time was done without protection could be the reason Addison arrives on the scene. Or just Edward's idea he has to see Bella again on her night off. Edward will see her in spite of general opinion. James is just thinking of Bella as a normal stripper supplementing her income with one night stands, but that is not who Bella is at all. Since Edward is only her second time at having sex with someone. Will be interesting to know how Bella will react once she first learns Edward is a married man. It will be hard to keep the others from repeating the information to Tanya about Edward's cheating in Vegas especially if they know he continues to see Bella. Looking forward to future chapters.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 4
MORE PLEASE ! DYING HERE!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh Edward. You neeed to come clean
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2012 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 3
I get the impression that - just like Bella - Edward is not a man that frequents strip-clubs and takes girls home with him. Instant attraction - coup de foudre. Look forward to the morning after.
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 3
HOT!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 3
So that's how they met
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2012 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 2
How come I have a feeling like the other shoe is about to drop?
Please update soon.
Reviewer: twiobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 2
Im so excited that the story is being reposted !!!! Hopefully the updates will come quickly.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm interested in reading more but would like to know if these first 2 chapters are the end and you'll show how they got here or is this the start?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
The first 2 chapters were the end. Chapter 3 will start at the beginning, when Edward and Bella met.
Again, thank you for the review. I hope you continue to read and like it ... please review each chapter, I love seeing them :)
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