Next chapter , please . I can't wait .

Reads a bit disjointed but to reveal so much in one chapter it had to be disjointed.

OK, Cliff and hanging on.  More please.

I like your stories a lot. I really do but theirs so much sex in everything. All the time. I thought when i started reading this story there wouldnt be so much in this one. Im following womanizer :) i love it. its understandable i guess because of what she was doing its just your stories are so amazing..i dont understand why you constantly put sexual things in everything that they do..it almost to the point of how can i  understanably respect that they care for each other?and its not just about sex? i mean in this one i know its still early in their relationship and stuff..but still.

Dont get me wrong i love this stroy i really do think i its amazing. :) i hope i dont make you mad.

Hope you update soon.

Cool story.  I definitely wonder what song she was humming.

What the heck was she humming anyway?!

Laurent is truly a black souled person and I hope he gets his due.  I'm curious how he knows where to find them - they're so predictable?

I love how they've sort of "fallen" together under the unfortunate circumstances, but have managed to create something pretty special.  I have done that drive from San Fran to SoCal on 101 and I can totally picture where they are right now...just beautiful.

Thanks for posting again! :X

Author's Response:

She's just humming a song she's heard somewhere.  Think about Laurent's POV.  He said at one point that he couldn't touch Edward because he was put under suicide watch.  As for Laurent knowing where they might be, he's been following Edward since he left Washington and Edward has been camping throughout his trip.  So he thinks he'll be able to figure out where he is heading.

 

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Uh oh. I have a feeling that Bella will not like that question very much.

Please update soon?

WHAT??? Damn you, emarroquin with your shiny twisty cliffies! Thank God you're almost done the next chappie, cause I can't wait for this one!

LOL - a "WHAT?!" escaped my lips and then luckily I read the end notes...whew. Mean cliffie leaver. :)

Laurent - total psycho, but I love that you've made him manipulate James.

Alice/Rose - interesting dynamic

I'm getting nervous that they are being watched by Laurent at the campgrounds, which is totally my "scariest thing ever" - I can't camp anymore...I'm such a chicken and this story is only confirming that maybe I'm not so crazy!

Loved it.

 

“Bella, have you been in a mental institution before?”

 

I think it´s safe to say never in a million years I had seen this question coming lol. Great chapter!!

This is a very impressive story line and concept. I think that we should hear from james and laurent and have some more bella nad edward loving..Ihope that edward is able to handle whatever is coming his was and that bella can face some of her fears....maybe things are meant for them to be together as you said many times fate is definetly playing a major role in this story-line comgrats on a grat paper and i hope to read more of this soon.

Really cool beginning

Two past loves dead - holy hell. As if one isn't enought to screw up his life. Will he ever dare falling for Bella, or will he fear he's got a death carma following his shadow?

This story is just awesome, great job!