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Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2014 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

  Hi, LJ.

  That was sweet.  Tender.  And, oh for sure, fiery!        :-P

  You know, these two don't make a bad pair together, do they?  I really enjoyed that.

Author's Response:

Hello, Costa!

Thank you! I tried to get it to be emotional and sexy. lol Glad it seemed to work. :)

I really do like an Alice/Edward pairing myself. They are just so naturally a set. Or they're good WonderTwins. *grin*


Thanks for reading and the super shiny rating!


Reviewer: dbg (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Excellent, great one shot. New, different and lemony.

Author's Response:

Good morning dbg!

Thank you! I had so much fun writing this. lol  Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, too, for the scintillating rating!


Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2012 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh I loved this!  I have a soft spot in my heart for AU Edward/Alice fics. I think in another life they would have been perfect for one another. 

It was great that their epic lovemaking was just a shared vision/dream.  I wish you would write more about these two in this universe.

Author's Response:

Good morning!

Oh! I'm so glad you liked this.  I enjoy AU Edward/Alice as a couple. I think they'd be fantastic together. 

I might have to return to this pairing at some point. I paired them in my Christmas story Adeste Fideles, but I didn't go into their relationship as much as I did Alice's life.  I like them, though. :)

Thank you for reading!


Reviewer: Iridescka711 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well... That gives a whole new definition to mindf***ing someone. Excellent story.

Author's Response:

Hello, Iridescka711!

LOL That was the first thing I thought of when I had this idea after seeing this prompt. But. That doesn't really work for a title, you know? :)  But YES, exactly.

Glad you liked it. Thank you for the review and the scintillating rating!


Reviewer: mtoldme (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it! Very Sexy! Oh what the mind can do.

Author's Response:

Good morning, mtoldme!

Thank you. :) Yes, the mind is the most important sex organ. ;-)  Thank you for reading!


Reviewer: Sawyer_88 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed reading this, a nice idea. I really like the idea of Edward and Alice but stories of them romantically involved are very hard to find. 

Thanks for sharing :) 

Author's Response:

Good morning, Sawyer_88!


Thank you!  I had fun with this. I think Edward and Alice have a lot of romantic potential. They're just very constrained to their siblinghood in the Saga. And I totally get that.


Thank you for reading!


Reviewer: alexajaye (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2012 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very good, and very imaginitive!  I loved it!

Author's Response:

Good morning, alexajaye!

Why, thank you. :) I had fun with this. The prompt totally worked for me. lol

Thanks for reading, reviewing, and the super shiny rating!


Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2012 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

OoO, beautiful.

Author's Response:

Good morning!

Thank you. :) I"m so glad you think so!

Thanks for reading and letting me know. :)


Reviewer: eesti (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Thanks for this - I love Edward and Alice stories and it is very rare to actually find one. 

Author's Response:

Hello, eesti!

Thank you! I think Edward and Alice are a terrific combo.  My original thought for this was to have it after an Eclipse AU tragedy but for many folks E and A are firmly entrenched as siblings at that point. I get that.  So I went way early so that their possibilitiy of "siblinghood" isn't even there, since they don't see each other that way. For many, I was hoping for less squick. lol

I'm so glad you enjoy the pairing!


Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

LJ!  What an interesting idea!  How lucky are those two! lol

I loved it!  Thank you for sharing, Dixie

Author's Response:

Hi, Dixie! :)

The picture prompt is entirely "to blame" for this one. lol I saw that and said, EDWARD AND ALICE. I mean, they totally were. lol  I think that the pair of them have a ton of potential. :)

Thanks for reading and all the pretty, pretty stars!


Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Amazing as always...and this was by NO means predictable, but I knew. I knew it was only mental. However...I sort of wish I could do that?

Author's Response:

Hey, ShelbieLyn!

Aw, thank you. You are always so kind. :)

Wasn't the mental stuff FUN? lol I enjoyed having them do that without DOING that.  I kind of wish I could too.  I imagine things a lot, but a mutual fantasy would be incredible. :)

Thank you!!!


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