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Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 09:24 AM · On: That Song
=[ The end was really sad.
REALLY sad.
But I loved their declaration.
Reviewer: the_real_MrsEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:37 AM · On: That Song
OH MY GOD!!!!! (I sounded like Janice off friends). Anyway I loved it and I can't give you advice on preggo because I don't know what it is but if you can explain I'd be happy to..... Anyway please update soon, you're really good!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love this story too. I still can't remember what inspired me. I think it was a dream. Anyway, preggo means pregnant. Remember they had a little scare that her IUD (a device that is birth control) was dislodged which could lead to pregnancy. That is what I was asking. Should she be pregnant?
E
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:15 AM · On: That Song
Oh man ... great story ... I love how they are all intertwined in some way ... There are a few grammatical errors and spelling ... but nothing extreme ... I love this story ... but by looking at your comments I have the feeling that you are one of those authors who takes a long time ... not that I dont appreciate you taking time to make it worth while ... You do an excellent job and I appreciate it greatly ... I just dont know if I will be able to wait .... I am one of those people who get a series of books and finishes it within a week ... This cliffhanger is going to bother me ... I have exams too ... which doesnt help the studying ... well all I can say is I hope it's not too long a wait for the next chapter ... :) Thanks for the story ... Please write soon ... oh and I dont think Bella should be pregnant because I don't like the idea of her being hunted and pregnant and poor Edward .... no ... it doesn;t seem right ... but if you were to put a pregnancy scare ... well that's different ... oh and I hate James and Laurent ! lol
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:06 AM · On: That Song
i say preggo!
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:06 AM · On: That Song
i say preggo!
Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:44 AM · On: That Song
I think that she should be preggo.
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:25 AM · On: That Song
Ugh, PLEASE don't make Bella pregnant. Although it would add some stress to the situation, neither Bella nor Edward are in a state to raise a child. And when Laurent and James finally catch up with Edward and her (which I know they will), do you really want whatever injuries Bella sustains to cause her another miscarriage? Because if she is going to live through their assault, and she is pregnant, there is no plausible way that the baby would live and even if it did, it would likely sustain alot of damage. Do you really want to put Bella through that again? Plus, I just really don't like "Edward and Bella + Baby" stories.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:06 AM · On: What was that, baby?
Holy cow. This story keeps coming up with new ways to surprise me. I think somewhere in all this though that their bad pasts run into eachothers somehow. Can't wait to figure it out.
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:46 AM · On: That Song
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh snapppers. haha very small world. i like it. very conflicting.
can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: jasperluv (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 02:55 AM · On: That Song
ok this was interesting
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 02:54 AM · On: That Song
I am in love with this story! It is amazing! I love all your stories! :D
ahh the ways you connected all these characters is amazing.
I just wish you updated this story more! ive been waiting for awhile and im happy its here :)
Ohman.. bella pregnant. that'd be crazy and scary because of james and laurant trying to get them and she finds out she pregnant without knowing that their in danger.If you do have her become preganat i just hope it ends well. with the three of them happy :)
cant wait til you update!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:53 AM · On: That Song
Very small world indeed! As to Bella being pregnant or not, I'd vote no for the time being. They are both still too messed up, they are on the run from a couple of ruthless killers, the future is uncertain and they don't have anywhere to settle down right now so that Bella can take care of herself properly. Not a good time right now. But perhaps towards the end of the story when things have calmed down....
Reviewer: JuicyBooteyhh20 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:53 AM · On: That Song
I didn't really get what Jasper was to Bella...?
Author's Response: In chapter three Edward notices a tatoo of the letter J. Bella responds that it was once her best friend turned lover. Jasper and Bella dated throughout high school and college. She was pregant and engaged with him, but the accident happened and it put a strain on their relationship.
In this chapter Edward comes to find that 'J' is Jasper which is his sister's finance.
Hope that helps.
E
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
Haha! I like that Bella is telling EDWARD to breathe...
Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:52 PM · On: That Song
I think she shouldbe pregnant. Although it may seem too coincidental..but if you dont it would be too obvious..hmmm...I think it should depend on how close you're willing to let James and Laurent get. If they get close to hurt the babay thoruh Bella then no she shouldnt be. It would be way to devastating on both of them. But other wise, I think she should be. It might be good way to get them to go home.
Reviewer: Sleuthy (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:31 PM · On: That Song
Ok, I know I already cast my vote on the whole is/isn't Bella pregnant thing, but there was something else I just thought of. I think that if you let Jasper find out that she might be pregnant and then drag out them finding out after that (I could so see Bella refusing to take the test just to piss jasper off), that would cause your Jasper tention without actually having Bella become pregnant.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:05 PM · On: News
Ooh this story is so good. There are a few places though that you could go back in and clean up some grammatical and spelling mistakes. It would make it easier to read.
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Light Up My Life
Ugh, I read that wrong. Please disregard my review, my apologies! This was a fabulous chapter by the way. I love your writing style.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 03:30 PM · On: My Escape
I liked it.
Reviewer: ashes88 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 03:26 PM · On: That Song
OMG she should totally be preggo....more twists
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 03:15 PM · On: That Song
I give my vote to pregnancy...more angst, maybe a reason to stop running away and settle down. some may think is super fast the way they are moving, but i think it was meant to be, you know, with them caring for each other before even finding out who they were (at the psych hospital). So yeah knock her up :) I love every chapter and this was not different, it was great, more secrets revealed. Love the new banner too!
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 03:11 PM · On: That Song
Not pregnant yet. I think Jasper would probably kill Edward and it would be hard for Bella to be pregnant with another man's child before she completely made up with Jasper. Jazz and Bella have to stay friends so that Alice and Bella can be friends.
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 02:31 PM · On: That Song
Please please make her preggo!! It is going to be great for them and will also add even more angst and tension when Laurent finds them and put Bella's life at risk! (yeah, because we all know that this inevitable!)
Now, what is the deal with Jasper? What a jackass! Typical man! He can move on and even get engaged but not Bella! Well, he could pretend that the reason he didn't want Bella involved with Ed was because he thought Ed was a murderer. Now that he knows this is not the case, what is his excuse? His attitude is disgusting and poor Alice, having to see it.
After all Bella is been through he should be the first to feel happy that she was having a bit of fun.
As I said, Jasper is being a bit of a jackass! Who is going to snap him out of it? Alice? Bella or Jacob?? He is better wake up or he will lose them all!
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
I think if I was them I'd have been getting it on 5 minutes ago. Story is good and very interesting so far.
Reviewer: blackheart14 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Introductions
nice but scary... bella almost getting raped i like tha twists!!!!!! :D
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