I can't believe he made them do that...I love Bella...she is so awesome in this ending! I can't wait until we see who the 3rd is but I wanna bet that it is either her Dad or Jasper.

omg u need 2 finish this 

 

well really the obvious which guard did L kill, and is the baby ok. but also everything with jasper and alice... i feel like bella needs to have a talk with alice or something so alice can get her head on straight, and same goes for jasper having a talk with edward abut how much has changed... idk i feel like their such a big couple that it just should be resolved before the end.... it would also be great to know the sex of the baby (ies?) lol i know you have a thing for twines soooo...

great updates please please update soon!!!

Bella sure has a lot of spunk.  Still talking back at Laurent. Keeping him on his toes.  Not knowing what will come out of her mouth or what she will do to him.  Edward being bound to the chair watching as Laurent touches her cheek and threatens her with his knife and the gun.  After Bella's head butt with Laurent he shot Edward below his knee.  Yikes!!! Talk about major pain for the man.  Blood flowing with his body taped to the chair with hands and ankles bound.  Even his mouth was duct taped.  Edward watching the interaction between Laurent and Bella.  Fear clutching him at every word or movement.  Bella and Edward both killing time hoping to spread out whatever Laurent had planned in order for Jacob to arrive when he wasn't contacted by the guard out of their home.  Laurent was lied to last chapter and he thought he had more time so he was like a cat playing with a mouse.  Giving an inch with hope of survival and then clamping down again.  Repeating as necessary to draw out the pain, fear, tension, repulsion, and threat of killing them.  They both knew he had the upper hand, but neither Bella or Edward were giving up easy.  Each moment both were scheming ways of surviving this horror.  Laurent was one sick creep, he whispered to Bella that he wanted to watch them make love and he would kill them both on the brink of release.  Bella's hands were tied and Laurent put them over Edward's neck.  Bella climbed onto his lap.  Edward was trying to figure what was going on.  When Bella told him what a perverted sick person.  With all the stress and fear for both Bella, the baby, and himself he was having a difficult time having an erection.  Laurent threatened if he didn't get moving he would shoot them both now.  Bella said he needed his hands.  So Laurent cut through his ties.  He already had on ankle removed while Bella doctored up his wound. With her toes she worked on the other bound ankle/leg.  Trying everything she could to save them both.  Bella kept encouraging Edward as she rode him.  Both were getting closer and Bella started to count.  On the count of three their plan was to rush Laurent in surprise.  Bella jumped towards the bed and grabbed the gun.  Edward's leg was released by Bella.  So he wasn't confined in any way.  He dove head first and punched Laurent.  Edward and Laurent fought for the gun.  Edward with his legs pushed Laurent back and had the gun.  Laurent came after Edward with his knife, when three shots were heard.  One in the heart, one in the gut, and one between his ribs.  Surprise Surprise Laurent you're not as smart or as careful as you thought you were.  You were outsmarted by your prey.  They survive and you die.   Hurrah!!!  Thank goodness Charlie taught his daughter how to defend herself and how to shoot a gun.  The stalled Laurent enough help was due to arrive at any minute and it happened.  They were able to act as a team with silent communication to overcome all his devious plans to kill them both in his psycho induced justification.  Looking forward to the last chapter to learn all the ins and outs to complete the mystery.

WoW! Glad Bella had the kill shot! Her daddy will be proud!

Wish her final words to him woulda included something about the fact that she's pregnant. Ha--that woulda shocked the crapm outta him!

Ohh I can' wait til the next chappie! Tho I hope it wasn't Jake who died. I like him in this story, & with Leah

Wow. Great chapter. I loved how they met in the mental institution and didn't even realize it until now. And you're doing an amazing job with the plot!

Beautifully terrifying chapter.  Laurent is such a sicko.  Bella is flipping awesome for getting him in the heart.  Nobody messes with her family and gets away with it. It was a really good chapter.  I like how they reminisced, and poured out their hearts. 

Wow!  I thought the J was Jacob, not Jasper.  Nice twist!

wow wild ride of a chapter. But I have to say that I loved I am hooked on this story and I can not wait to see what will happpen next.

Thank You for the quick update. What a great chapter, and Laurent's character was so creepy and twisted. I can't believe he made them have sex in front of him what a sicko !!!

I cannot wait for the ending and to find out who the other shooter was. I think it was Jasper or maybe Charlie ?!?!?!

so damn intense but it great!!!