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Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:00 AM · On: You Want Me To What?
Darn you asked my questions for me. Well that Laurent thing threw me for a loop. So that should make the story more interesting.
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:37 AM · On: What was that, baby?
You're not seriously going to have him ask that are you. That would be truly and honestly fucked up. Course then again that seems to be Edward's flaw. Say something stupid hurt Bella's feelings. Good story!
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:17 AM · On: News
Ok so the suicide attempt had nothing to do with her parents. I'm assuming again Jasper is the father.
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:53 AM · On: My Escape
No it's fine i think i picked up on the relationships. Jasper was Bella's ex. I'm guessing James is the murderer/rapist. And as to why they both attempted suicide, my guess is Bella did it because of her parents, while Edward because something happened with his girfriend either her death or thier fight i haven't figured out which. Good story so far.
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
Nope not too fast for me. I do agree they are seeking comfort and i personally find nothing more comforting than physical contact. Though I was expecting James to break it up. I noticed you said Remy One when it is actually Remi Zero.
Author's Response: Thanks and yes sometimes comfort can be found in being physical. Yes I noticed that I got the name wrong just the other day when I listened to the song again. Thanks for pointing that out.
Erica
Reviewer: BiteMePlease (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Out of the Darkness
holy....... crap....... that was SO good! I loved it and adored it! the story line is sooooooo good and if you don't post soon..... I don't know what I'll do. So, post soon please please please please please! Love love love!
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Introductions
So what did Edward do that caused him to be on the run? Good chapter.
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Out of the Darkness
Holy crap that was amazing! I love how everything is so involved and tied together.
Reviewer: aussietrueblue (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Out of the Darkness
loved it
More please
Reviewer: chaser1000 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Introductions
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Out of the Darkness
ahhhh!!!!! yay!!!! james is dead!!! fucking kate!!! watabiatch!!!
OK again, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
soooooooo good on soooooooo many different levels!!!!
cant wait for more of this as well as more of your other stories!!! U ROCK MY FREAKING SOCKS OFF!!! :))
MAJOR <3's for you!!!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Out of the Darkness
WOW...seriously fricking WOW...you thought of everything...this story so has me on the edge of my seat!
Everyone is connected somehow...and fate just brought Edward and Bella together...the whole anthony and marie bit *sigh*
They are so Romeo and Juliet these 2.
I almost thought she had died too or seriously injured :S
Jasper is STILL pissing me off...he is so controlling...i had to LOL when Bella told him Edward is too nice. In other words Jasper Fuck Off!! I SOOO completely Agree! i Would have said the SAME thing to him.
Even Alice is pissed at him...............oh and he is such a manipulative asshole...he switched her pills WTF!! :O and then made her sign over her power of attorney to him and then he had her committed and didn't even listen to her pleas for help when she was in there!!? WTF!
Thank goodness she did have Edward there. *sigh*
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:43 PM · On: The Pier
Great chap! The Lemon..niiice ;)
The Drama on the pier *sigh* Jasper is such a prick...the talk of the tat..nice on Edward's part to Grin bigger than J and to mention YES he has seen it! *smirk* Take That J!
and of course the bastard still loves bella..plus he feels guilty..psshh...watever :S
Damn james been in this for Awhile...12 yrs ago and now again :O
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Who You Gonna Call?
DUH She is your soulmate!!!
so much info...brain overload lol.
Jasper is still an ass :D haha
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:02 PM · On: That Song
small world indeed :S......I have NEVER been so pissed to read about Jasper before...im usually pissed at Jake...you've done well to turn the tables :)
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Light Up My Life
I LOVE the playfulness between the two of the :D....Between the flashing and slapping asses lol and Edward just realized that he can't live without her.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Opening Roads
:O Poooooorrr Edward :'(
*sigh*
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Missed Calls
WOW Rose Shocked the HELL outta me!! She actually helped Edward *gasp* Shocking! GREAT!! cuz i did NOT want asshole jasper finding them and interrupt their vacation :D
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:04 PM · On: You Want Me To What?
FUCK Jasper! He NEEDS to mind his own bees wax! LOL childish i know but shit....he has caused her an enormous amount of pain and loss!
Edward is a good boy :P.....biased...yes haha
Reviewer: Princess Le Le (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Out of the Darkness
Awesome chapter!!! Loved it, can't wait for more! And, I am so excited to find out what is going to happen between them after Edward's confession!!!! So, happy about the new chapter!!! :)
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:05 AM · On: What was that, baby?
DRAMA!!!!!!!!!! Ye-ahhh and good shit too! lol
Jasper soooooo heard her voice!
and WOW to the Doctor's office Lemon! NIIIICE ;)
and OH FUCK the IUD is dislodged!! hahahaha that is beyond hilarious!!
and the storm that is Bella is gonna be goooooooooooood :D
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 10:35 AM · On: News
oooh So Much DRAMA!!!!!!...........J stands for JASPER! :O and his new fiance is Alice! :O what a small world!! omg im so loving this....atleast so far jake ain't so bad and now im kinda hating on Jasper! the bastard lol........then again if it wasn't for him, she'd never have met Edward :) :D
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:30 AM · On: My Escape
I am truly enjoying your story!....awesome Lemon! really well done. Also the storyline seems interesting enough to keep me glued to the screen.
Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Out of the Darkness
Wow. I agree, very Romeo and Juliet. But it fits this story. I like it so much, cannot wait for more! And I'm glad James is gone. :]
Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Out of the Darkness
wow i didn't see that one comming. Laurent killed Irena. Wow, who would have guessed that. Where is Emmett and Rose? Why aren't they in on the drama. Does Charley wake up? Does Jasper and Alice make up?
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