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Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Opening Roads
Young, sexy and on the lam. I always think a good blow while driving is sexy as HALE!
It really is sad that Edward has lost two of his past loves. How much bad luck can befall a person before something good happens? Hopefully, Edward has had his share and he and Bella can make things work. They obvioulsy have the chemistry, now they just need the chance.
If we're going to hear from the killers, I'd vote to hear from Laurent this time, but I'll be satisfied whichever POV you choose to give us. As long as the story progresses, I'll be happy. :)
Thanks for posting again, but of course...more soon?!
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Opening Roads
Very CSI. I like how twisted the plot is. Very creative. :)
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Opening Roads
So is it possible that Laurent or James was Irina's boyfriend of 4 years? Is it possible that part of their rampage involved getting back at Edward. Yikes! Love the story that you are crafting!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Opening Roads
.....I'm sort of hoping that James and Laurent die soon or something.
...just putting it out there.
I hate them.
They're going to ruin Edward and Bella. I'm still waiting to see if Bella is knocked up though.
Reviewer: Camimae707 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Opening Roads
Update soon!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Opening Roads
Jeez, that guy has really really bad luck. Great chapter!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Opening Roads
Loved this chapter. Thank you for the bit of insight into Bella and Edward's pasts.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: Lina (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Opening Roads
I'd like to hear what Laurent has to say.
Poor Edward.... He's been through hell
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Opening Roads
So why didn't Bella recognize Rose? Is she not Jasper's sister in this story? Just curious. Still loving this story, btw. :)
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Missed Calls
Oh man, Jasper is was so close!! So I'm guessing that Alice told Rose to warn them so Jasper wouldn't find Bella?
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Opening Roads
Wow! Great chapter!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Opening Roads
Poor Edward! That's a crazy life. This story is getting really juicy!
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Opening Roads
Wow, this story is seriously compelling. It is a wonderful mystery and tale of need. Of course, love Edward and Bella together, like that they can find some comfort together. You're doing an amazing job with this and I can't wait to read more as the pieces of this puzzle unfold.
Reviewer: TwiDi (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Opening Roads
AWE! I loved the chapter... your story is always in my heart... each chapter does something to me... something that I can't seem to get enough of... your stories are my kind of fix ;)
Thanks for the lovely chapter!
Cheers!
Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Opening Roads
This story has me so intrigued...I don'tnormally like suspense and killing in general. This story just seems to be the exception. I'm almost scared to say that I want to know whats going on in Laurents head. He definatly seems much more gruesome than James...but it might be fascinating. no I mean it will be fascinating.
Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 04:11 AM · On: Opening Roads
Wow Edward has had a rough love life. his first girlfriend drives off a bridge, but it couldn't have been just because of Edward...could it? There had to be more.OMG Laurent...ex boyfriend wanted to kill Edward now trailing Edward OMG E. OMG. And we know what happened to Tanya.
These two couldn't have met each other at a more better time. Thanks for the update. Loved it.
Reviewer: angiepie02 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Opening Roads
So creepy i love reading this kinda stuff. Not to sure on JasperBella. Loving Bella/Edward tho!!
Update soon - Can we have an Bella/Edward baby? Pretty please???
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Opening Roads
Ok - now I need a cold shower! Excellent writing BTW!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Opening Roads
Oh God. That's terrible for Edward, it really is. I feel for the guy, I do. Great chapter though!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Opening Roads
Oh God. That's terrible for Edward, it really is. I feel for the guy, I do. Great chapter though!
Reviewer: xxsamanthahalexx (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Missed Calls
two days? like, whole days or half days? -sigh- i was all excited to find out what was gonna happen and everything...
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Missed Calls
So I'm not a camper-I hate being anywhere that doesn't have toilets...I love the stars and I love being outdoors...just not so much at night.
I would quite happily camp out in a sleeping bag with your Edward though =D
More soon?
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Missed Calls
Nice! I can't wait. Now I have to read the Womanizer update too! Wee!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Missed Calls
Way to go Alice! Stalling and sending Rose...I love that girl.
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Missed Calls
Ooh I'm glad that womanixer has priority (cause it's my fave) but OMG they found them! I was not expecting that in this chapter! Oh and it was such a cute moment with Bella and Edward.
Thank god for Rosalie, out of all of them I was really surprised to see that she would be the one to help them! Great chapter hun! I loved it! I'm very excited for more (of this and womanizer...hehe)
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