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Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Harvest Ball
oh no! that's so horrible! what happened??? did she die of an aneurysm??
Reviewer: axadams (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2012 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 16: Present, Past, Preparations
Well NOW it's hot in here ! Good grief, and then you add Neruda, I am just about melting.
A bit worried about Tanya, I wouldn't be surprised if she turns up at the ball, but she might just be the one surprised when she see's how gorgeous Bella is and how Edward can't take his eyes off her...
Great chapter, thanks.
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Harvest Ball
Great. Can't wait to see where this is going to go next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! This definitely changes things a bit, as suddenly their little bubble of happiness gets tragically popped. It will be interesting to see how they cope.
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 16: Present, Past, Preparations
Wow - excellent chapter!!!!!!
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: The End?
hurray for Bella I love strong Bella good job
Author's Response: So I am more than six months late on this review! I didn't see it until now (that happens to me a lot on this site for some reason), but thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 16: Present, Past, Preparations
Ok, the she devil Tanya had better not show up and ruin their night. They're going to be very late..aren't they????
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 16: Present, Past, Preparations
Nice reaction!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 1: The End?
whew! i almost had a heart attack. i thought he'd figure it out! that would be the first!
Author's Response: No heart attacks, LOL!! Sorry for the six-month delay in replying... I just saw this today! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter and hope you like the rest of their journey :)
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 16: Present, Past, Preparations
OMG that was great. Can't wait to see if they make it to the ball! Please update soon waiting in suspense for the next chapter
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 16: Present, Past, Preparations
*fans self* i think its very hott in here! Damn!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 16: Present, Past, Preparations
Neruda is quite erotic! I wonder if Rosalie is betting on the ball or the bed?
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 16: Present, Past, Preparations
It just got VERY hot in here! WOW!
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
I loved Dinner With the Cullens, but Charlie and Bella was Pure Perfection.
Author's Response: Thanks, Susan! That exchange between Bella and Charlie got me all choked up as well.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
That was great! You had things built up, then relieved, then built up again! I loved the way it turned out! Can't wait to see Edward's reaction!
Author's Response: Thanks soooo much!!! I was really nervous about this chapter, but I think it came off well :)
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
Sweet chapter! I really liked Charlie's assessment of everything. Wonderfully written! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank YOU!! I always thought Charlie was underused in canon, and I liked exploring his paternal side in this chapter :)
Reviewer: Lisre (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
Love coming your way. A very good story. I liked the original start. This Chapter was fun, and I am looking forward to read the rest of your story.
Author's Response: I love LOVE, hehehe. Thanks for the review!! I'm glad you've stuck with me so far, and I hope you continue to enjoy their journey. There's lots more to come!
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
What a novel explanation for why the Cullens are so similar. You really had me before Charlie started talking. I like this Charlie and his acceptance of Edward. Of course I usually like Charlie in most stories I read. This is one of my favorite Charlies.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I gave a lot of thought to what Carlisle would say, and then I thought, "He's a doctor! Surely he can make something up."
I also thought that if Charlie truly loves Bella the way I believe he does, then he would have to admit that she loves Edward and not stand in their way. It made my heart smile to write this chapter, and I'm glad you like my Charlie :) :)
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
Totally thrilled when I saw the update. Cool twist about the secret being kept. Lived how he questioned them. Can't wait to see what the next chapter is about
Author's Response: YAY! I think Bella needed Charlie to care about what was going on in her life. And I'm glad that they worked things out in the end.
Next chapter will be up soon. I'm preparing it for my Beta as we speak :) :)
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
thank goodness Bella didn't pass out due to nerves.....lol. Charlie made me cry ;( very sweet moment :)
Author's Response: LOL!!! I know, right? I considered that, and then I thought, "Nah, even she wouldn't do that."
Charlie was just...well, he surprised me in this chapter. His love for Bella was so clear and wonderful. Reminds me of my Daddy :)
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
Nice dinner. I love Charlie
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
Loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! That makes me very happy :) :)
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
This last portion brought me to tears. incredible chapter
Author's Response: WOW, thank you!! I'm glad it touched you as much as it did me :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Sleepover
Edward=swoon. And I just love it when Charlie shows his sense of humor!
Author's Response: I am soooo sorry for the delay in responding!! My Yahoo alerts have not been working all week, and I didn't even know this chapter had been Beta'd/posted. Ah-grrr.
Anyhoo, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! It was fun reading your comments on the earlier chapters as I knew what was coming. Your interest and enthusiasm truly keep me going, and I sincerely hope you enjoy all that is to come for our favorite couple :)
Thanks again for all the sweet reviews!!! xoxoxo
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 13: Visiting the Cullens
I think Bella made two friends, probably helpful if she meets Tanya! As for Jasper's advice, Edward will probably not stop thinking about it!
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