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Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
Captivating! Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 2
wow!!! this is so different... I'm still anxious and curious as to who Lizzie's father is...you said she is Not half human and Vampire so I'm not sure...I enjoyed the twist if Jake as the Alpha and Seth as the Beta and how they can block the rest of the pack when they want. Hurry up Wednesday!!!! Later Kathy
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked chapter 2, as well! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
oh this is going to be good I can tell, the you add in one of my favorite authors Shasta53 and drotuno well what can I say MercWard is one my All time Favorites.... now on to the next chapter sweetness....Kathy
Author's Response: Hehehe Thank you!
Reviewer: sunflowers13 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm kinda hesitant to start this I'm afraid I'll like it too much cuz it already is really good so great job!!! but there is a reason I only read completed fics now cuz authors either do not update regularly or drop their story without finishing. Therefore I am just a little weiry since this was published in September and the 2nd chapter just updated in January. I do wish you a happy and creative writing experience and that real life doesnt get in the way... along the way.
Author's Response: No no, don't misunderstand... I started WRITING this in September, but the story is already completely written. :) I will be posting twice a week until it's done. I promise! I hope you continue reading since it's already written!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 2
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you! Next update will be Wednesday. :)
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
And now Edward f****ed her over even worse, with the kid in the mix. I hope Bella tears Edward a new one when they meet again.
Author's Response: Ouch... *pets Edward* lol Things will be okay, I promise! ;)
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hmmm. I can't see Bella falling into a relationship serious enough to have a child, and still be hung up on Edward at the same time. I hope Lizzie isn't a product of rape, but I'm hard put to think of other viable options.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :) You'll learn more soon! Next update will be on Wednesday.
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 2
This is so good! I hope she's able to be around Lizzie and her dad soon, and that Edward comes back. Please update quickly!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Next update will be on Wednesday. :)
Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great start!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great start! I definitely wasn't expecting Bella to be turned into a vampire this early. What is going to happen to baby Lizzie? Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :) You'll find out more on Wednesday! :D
Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
baby! I love stories with babies in them.
I'm very curious about Lizzie- who is she/ who's the daddy.
And where's Bella going? Does it have something to do with the cullens?
Can't wait to read where you take this!
Author's Response: Hehe Thank you for the review. You'll learn more next chapter, which will be up on Sunday!
Reviewer: Celtic-Hybrid (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
Found the review for this story really interesting, and I can't wait to see how the story develops. I'm very curious about little Lizzie! x
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy it! :)
Reviewer: twicrack83 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great start! Can't wait to figure out what's up with Bella and Lizzie. And I love that Charlie is with Sue. Glad he has someone. ;)
Author's Response: Hehe Yup, you'll find out more soon, I promise! :D Thanks, bb!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: ali208 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yay. I popped your stories review cherry. Just kidding. I've liked some of your other stories so its no surprise that I liked the first chapter of this one as well. I hope you don't much up Bella to much being the unwed young mother still living with dad. It could go a couple ways I just hope I like the way it goes. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: No no, that won't even factor into the story at all. :) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. :) More on Sunday!
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