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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 13 - What now?

Oh no wow these two have alot to compete with!  Can't wait for more post again soon!

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Preparations

Edward does Mutton Busting, right? LOL. DJ

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Preparations

Edward does Mutton Busting, right? LOL. DJ

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 - What now?

oh no, this is gonna make her pull away from him even more......

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 13 - What now?

Edward was serious about her moving to Texas, Bella was the one who thought it was too soon.  He wants to try to make a long distance relationship work.  Great job of hanging in there to convince her.  At least being with the other rodeo families she is able to see that it works with others.  The reason Edward made the mental mistake wasn't because of Bella it was because he was angry at his sisters for interferring with his relationship with Bella.  He was concerned that their interference might have planted too many doubts into Bella's mind that might cause his relationship and happiness with Bella to fail.  Even his sisters that morning in the lobby knew that he was pretty upset with them and that could cause him to have a bad ride.  Bella, of course, will take the blame on herself and be another reason to start withdrawing from him.  Which will only cause him more mental anguish to cause harm in future rides.  Edward needs to make her understand what upset him was that his sisters need to butt out of their business.  They need to make the rules and build their relationship and how it will work whether it's in Texas, on the road, or long distance.  Edward won't ride well without Bella being strong in his corner and in his heart.

Reviewer: Angie8776 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 13 - What now?

Thanks for the update! Is Bella the cause? I can't wait to find out what happens next. Love this story!

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 13 - What now?

oh now! here she goes blaming herself....worry she will put the relationship to an end if she does that!

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 13 - What now?

glad u are back cant wait for more :D

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Reality Check

Someone is all doom and gloom.  Kinda goes with canon Bella.  I guess I understand where you are coming from in this story.  It is hard to just damn the torpedos and full speed ahead.  What is up next?  I just found this story and I like it a lot.  A little different twist on the E&B theme, and I love your Alice.  Too often I am turned off by the pushy self-centered person that ALice is portrayed as, and your Rose is a breath of fresh air to.  The super bitch has been done to death.  It also goes without saying that I would love to go to the Calgary Stampeed.  I will have to put it on my bucket list.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Reality Check

Squeeee omg omg omg I was wondering when he would come to that resolution..But will Bella be willing to move that far away from her dad???

Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Reality Check

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! love it !! i just wonder if Bella will actually go!!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Reality Check

She really doesn't like her job, or her life anyway....what's to lose?

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Late Nights Early Mornings

I think Edward is right and Bella is simply going to have to become part of his pre-ride ritual!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Reality Check

Can't blame Bella for feeling a little doubtful regarding what might happen based on her previous experiences. Only differences and it's a big one is she's dealing with the Cullen clan.  As Rosalie alluded to Cullens fall fast and hard.  When they fall that's it there is no going back.  Bella is afraid she has changed Edward from his previous devotion to his sport. In reality she has woken him to what life is really all about.  He has the talent that he has taught himself and perfected over the years.  Practice yes is necessary, but it's not something that has to be constant 24/7.  He can have what he has seen with his brother Emmett and his sister Alice a balance of their sport/profession and a life.  Bella has opened his eyes to that possibility.  I know Edward's serious about the request to come to Texas. I knew it was coming.  I'm kinda glad Bella brought the subject of their future up now rather than wait for the last day.  It gives her time to think about it and make the right choice.  Move to Texas and come back to Stampede Days and enjoy them with Edward whether he's competing or not that will just depend on the circumstances at the time.  She already fits into his family nicely.  The changes is Edward are all good, it's what his family was hoping.  They have all been so worried about him before he met her. 

Enjoy your time and will be patiently awaiting the next installment and beautiful Bella's response.

Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Reality Check

I say go to Texas and don't look back

Reviewer: Angie8776 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Reality Check

I know she is going to be scared but she has to say yes! She can be with Edward and she can teach again. Although I think I would just follow his fine ass around but that is just me.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Reality Check

if Calgary already has certain bad memories attached to it then maybe some new scenery is in order...i say go for it Bella!

Reviewer: ChannyMaddy (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Late Nights Early Mornings

It's so funny to read this today! I'm watching the Bareback competition at the Greeley Stampede! Too funny 

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2012 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Late Nights Early Mornings

Whoo-hoo!  Yee-ha!  Wonder just how long it'll be before they both start thinking about how they can make this temporary thing a LOT more permanent!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2012 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Late Nights Early Mornings

Squeee talk about a couple wild rides teeheee love love love

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Late Nights Early Mornings

loved it! so happy for him!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Late Nights Early Mornings

Edward's a great rider in more ways than one. Great night with Bella but embarrassing for her the next morning. Thank goodness for Rosalie and her willingness to help by going with Bella home to change to rejoin the family. Non judgmental. Edward saved himself a bullet there.  First place at the end of day one without constant practice and stress. Edward has found a new per-rodeo event routine.  A good night of serious loving with Bella. Looks like he's got himself a new way of life and outlook on bareback riding preparations. Looking for celebrations Cullen style for day one victories.  Enjoy your vacation and we'll hear from you when you come back.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 10 - A Day At The Pool

Loved Edward with the kids - as if he needed more advertising for his gorgeous self.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2012 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 10 - A Day At The Pool

SQUEEEEE  OMG OMG OMG way to leave it hanging hard teehee

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 10 - A Day At The Pool

loved Edward playing with the children in the pool.  so cute.  He will make a great dad.  He deserved all the teasing Bella gave him in his room after the teasing in the hot tub with those old men.  Looking forward to the next chapter for hopefully the continuation of the hard sexy cowboy loving and Edward in his bronco riding events.

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