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Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chase
Great story! Just read it all tonight. Feel like I'm going blind now, but it was worth it. I can't wait to read more, so write more soon!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chase
Hoping the flashing light vehicles will catch the sedan and stop Laurent. Bella and Edward appear to be safe for the moment in Las Vegas. With the others heading to San Diego. Since Laurent followed the four of them towards San Diego, the opposite direction from actual location. Did Edward register under his real name? Won't they be able to trace him through his credit card for room and wedding bands? Hoping they will catch or shoot to kill Laurent to end the terror. Also wanting to hear which chapel they get married in Vegas. Romantic gondola ride after the ceremony or riding the gondola to the chapel in the Venetian for their wedding. Either both are romantic. Waiting for Bella and Edward to be safe together. Jasper understand fully that Bella belongs to Edward now. Doesn't matter about his previous reputation, Bella has chosen Edward. Jasper lost all rights to her decisions and life when he left and turned towards Alice. Alice is still angry at Jasper won't even talk to him. Jasper has a lot of making up to do to both women. Jacob is the only calm and sane one at this time. He's worried about Bella also. He loved her as much as Jasper. Grew up with her as well. Glad he told Edward that Bella would come back to him.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chase
That was fabulous, I've missed you!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chase
awww i love it - i love how they are together i feel like they are really soul mates (u really made it feel like they belong together i love it) - that was funny with jasper lol i dont kno why - canyway cant wait for next chapter - good writing
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chase
I love his purposal, so sweet. I have to say, total heart attack when the the car was shot at, and I am still worried Laurant has Alice. Where is she shoudn't she at least check in with Edward! Am I the only one freaking out she is missing? SO glad you updated totally love your story, and I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chase
that was so sweet- I am scared of what is going to happen next- I know that pyscho is going to find them, isn't he?
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chase
AHHH!!! YAY!!!!
Reviewer: jlugo (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chase
Awwww thats the sweetest proposal :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chase
Great chapter!
They are getting married? That is awesome! XD
That was a very good plan of Jacob's. :)
Please update soon?
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 04:26 PM · On: In You I Trust
gaa! i miss this story like you wouldnt believe!!!
please update soon!
<3's for you!!!
Reviewer: Chuckles (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Missed Calls
I love the story, but you use fuck to much. i love the word, it just gets annoying when it's in every other sentence. Some words don't make sense, but that's easy to fix. awesome story!
Reviewer: bmccall2068 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:08 PM · On: In You I Trust
You have to update! i love this story!
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 03:29 PM · On: That Song
ooohhh... that dream was just plain old mean, I loved it!
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:23 AM · On: You Want Me To What?
ooohhh.. i can't wait to see the reactions when these connections are made for the characters!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 11:40 PM · On: In You I Trust
Excellent story. Enjoyed from start to this chapter. Full of suspense and tension. Now one stalker is dead and one to go. Edward has his hands full trying to keep her safe now. Laurent has been following them every step. Going away will only make them alone and vunerable again. But Bella doesn't want to return to Forks yet. But she needs to go home for her dad, her voice might bring him out of the coma. Leah told her dad was more responsive in the last week. Waiting on bated breath for rest of the chapters. Update soon please.
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:03 PM · On: In You I Trust
Mmm....nice chapter!...
Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:41 PM · On: My Escape
um...spelling perhaps? or grammar?
Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:34 PM · On: My Escape
um...spelling maybe? but hey, the lemons were good enough.
Reviewer: katyt22 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Introductions
hey I am from Eureka so that was sort of cool. :) loving it so far. thanks
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:25 PM · On: In You I Trust
You are so the master of twisted, amazing shit!!!! Keep going!!!
by the way, how the hell do you write so many damn stories at the same time???
Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:01 AM · On: In You I Trust
you're story is REALLY good. i wish more people would read it. it's so interesting and complicated...complicated in a great way!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:33 PM · On: What was that, baby?
Geez! You sure know how to stir the drama-pot!!! It's gonna boil over!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:22 PM · On: News
ooh! that's some heavy shit!!!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
Too fast is okay :)
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Introductions
Nice beginning!
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