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Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2009 02:34 PM · On: You Want Me To What?
Oh and the plot thickens. I don't even want to try and speculate about what's going on. I love this so much I'm just going to sit back and enjoy. Thanks for the awesome update.
christina
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 02:25 PM · On: You Want Me To What?
Ah! My head hurts now, thanks to all the confusing stuff you're saying. *headdesk* I probably shouldn't read fic, I get too emotionally involved in it. Oh well, this is worth it!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 02:25 PM · On: You Want Me To What?
Ah! My head hurts now, thanks to all the confusing stuff you're saying. *headdesk* I probably shouldn't read fic, I get too emotionally involved in it. Oh well, this is worth it!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 02:25 PM · On: You Want Me To What?
Ah! My head hurts now, thanks to all the confusing stuff you're saying. *headdesk* I probably shouldn't read fic, I get too emotionally involved in it. Oh well, this is worth it!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:31 PM · On: You Want Me To What?
Fuck, things just went from "Shit! We're screwed!" to "FUBAR". I KNEW James was the murderer, but I had no clue there were.... wait, wait, don't tell me you're also bringing Victoria into this as well. Then there would be 3 murderers. Not only that but Jasper's looking for Bella because he wanted to apologize for being insensitive by telling her about the happiness in his life. As for why he wouldn't want her with Edward? Well I'm just going to state the obvious and that he doesn't think that Edward is good enough for her.
FUBAR is the military acronym for Fucked Up Beyond All Recognition.
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 09:50 AM · On: What was that, baby?
Bella certainly has quite an effect on Edward for him to hang up on his sister and throw the phone in the trash. :)
I am really enjoying this story. I love how it's been progressing steadily as well. Thanks for posting such great entertainment.
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 09:55 AM · On: What was that, baby?
First of all, kudos for a Mirena IUD! (I have one and they rock)
Second, whoa boy... Yeah I'm antsy to find out how well Bella takes that notion...
Reviewer: butifuldevine (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Introductions
OMG I F*ing love your story!!!! Its different and i love different. I love the twist with her and Jasper I totally thought it would have been Jacob but you blew my mind I can't wait to see what you have planned next for us. KEEEP GOING PLLLLEASE!!!
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 04:53 PM · On: What was that, baby?
AH! OMFG! That was hilarious. I also loved when they were telling each other about thier reasons for wanting to kill themselves. The whole tit for tat thing was really brilliant. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 05:26 AM · On: What was that, baby?
That is so NOT the news you want to hear after you had mindblowing exam room sex I guess....lol. Great chapter, thank you for updating :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. And no not the news you want to hear.
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 03:09 AM · On: What was that, baby?
Ok, just to check I got this right: Bella was dating Jasper and was pregnant by him, Jasper was responsible for a car accident where Renee was killed, Charlie ended up in a coma and Bella lost the baby, Jasper and Bella split up, Jasper got engaged to Alice who happens to be the sister of Edward who's fiancee was killed and who is now aimlessly travelling around the country together with Bella? Talk about a twisted plotline, you're freaking amazing!
Author's Response: I know what a tangled web I weave. Call me twisted. Oh well, it's makes it much more exciting and drama filled. I'm known for that, but I like the little lines of humor, because it's more real like that.
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:57 PM · On: What was that, baby?
Fuck me! Jasper is Bella's ex and the one who was driving while drunk sending her father into a coma and killing her mother?! This is just getting better and better. Oh man, when Edward finds out shit is gonna hit the fan. Jasper won't be considered good enough for hsi baby sister.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:28 PM · On: What was that, baby?
I really liked this chapter. I'm glad we got to find out a little more about each character. I love the complicated relationships between all the characters. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:37 PM · On: What was that, baby?
I wasn't sure what the IUD was when she first said it, I thought is was a spelling error, but now that I've read the whole thing the light bulb above my head has gone off. Ruh-roh. That is not good.
I just don't get why she will get all mad when Edward asks her to take the morning after pill. Wouldn't she want to do that or is she looking to get pregnant?
I hope more secrets come out soon.
Loved the chapter as always.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 08:34 AM · On: What was that, baby?
So excited to see this story's new update! Love reading it. Your Edward is really hot! And...Jasper either knows Bella's voice in the background or is pretty sure it is her. So much good stuff built in to this story...FBI and now the IUD. Great job writing.
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:44 AM · On: What was that, baby?
Oh this is getting good!! I can't wait for the Bella Storm as you put it!!
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:37 AM · On: What was that, baby?
I have loved this story since the begining and it just gets better and better.
It's incredible that you made a daunting situation at the hospital become a very hot sex scene...
I send you a cheeky grin and a wave from across the water...
Thank you :)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:27 AM · On: What was that, baby?
I'll just say this...BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
Oh.my.gosh. I think that's the worst thing to say to anyone after they have just had sex. bahahaahahahaahaaha. Goodness.
I really enjoy this story. Please start posting more often =D you know, so I can get full on addicted to it.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 03:37 AM · On: What was that, baby?
Oh slam!!!! Not cool with the cliffie, not cool...but that chapter was awesome. I'm very interested to find out who Bella's fiance is (was?)
You've got to update quicker though, I was sying waiting for this. I love your writing.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 03:34 AM · On: What was that, baby?
Good chapter. I like how you gave some back story w/out a flashback or boring paragraphs. You kept it relevant to the story and quick. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Reviewer: twitilated (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 03:29 AM · On: What was that, baby?
You are my fan fiction idle. Introducing their pasts in such a matter of fact way is perfect for them...no long diatribe just spilling it short and sweet. I like how the story is evolving the pieces falling into place and the concentration of the words + timeline. I am sure everyone tells you this but you really should look at publishing especially with this one and Womanizer. Keep up the great writing, I am so addicted and am so glad I can read this on my crackberry too. A
Reviewer: forbidden bliss (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 02:34 AM · On: What was that, baby?
on the examination table? super hot. Update soon :)
Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 02:21 AM · On: What was that, baby?
OMG, that is my worst nightmare to have the Mirena dislodged!
I had a friend that pulled hers out, thinking it was a tampon string... She said it hurt like the dickens!
Reviewer: McQueen (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
I've seen this story but never clicked on it. Its interesting so far. However.....I have broken my ribs several times and binding them is one of the worst things you can do. All you can do is take pain meds and not move too much. Nothing big and it segwayed into sexy time!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 01:00 PM · On: News
Jasper is 'J' ??? No way!! And he left Bella for Edward's sister (maybe?). Holy shit, holy shit. Love. this. story.
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