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Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 04:41 AM · On: With Great Restraint

Ahh, very interesting.... I love Tanyas mind. :) 

Reviewer: modern_audrey (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 05:41 PM · On: With Great Restraint

Fun story!  I enjoyed Tanya until her last little offer near the end--sexual creature/old friend or not, it's just beyond tacky to say something like that to a man while dancing at his wedding.  Kind of spoiled her for me.

Reviewer: boulderpa (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 08:11 PM · On: With Great Restraint

I LOVE this!

Reviewer: saroya (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:50 AM · On: With Great Restraint

Never thought of this missing part before, it's great.  perfectly fit right into the story.  I love it! 

 

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:54 PM · On: With Great Restraint

This was awesome! I love Edward's POV and so few people do it successfully :]

<3

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 06:59 PM · On: With Great Restraint

WOW! Great work! LOVE the E POV!!!!

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:09 PM · On: With Great Restraint

OH MY GOD!!!!! That would have fit PERFECTLY within Breaking Dawn. That was brilliantly done! Wonderful! 

Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:48 PM · On: With Great Restraint

Protective Edward is so hot!

Reviewer: rubiesymusica (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 02:21 PM · On: With Great Restraint

Oh I so had never thought of these questions of  missing scenes before I started reading FFs. Great one! I was laughing and blushing all the time...

Reviewer: Yvi-sama (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:47 PM · On: With Great Restraint

I liked this very much, thank you for writing :-)

Reviewer: kimberlesk (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:40 AM · On: With Great Restraint

That Tanya is a naughty one, isn't she? Thank you, this was a really good premise to explore and you've done it extremely well!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 02:48 PM · On: With Great Restraint

I love how you tied the two events together. - how both conversations ended up in the same place. Your stories always ring true!

Reviewer: tiggy616 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:24 AM · On: With Great Restraint

Another wonderful story!!  I love your writting and look forward to read more of your stories!! 

Reviewer: hermeyb (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 09:39 AM · On: With Great Restraint

This was excellent - I love your portrayal of Tanya - most writers make her out to be almost vicious in her claim on Edward, but I think this is much more in cannon.

Reviewer: WakingSky (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 06:55 PM · On: With Great Restraint

Good job...

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 05:13 PM · On: With Great Restraint

 

Great addition to the books!

Reviewer: crmom (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 12:57 PM · On: With Great Restraint

I love this, great job! You are an amazing writer. It is nice to see Edward's dilemma from his perspective.

Reviewer: bellaNedwardfan (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:22 PM · On: With Great Restraint

I loved it.

 

Brandy

Reviewer: letmesign (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:37 AM · On: With Great Restraint

Awesome, awesome one shot! I love reading the things you write, seriously.

Reviewer: spaniard (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 07:55 AM · On: With Great Restraint

You write Edward wonderfully.  I particularly loved the transition from Tanya’s memory to the present and how you pushed the dialogue from three different points of view together.  It was a great demonstration of how Edward must deal with all of those perspectives every day.

This was one of my favorite reactions in Breaking Dawn.  I really love it from Edward’s point of view too! 

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:55 PM · On: With Great Restraint

Perfect, as always, Blondie.

Reviewer: icy cold (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:54 PM · On: With Great Restraint

I enjoyed Edward's conversation with Tanya!  And how clever to have it mirror Bella's chat with Jacob.  The little side snippets which added to Edward's distraction were also fun.  Mike Newton--ha!

Reviewer: Mila (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 06:04 AM · On: With Great Restraint

That is  a really cool idea!

 

Very well charachterized.

Reviewer: Titch22 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 10:09 AM · On: With Great Restraint

Great story. I can imagine this being very much like what he was thinking and it was so nice of Tanya to try and help.

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 07:36 AM · On: With Great Restraint

I. Love. Jealous. Edward. 

I love the parallel with the scene in the book.  I think you did a great job of showing Tanya trying to put the pieces together, too. Great characterization all around.



Author's Response:

MS and BD gave us a lot of insight into Tanya's character.  It'll be interesting to see what Stephenie includes in the twilight saga book (if it ever comes out).

As always, love your comments, Strider!

blondie

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