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Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 33: Victoria
Oooh. Interesting plot twist!
Author's Response: Thanks, J!!! I'm having A LOT of fun with this storyline :) :)
Reviewer: momatu (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner
Ooohh!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 33: Victoria
wtf?! that is one sadistic bitch......how is Edward get outta this......
Author's Response: YEAH, Victoria really put her thing down with this one, didn't she?! I cannot wait to share Ch34 with you!! :) :)
Reviewer: momatu (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 8: Rosalie
Oh, I have *never* read such a perfect account of Edward! And I have never loved Rosalie like I do right now! If you've ever seen "Sense and Sensibility" with Kate Winslet, Emma Thompson, Hugh Grant, and Alan Rickman, there's a quote from Elinor to Marianne I've always thought would fit Edwawrd to Bella perfectly. "What do you know of my heart? What do you know of anything but your own suffering?" I've always thought Bella was very callous toward Edward, minimizing his suffering and the struggle and pain he faced to be with her. She was so wrapped up with herself, she never truly saw him, in my opinion. I agreed with Edward's statements at the end of New Moon, that he couldn't believe Bella could believe so easily that he didn't love her after everything he'd told her and done. Her faith in him was too easily broken. I absolutely love every word of this chapter, the way Rosalie made Bella see how little she truly understood Edward was absolutely perfect! I really should be going to be--work tomorrow--but I've got to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I saw S&S many moons ago (Lawd, did that make me sound old! LOLOL) but those lines do describe Edward to Bella. I think Edward was wrong here (as he was in canon) to try to run Bella's life, but I also think Bella grossly underestimates his plight.
Rosalie is one of my favorite characters--hence the reason I wrote "Black Ice," which focuses on the pre-canon relationship between Rose and Ed--so I was thrilled to use her in this way. I honestly think she and Bella would make great friends if canonRose weren't so stuck on the loss of her humanity, so this was my funny way of bridging the gap between them a bit.
Anyhoo, thanks for the love and I hope you're still enjoying the story!! xo
Reviewer: momatu (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 2: Turnabout
Ho-ly crap!
While I love this so far and love your version of Bella, I do think it needs to be remembered that Edward is very much a product of the era he lived during, and during that time it would've been perfectly normal fo the man to make unilateral decisions for the couple. That is simply the way his brain was wired from infancy, and I don't think the intervening decades would've changed it because vampires don't change, they're frozen as they are at the moment of their change. I'd also love to see Bella's honest answer if he'd flipped it around and asked her what she'd be willing to do if she threatened his safety. I think they are both products of their worlds, and that their worlds are very different places, so much so they might have been different planets rather than just different centuries. I can't wait to see how you reconcile their very different outlooks. Off to chapter three!
Reviewer: Nellie2011 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 33: Victoria
OMG! That was evil! I cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: *cackles maniacally* Muuuah-hahahahaha...
Reviewer: momatu (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: The End?
Oh, I like your Bella's reaction so much better than canon!
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 33: Victoria
Oh, heavens!
I wonder... whether this whole 'cat-fight' thing was all a setup for Victoria. Was that why they all switched to yelling in a strange different language- perhaps one she wouldn't know? Maybe that was Alice's way of alerting them to her plan... and the 4 who left have actually gone to take care of Charlie & Irina? This is fascinating! :) Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Ooooh, good theory!! I can't wait for you to read the next chapter to see how it holds up :) :)
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 33: Victoria
LOL... That verbal spat was obviously a plan - and Alice being able to see it ahead of time, knew enough to play along with it. Rosalie has her own plan and Victoria will meet her match. Of course I'm speculating, but it's what I would have written. :-)
Thanks for another installment - now, get going with your next chapter!
Author's Response: Those are all great ideas!!! Ch34 will soon be up and you'll see for yourself if you were right or wrong :) :) :)
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2013 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 32: Tanya
Great cliffie with Victoria showing up.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I can't wait to find out what she wants...
Reviewer: kwake (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 27: Breaking Dawn
WOW....so HOT!!!!! I need a cold shower now!
Author's Response: LOLOL!! So did I, honey!!
Reviewer: kwake (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2013 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 23: Bella Has a Question
Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying your story! Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner,but I haven't wanted to stop reading long enough to review!! Love how Bella is embracing marriage and how Edward gets a ring for her and she accepts it, no questions asked about cost:-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I too like this Bella, her excitement about marrying Edward. It always bothered me in canon that she gave him such a hard time (and that he essentially blackmailed her into it). This is much more romantic, don'tcha think? ;)
Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2013 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 32: Tanya
I knew it was Victoria.
Author's Response: Didja now? I wonder if you know what she wants, hehehe ;)
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 32: Tanya
holy crap! wtf!?!?!? Why would Tanya be afraid of Victoria, unless she was in cahoots with her or Victoria is holding something over her head??? and where is Charlie????!!!
Author's Response: All good questions!! Answers should be coming shortly... :)
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 32: Tanya
Wow... this just picked up. :-) Awesome build-up over these last couple of chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I can't wait for you to read the next one :) :)
Reviewer: Sandythestorm (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2013 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 32: Tanya
" We made love because you needed to feel loved. And as your husband, I will always give you whatever you need." Ive read some chapters today, several and reviewed and this by far is the most moving line today. If I had not commented before and have secretly selfishly read without reviewing; couldn't not let you know that. Also know I love your take of New Moon and tweet and retweet about it and pass it along to friends. Your Edward is amazing; thank you for writing and making me smile
Author's Response: WOW, Sandy... THANK YOU! I'm glad my Ed could make you smile :)
I really appreciate the tweets and other pimping of my little fic. And I totally understand the whole reading-without-reviewing thing. Sometimes I get so caught up that it's hard to pause bc I just want to see what happens next! But you wrote me now, and I'm so glad you did!
Ch33 is with my Beta, so look for it in a week or so. Have a great day! :) :)
Reviewer: sr2011 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 32: Tanya
Wtf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hehehehehe, I know, right? I can't wait to show you what Victoria wants...
Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 32: Tanya
I knew it! victoria
Author's Response: Yep, it's Victoria. But what in heckfire does she want? Hmmm...
Reviewer: Nellie2011 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 32: Tanya
omg! i had a feeling Victoria would show up. cant wait for the next chapter :-)
Author's Response: Thanks, Nellie!! I can't wait to share it with you. The plot thickens... :) :)
Reviewer: Kiekepieks (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2013 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 32: Tanya
really ?! really ?! are,you fudging kidding me ? i need more !! you better update soon !! my phone is not working with me,so my grammar is sucking, but who cares when you update this !! got to have a new chapter now !! damn you. you are too good.
Author's Response: Your grammar is great, LOL!! I just sent Ch33 to my Beta, so you should have it in about a week or so. I'm so glad you're enjoying the drama, and I cannot wait to hear your thoughts on the next one. Victoria is a wily minx ;)
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 31: Confirmation Breeds Confusion
Maybe Tanya hooked up with Charlie. It has happened in other fan fics.
Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 31: Confirmation Breeds Confusion
Does that mean that Tanya has killed or turned Charlie?
Author's Response: Hehehe, you'll find out soon enough ;)
Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 31: Confirmation Breeds Confusion
Wooh. That's crazy. Tanya is up to something. I'm thinking--hold Charlie for ransome for Edward. She's wanted him for like foorrevvver.
Author's Response: Yep, Tanya is definitely up to something. But what?? :)
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2013 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 21: Just A Minute
Ha! That was so mean! Poor Edward.
Author's Response: I KNOW, lololol!!! I felt bad for Edward, but it seemed like a Charlie thing to do :)
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2013 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 18: My Grieving Angel
:( I did wonder about Brittany.
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