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Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Aftermath
Really enjoyed this story. I wouldn't have been able to handle the cliffs so glad I found it when it was over. Hope you have other stories... Loved this
Reviewer: Effy (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Introductions
I don't really have anything to say, but I feel like I should leave a review anyways... so, um... good job?
Oh my god I'm so awkward.
Reviewer: RMCC (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Aftermath
<3. Wonderful story. Thank you. And personally, I think the ending is great - a nice "it's not the end of the story," but enough closure that I don't want to smack you. Lovely job. :)
Reviewer: lsis (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Aftermath
I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH !!! PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel or some out-takes. I would love to read about when they have their baby and how everyone is doing. You are a very talented writer don't ever stop!
Reviewer: lsis (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 06:46 PM · On: My Escape
Oh My God! I absolutely love this story so far! It is such a relief where you dont wait chapter after chapter for them to come together! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Aftermath
Great chapter and great story! I hate to see it end, but all good things must. Keep up the good work in the future!
Reviewer: rencamwom (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Aftermath
great story!
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Aftermath
Lovely.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Aftermath
Loved this story, but I can't believe you ended it there! I'll really miss this fic, and all the characters, especially your Edward and Bella. The plot was amazing and I loved how unpredictable it was. Thank you for writing such a brilliant story, look forward to reading more from you in the future.
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Aftermath
Great story!!!
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Aftermath
Are you planning to write more? I find it so odd that Leah is suddenly hating on Bella since she was her friend throughout most of the story...
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Aftermath
Are you really evil or thinking of a sequel concerning Alice getting back with Jasper? Or Leah going crazy and going after Bella for ruining her life and dreams? Both would be an interesting read. Trauma both Edward and Bella endured at Laurent's hands will take a long to live with. Jacob's recovery from being shot by Laurent. Embry's friends and family mourning for his loss. All by the hands of a mad man. Good news is Bella is having a girl. The interaction between Clearwater and Swan family will be even more tense in the future. Very enjoyable and exciting story. There were periods when I couldn't wait for the next chapter to see what was going to happen next. Lots of action, mystery, sensuality, and lots of tense life threatening situations.
Reviewer: Nathyette (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Aftermath
I really liked this story. Your action scenes are amazing, along with all the smut you conjure up at an exciting, suspenseful pace.
The storyline is a little complex, but understandable, and there is very, very rarely a dull moment, even in consideration of all the fluffy bits.
It's a great story. I enjoyed it a lot, and you have a definite talent for writing. The final chapters before the epilogue with Laurent were pretty breathtaking, while I truly liked your ending. The sense of mystery abstracted from the flow of events seemed appropriate, as the plot is generally very intimately linked, and that provided a nice final contrast to determine a solid ending. xD As you said, I was reduced to scratching my head in wonder. Ha-ha.
Characterization slippied very occasionally, but it was adapted to the context in such a way as to render it unnoticeable. You built strong characters for sure. There were funny moments and your sense of humour often left me in laughter, so no criticizms for that element.
Overall, great prose, sweet work and congrats!
Author's Response: Your review brought a tear or two to my eyes. Thank you. I tend to write angst by I look for balance with my humor. I have written a story that is heavily based on humor called Edward Cullen Purse Snatcher.
Thanks for taking this journey with me.
Erica
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Aftermath
Hmmm I'm going to have to agree with Edward that Leah needs to be watched and Bella should never be alone with her.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Aftermath
Glad everything worked out...sort of. I'll miss this story :(
Reviewer: bdahlia04 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Introductions
Great chapter 1 - I'm hooked!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Aftermath
Kewl ending. I kinda feel bad for Leah, but, she still creeps me out *__*
Yeah, they definately need to live elsewhere!
Glad Jasper finally came to his senses! He & Alice belong together in Any story
So glad Charlie & jake are going to recover :-)
Thanks for finishing your awesome story!! I'll miss it! :-(
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Aftermath
yes... yes you are evil...
So Jasper is still in love with Bella and I'm not sure why Leah hates Edward and/or Bella so much.... Are we going to be given a sequel? or are you going to fill us in??
PS... your evilness is going to rot my brain cells out with all this over thinking... I DON'T WANTA BE BLOND ;)
Author's Response: Jasper is not in love with Bella, just friends now. As for the Leah thing, at one point Bella tells Edward that her friends Leah, Jacob and J as in Jasper were all in love with her. Her and Jasper hooked up and Jacob and Leah learned to love one another. I think there's something about it in Jacob's POV too.
As for a sequel...not sure.
Erica
Reviewer: Melrae (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Aftermath
Loved it!! I just randomly picked up on it one day, and I'm really glad I did. even if there were gaps between updates, It was a great story to just pick up again every update. You're a fantastic writer
Reviewer: sheknitsnicely (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Aftermath
Ha. I don't understand my phone!! I wrote an awesome review and now it's gone! Basically, encore please! I was harrowed, excited and mesmerised. Skn x
Reviewer: Cullen Eclisped (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Aftermath
Bravo! Bravo!
Loved it! Great job! What do you have in store for us next?
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Aftermath
This was a great story! I loved reading it and I am sad that it is over. However, I am going to re-read it many times so I can enjoy it over and over. Thank you for writing this!
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Aftermath
You are evil. How are you going to end it when i finally realize Leah's true nature. I feel this story could go on and on and still be interesting. I wished it didn't have to end. I've enjoy reading this story so much. It's said to read that this is the end.
Reviewer: ElspethGordie (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Aftermath
Lovely ending. It's not too tidy, which is perfect. Life doesn't stop like a perfect bow, it goes on, and you showed that very well. Great job. Excellent story.
Author's Response: That's exactly what I was going for. Not everthing is going to go smoothly, but they're very aware of their surroundings and people, after what they've been through they can read people.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Erica
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Aftermath
nnOOOOoooo i want more lol - oh and you are so evil - are you going to make an epolgue?? or maybe outtakes!?! yes please please - i loved your story - cant wait for more of your work
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