Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 19
The scene with Charlie was very well done. I like that you didn't have him act like a jerk.
Author's Response: Thank you! No, he's not a jerk. He's...worried sick and heartbroken. :(
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 19
sniffle! I kind of oped that bella would make a split second decision to run down to him....darn lol..... love it post again soon!
Author's Response: LOL Nope. Sorry. ;) Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 19
Thanks good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 19
i just want to wrap charlie up n a big hug.
Author's Response: Aww, I know. Most people do! I did! Thanks. :)
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 19
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 19
Poor Charlie...
Author's Response: Yeah. :( That's why I said tissue warning! lol It made me so sad to write it! LOL
Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 19
Great chapter, looking forward to how you deal with Sue knowing and Charlie not knowing.
Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 19
Floor Charlie! Can't wait to see how they're going to explain Bella's condition to him
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :)
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 19
That had to be tearing Bella apart... a very rough chapter for her. Obviously, Bella will eventually disclose herself to Charlie, but how she does it will be quite intriguing. :-)
Good luck with that and thank you for sharing your talent.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 19
Keep writing...I like it that you post frequently. A short chapter sooner is much better than a loooong chapter that we had to wait forever for. We anr not imortals and only have a short time here! hahaha
xanath
Author's Response: Hahaha Thank you! :) Yup, every Sunday & Wednesday. :)
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 19
This is the best ch you've written. I get horrible for both Charlie and Bella.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 19
poor Charlie. I hope Bella will be able to return to him soon
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: PhoenixRN (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 19
Awww, poor Charlie. This chapter brought tears to my eyes :(. I really love this story, though, even if it makes me sad. Hopefully there will be some hapiness coming. Thanks!
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to cry for him, too, trust me! lol Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 18
Another well done ch.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 18
Good chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2012 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 18
Glad they are taking their time. Can't wait til you update.
Author's Response: Thank you! Next update is tomorrow. :)
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2012 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 18
Got alittle excited with the Bella/Edward scene in his bedroom. It was good that Alice stopped them. We will just wait till the time is right for them.
Author's Response: Hehehe Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2012 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 18
I do love that the baby gets to grow up naturally. I think Edward would make a great father as well. I like the fact that they will have a baby to raise and that it will be the normal process. I had hope someone would write a story like this without most of the angst. Thanks so much and keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2012 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 18
Great chapter, can't wait to read more, :0)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2012 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 18
Thanks good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2012 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 18
omg.....my favorite part was when edward said he'd b the best father he could b. *squee* bounce and sigh....loved it!
Author's Response: Hehe Thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2012 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 18
making some progress. yay!!!
Author's Response: Yup, definitely! :) Thanks!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2012 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 18
I really loved how you got Edward and Bella to open up a bit here, discussing Lizzie, and absofreakinlutely loved how Edward said he wants to be a father to Lizzie...swoon....since this seems to have been a big worry to Bella, understandably. Huge step! Their lemon zest, just right. Bella is still a bit confused, and needs time to process everything! Loved it! Esme makes me smile! She's so understanding and gentle, truly her gift, and wants to be there for Bella. She will make an awesome Grandma to Lizzie!! Loving your story! Hell yes!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!!
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2012 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 18
Great chapter! Loved how Edward said he would be Lizzie's father if Bella wanted that... Looking forward to Wednesday!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2012 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 18
That Alice.....always right on time ;-)
Author's Response: Hehehe That she is. :)
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
