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Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 12:10 PM · On: The Wedding Night

All I can say is wow! What a fantastic night for them both; the sacrifice was so worth it! The tension was great here! Where is your 4th chapter? Please finish this as soon as you are able! I had fun reading this!

Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 11:47 AM · On: It's All About Control

Mercy! This was incredible! Thank goodness for Carlisle's foresight and empathy! I like how Carlisle created each clone with a slightly different bit of Bella's personality so Edward could fully experience however Bella might react---very novel!

Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 11:25 AM · On: A Solution

As soon as I read about the hair strands, i knew this was about DNA and cloning! Wow! What an idea that allows Edward to learn about Bella without using another woman ruthlessly! This so much like science fiction or some of today's technology to create healthy cells to fight disease! Excellent imagination at work here!

Reviewer: Zakaira (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:49 AM · On: A Solution

I so thought Carlisle had brought corpes home from the hospital!

Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:09 PM · On: The Wedding Night

Very good.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 02:58 PM · On: The Wedding Night

Very interesting proposition from Carlisle. Bella clones. Still trying to decide in my mind if Edward was cheating or not. But practicing before he approached Bella was necessary. He needed to know the extent of the feelings, scents, and desires of both parties. No one wanted the real Bella to be hurt during their honeymoon. Looking forward to the last chapter.

Reviewer: insanecellist (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:00 AM · On: A Solution

totally not the crack i expected when i read the summary. this should be interesting.

Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:27 PM · On: The Wedding Night

I sure would like to see another chapter to this. I have been reading your stories today and hope that yo have not given up on them. I would love to see some new chapters to some of your stories! You are a really good writer and I need more chapters! :)

Disney Vampire

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 05:52 AM · On: The Wedding Night

a couple of days? can't wait to read the rest of this

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 05:52 AM · On: The Wedding Night

a couple of days? can't wait to read the rest of this

Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:53 AM · On: It's All About Control

this story is VERY unique and pretty scary at the beginning but the it gets even better :)

Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:06 AM · On: A Solution

OH MY GOD....I can't stop laughing....never expected this. Interesting, can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: joyful (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:12 AM · On: The Wedding Night

This was a great story. Well done.

Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 04:45 PM · On: A Solution

Crazy ... but intriguing. I will read on!

Reviewer: ImageIdea (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:00 AM · On: A Solution

he made clones?? hahaahaha!

Reviewer: wideyess (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:43 PM · On: A Solution

Although this story was pretty disturbing to me on so many levels. It did make me laugh out loud a few times. "They have no vocal capabilities beyond moaning" LMAO

Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:39 AM · On: The Wedding Night

one of my favorites waiting with baited breathe believe me now it smells like bait! please finish a 75

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:52 AM · On: The Wedding Night

great job i love this story.

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:42 AM · On: The Wedding Night

That was so weird and crazy and just plain GREAT!!! LOL, Bravo!!!!

Reviewer: jasper_rox (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 06:27 AM · On: The Wedding Night

omg, that was so scary! i thought he would kill her for sure! i was so nervous, lol

Reviewer: twilight_pasychoe (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:06 AM · On: It's All About Control

ok, don't take any of this personally. Whew. sigh.

Alright good--just totally bizarre. Good theory though, could Totally Happen in Twilight World. Just....weird thought, Bella #1, #2, #3.....

Reviewer: twilight_pasychoe (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:59 AM · On: A Solution

Huh...weird. Keep going.....

:)....;).....

Reviewer: mitihifi (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 03:18 AM · On: A Solution

wow, thats a twist!!! cant wait to see where this takes us...

Reviewer: bella93 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 04:08 AM · On: The Wedding Night

IDK if my other one found you but i just wanted to say that...that was AWESOME!!! you should really think about contueing (idk how to spell) this..you are a great writer.

Reviewer: where9 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 05:10 AM · On: The Wedding Night

I know people don't usually like this kind of stuff, but can you please add some angst in it? I really like this story so far! Please update soon!

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