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Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 02:02 AM · On: News
Oooo, that cliffhanger is MEAN!!!! Love it!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 01:56 AM · On: News
What? You left it off there? Why? But...oh Damn, I must find out more!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 01:48 AM · On: News
Wow, incredible story. I can't wait to read more. I am very intrigued with Jacob and Jasper. And now a baby !!!! Please update soon.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 12:13 AM · On: News
Still keeping the story interesting - keep it up! :)
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:35 PM · On: News
So, Jasper is Bella’s mystery man? I like that twist, great update!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:24 PM · On: News
Oh my .... this is so good. Loving the ExB relationship/interactions.
Can't wait for more! Must know what happened in their pasts!
Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 09:44 AM · On: My Escape
Definitely not too much! They're so hot! and I love how they keep sharing little pieces about themselves, too! I was totally surprised by Jacob coming into the story, and I think it's great that you seem to really have an idea of where the story is going and what you want to happen. I'm totally hooked! Also, please don't skip the next 'rest stop', I'm all about "coming together to escape"!
Reviewer: Dazzlers_Wife (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 01:06 AM · On: My Escape
edward and bella r gettin a bit frisky arent they and who is da guy tjat killed renee and put charlie in hospital and left bella
Who is he i can only tink of one other person in twilight with da name begining wit J and it is jasper!!!!!
Who is he
Reviewer: emiek (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 09:24 AM · On: My Escape
no, its fine. this chapter is amazing. finally they are having sex! my God. its really good.
Reviewer: jazzluvr (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 06:11 AM · On: My Escape
Is J jasper or jacob? or neither.........hmmmmm? great story! :)
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 11:37 PM · On: My Escape
Saw the thread on the forums and thought I'd check this out. Excellent story so far. They both have some pretty bad demons haunting them, to cause them to run the way they did. It's good they found each other. And it seems Edward may have saved Bella from a horrible fate, if James is the killer. Though I bet now he'll be following them to extract revenge. I don't think the physical part is moving too fast, when you hurt like that, you only want something to take it away and sex is a very easy way to do that. Look forward to more!
Reviewer: Scarlett_Letters (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 09:29 PM · On: My Escape
I really like what you've started. Lots of plot points that will lead to an exciting conclusion. OK, so my original guess was that the "J" is for Jacob, but...now...I'm not so sure. This will be one of those stories where the update will only make me want more, lol~oh and I've got no problem with them jumping right into a physical relationship! The more the merrier! :)
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 03:08 PM · On: My Escape
i liked it. everything was perfect. you dont need to change a thing. this chapter was amazing. i cant wait to read more.
keep writing,
xoxo
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 10:04 AM · On: My Escape
Too much? Maybe I would have held back the suicide scars to the next chapter. You revealed a fair bit with Jacob's POV, and the tattoo, and the scar, so pacing wise maybe... That said, I'm enjoying it more as it unfolds, so you can't be steering in the wrong direction entirely if the piece is getting stronger as it progresses.
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 09:45 AM · On: Introductions
Love the last line! Buckling in for this ride...
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:18 AM · On: My Escape
I think it works. But yes, they're both broken, but I doubt that they'd rush into sex the way they did. That's just me though.
Author's Response: I think that's why I had so much trouble with the chapter. I wondered if in reality two people as messed up as these two would just jump in. But at the same time I know it happens and it was kind've a heat of the moment kind of thing.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:13 AM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
Umm, I like. That's all I can say. You are really good!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:10 AM · On: Introductions
Seriously...another one? You are amazing, you know that? 4 stories at once? (unless of course my email is being evil again and deleting all my twilighted email and you've finished one.)
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 07:04 AM · On: My Escape
Nothing, i mean nothing is wrong with this chapter, it has Lust, Passion, Desperation, Action and a fantastic plot.................I'm telling you this is gonna be a beauty!!!!
The whole catch-a-killer-thing is perfect, what a nice change. The emotional scars and turmoil memories CLASSIC..............
THANK YOU SO SO MUCH :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. I'm just very critical of myself.
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 02:38 AM · On: My Escape
holy shit batman! So, wait! Jasper is Bella's BFF turned lover turned forgotten and he's engaged to Alice who is sister to Edward, who was engaged to Tanya who was the very first Victim to JAMES who almost did the same to Bella! Holy shit! Am I right? Am I right? Omg, I love this story! I love your other ones too, but I wasn't sure about this one until this chapter and I love it! Brilliance!
Author's Response: I answer the "Am I right?" question I would ruin the story but you got a couple of things right. That's all I got to say. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 12:58 AM · On: My Escape
I really liked this chapter. You introduced a new part of the story and dove deeper into Edward and Bella's characters. Good job! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you I was really trying to make sure that I still stayed true to the characters despite the fact that I wrote a lemon. That usually takes over a chapter but Jacob's point of view stood out because it told us what's currently happening and hints of Bella's past.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 11:53 PM · On: My Escape
First, HOT sex-in-the-car-scene ... aaahhh! Second, wondering who the "J" belongs to because ..... third, didn't see the Jacob aspect (not the ex?).
I am really enjoying this story. It is obvious in the last chapter that both ExB have ALOT of crap from their pasts and that you haven't even begun to scratch the surface of their issues.
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: pwtf (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 12:25 PM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
Wow! I love this!
Reading both your stories shows how incredibly talented you are. They're such different characters, but you write them both so wonderfully. You have great variety in your writing!
James is a bastard.
I love how both Bella and Edward are quite like they are in the book, but they're willing to follow through on their impulses more than you usually see in stories. I love how Bella ran her hands through Edward's hair and then he kissed her - just because they wanted to at the diner. I don't see it as moving too fast at all.
I love the characterizations already and am eager for more!!!
Reviewer: bspest04 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 02:43 PM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
so i just found this story and ihave to say that i really like it so far. definitely keep it going okay!
Author's Response: Thank you I'm working to submit the next chapter by tomorrow afternoon. Glad you like it.
Reviewer: jazzluvr (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 11:40 AM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you!
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