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Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 (One Shot)

Melancholy and quietly emotional. Nicely done.

 



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Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 (One Shot)

Yea pretty sad. Well written, yes. But unsure about her love towards Nessie, I would have thought she would care more.  I see where you were coming from, the whole knowing Jake longer but still. Anywho, good story, don't quite know where you are going to go with it though but I'm willing to find out.  



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Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 (One Shot)

  'Who would have guessed that the miracle of her conception and her rapid growth would continue at a rate that would kill her within five years' time?(...)  By five and half, she was like a withered old woman. Her heart gave out before she’d reached the age of six.'


  'They knew where I went, but as long as I kept the ghosts in the graveyard and didn’t bring them home with me, no one questioned my almost daily jaunts.(...)        I would go back the next day and the day after that. I knew this as surely as I knew I would live forever. And some day, I would face my friend and let him go.'


  Man, that was sad.        :_(


  But very well done.



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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2012 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 (One Shot)

Ok, not a good story to read when your feeling down....but I must say your story was beautifully written... heartbreakingly beautiful.

Dixie



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Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2012 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 (One Shot)

Very sad but beautiful - I think that the story is exactly what would have happened if Nessie didn't live - you got it exactly right!!!   thanks for the story!



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