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Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Insert Coastal City Here
Wow, that was fast. And Bella's pretty bold, lol. But I like it! Another great chapter.
Reviewer: ElspethGordie (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Home
Great story! I just found it and love it! I'm glad she's pregnant--(don't worry about the haters) Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Home
Great chapter. Glad they went back to Charlie. Yay Bella's pregnant! I love the idea :) They're gonna be so cute. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Home
YAY!!!!!! WHoo-hoo!!!!
If some won't like it, tough! It's Perfect for this story! Eeee I'm SO Happy!!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Home
Aww a little baby in the works :) I think it's a cute idea. From great tragedy spawns new hope :)
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Home
I am glad she is pregnant. Given the chaos she and Edward have had to endure in their past and present they deserve some happiness. We all deserve a little bit in life. Thankd for the post. oh and I really like Leah and Jacob in this story. Hope to hear more from Charlie soon. Thanks
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Home
This was great! I loved everything about it!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Doing Vegas
Oh no! I'm happy Charlie woke up though. :)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Home
Hard on Bella to return home to see Charlie. It had been so long since she had talked to him. So much had happened to Bella. Meeting Edward was the best thing. Talking with Charlie went fairly well until he noticed her wrist. He wanted to know everything. Both apologized for not being there when the other needed them. Charlie told Edward to run. Take Bella and leave. She's not safe here. Laurent will know that Bella will return to see her father now that he is awake. Jacob and Leah helped Bella purchase a bed and a couch for their new cottage. The safe house arranged by Aro and Jacob. Bella finally dealing with her basic fears after James. Edward holding her tight and comforting her throughout the night. Definitely scares me that she is so vulnerable. The longer she remains near her father, she can be tracked and found. Edward will keep her safe with his life. Is Jacob having plain clothes agents around the house to protect them?
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Home
Yey, they're gonna have a baby. Although i've enjoyed reading these chapters, i can't wait for more action, when Laurent gets back in the picture. Please update soon. :-D
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Doing Vegas
great chapter plz update soon!!!!
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Doing Vegas
OMG!! What's wrong with Bella. Please update soon i so can't wait for more.
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Doing Vegas
Great chapter, really hot!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Doing Vegas
Wow....that chapter was HOTT!!!!
Almost done?? *sigh*
Ohh I don't know what to wish for! Bella preggers--or no. Gah the pressure
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Doing Vegas
This was great chapter!
I hope Bella and her father will be ok...
Looking forward to your next update!
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Doing Vegas
I love those two together. It is heartwarming. The Jasper Alice issue is very interesting. I never really read stories where their relationship has issues. It actually has piqued my interest. I also am eager to see how the Laurant situation is handled. Thanks for the post
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 01:43 AM · On: Doing Vegas
Yay an update! God how I've missed this story. I loved reading about our newlyweds basking in their post-marital bliss :) Glad Charlie's awake, if only he waited a few more days for Bella to get back. And is Bella pregnant or not? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 01:42 AM · On: Introductions
I've only read the first chapter but awesome start! You've already got me hooked!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Doing Vegas
Edward and Bella enjoying Las Vegas after their wedding ceremony and their family. Alice showed up for the wedding which is wonderful. Alice returned home with the family. Alice still isn't acknowledging Jasper. Wonder if she'll ever forgive him. What a life, room service, nice restaurants, great shows, sunbathing by the pool, and etc.. Jacob had planned on bringing Bella and Edward home to Washington in a couple of days. While paying the slots and winning a huge pot Jacob called and said Charlie woke up. Charlie didn't handle it very well. The hospital staff had to sedate him to calm him. It's now an emergency to get Bella home so she could be near him when he awoke the next time. Charlie still hasn't learned of Renee's death. The idea of moving up their timeline to return to Washington won't be as secretive as originally planned. Laurent will be watching Bella's family (Charlie) just waiting for Bella to return. Laurent isn't finished with Edward and Bella yet. Looking forward to new chapter of trip home and seeing Charlie.
Reviewer: sheknitsnicely (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 12:44 AM · On: Doing Vegas
Ah man, great update! Some shmexing (a lot - obviously we love the more we get) and some emotion too. Nice. Looking forward to the next and the homecoming and seeing what Laurent has up his sleeve! - skn x
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Vegas, baby
Great chapter please update soon!!!
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Vegas, baby
Great chapter and now I am nervous. Please tell me there is a HEA. Love the story.
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:27 AM · On: Vegas, baby
great story! can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Vegas, baby
Great chapter. Glad Bella and Edward are getting married finally and everyone's together again. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Vegas, baby
Very scary how their lives are all intertwined! Thanks for the recap - it was appreciated! Looking forward to the wedding!
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