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Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Light Up My Life
there's a song specifically for people in mental institutions? And Edward knows? because he's a doctor or because he's been in one? I wouldn't be surprised, people who try to commit suicide are placed in one afterwards for mental evaluation and stuff.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Opening Roads
yikes, between the two of them, so many dead people!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Missed Calls
i had goose bumps with the twists that you presented to the readers.
I don't see what the big deal is with Edward having 10K in cash. He was running away and didnt' want to be traced so cash was his option. 10K is not a big deal for a family that can fly on a private jet/or maybe owns a private jet.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:11 AM · On: You Want Me To What?
Yeah, why wouldn't Jasper want Edward with Bella? Edward's also effed up but well, who isn't that has appeared in this story except for Alice? Jasper and Jacob should just go after those serial killers.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 04:39 AM · On: What was that, baby?
hell Plan B, yeah! But that would be really traumatizing for Bella. Yikes. They can't have kids, they're so emotionally effed up!
Bella storm? How about a hurricane Edward? Are we gonna have that too?
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 04:16 AM · On: News
eeekkkk.. Bella's tatoo, "J" is for Jasper? And now, he's with Alice, who's Edward's sister? Yikes!
Bella had a miscarriage 6 mos. ago, from who? from J? that's so sad..but wait, Edward said earlier that he's always been surrounded by couples, but Alice and Bella's "J" have only been together recently though, right?
Leah and Jacob also loved/loves Bella...so many people loving her but the one person she loved left her, that's so unfortunate. I can't wait to read what happened in Bella's past.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
hmm, Bella with a master's degree in psychology but travelling by hitchhiking? Is she trying to find herself too like Edward? Well, seems fast for me too but your explanation is plausible. They're strangers to each other and they feel a pull..it's easier to give in when you think it would just be temporary.
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:43 AM · On: The Pier
greatstory!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:53 AM · On: The Pier
come on write more i was wating for 3 weeks now please your amazing writer
Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
flipping sexy as hell
Reviewer: Beth818 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:12 AM · On: The Pier
please write more soon! I hate waiting!
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 11:17 AM · On: The Pier
Ahhhhh!! Twists!! Please hurry and update.
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 01:31 AM · On: The Pier
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
FREAKINGGGGGGGGGG
GOOOOOOOOOD!!
i LOOOOOVE this story! if i had an award i would give it to you!!! its like csi meets twilights meets porn!!!!
i love itt!!!!!!!!
cant wait for more!!!
<3's for you!!!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:12 PM · On: The Pier
omg.. omg ... OMG ur sory is fuckin great hurry im dying to know what happens
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:29 PM · On: That Song
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
THEY FIGURED IT OUT!!!!
FUCK!!!
YAY!!!
Reviewer: usaprincess242 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:40 AM · On: The Pier
please update soon. your writing has me on th edge of my seat. cant wait for more!
Reviewer: usaprincess242 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:35 PM · On: The Pier
please update soon. your writing has me on th edge of my seat. cant wait for more!
Reviewer: Princess Le Le (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:57 AM · On: The Pier
WOW!!! I love this story and cannot wait for you to post more, it is absolutely awesome!!! Keep writing!!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm hoping to have a new update next week.
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Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:55 AM · On: The Pier
wow.... cliffys r evil, thx
ok, ur like the best writer on this site, i read everything u write, and its like the best things i'v read, womanizer is my fav XD
update soon on all
its weird cuz if jasper just killed james that night 12 years ago, then bella and jasper woulda been happliy married, and edward and tanya would be too
but then again, only bella and edward work out
and the whole marie and anthony thing was soo cute
Author's Response: Ah, someone figured that out. If...and I mean if James had been even imprisoned for attempted rape all those years ago, all their lives would've been much different. Maybe.
Funny how fate works.
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Reviewer: zena25 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:32 PM · On: The Pier
Great story, I read the whole thing in one sitting. Update soon please!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm working on the update this weekend.
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Reviewer: eblove (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:45 AM · On: The Pier
i absolutely LOVE this story. cant wait to read more :)
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:34 AM · On: The Pier
First of, thanks for showing me the chapter that way i didn't have to go look for it. Second of, it's cool how you made some things in one person's life linked to another person 's life. Third of, in a way i'm glad James finally entered the plot again, because i've been anticipating Jame's and Laurent's capture since the beginning of this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Reviewer: Crista Irene (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:56 AM · On: The Pier
Oh my gosh! This story just keeps surprising me! You've seriously thought of every connection possible between these characters. Awesome job!!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:04 AM · On: The Pier
Oh boy! This is crazy!!
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:30 PM · On: The Pier
Oooh I loved it. This was the chapter I had been waiting for. Edward and Jasper confrontation.....more please. And the lemon rocked as well.
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