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Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 09:19 AM · On: 33. Summons
more angst... these poor vamps just can't be happy.
loving it.
amy
Reviewer: KellyCullen (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 09:08 AM · On: 33. Summons
Oh no what is it!?
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 08:44 AM · On: 16. Futility
For the first time I absolutely love Jacob.
Someone is finally willing t FIGHT for Bella.
But I hope it is not going to be a J/B story. I can't stand them as a couple.
Off to the next chapter.
I am enjoying the story ALOT!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 08:35 AM · On: 1. Plans
Predictions - Edward is going to have to take care of a liability issue aka Jacob. That's why Alice couldn't see what would happen. Is Bella really going to just sit at home? I think she leaves and Demetri goes with. I'm sure Aro with be happy to see Alice too.
Jasper was so cute - "I go where my girl goes."
Post Chapter 34 soon pretty please with Jasper on top :)
Reviewer: stylishy (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 07:38 AM · On: 33. Summons
Oh. My. God. I am soooo curious to see what Edward's task will be, but I bet it will be worse than last time, or whatever you come up with lol. *Sigh* Too bad Alice can't see it...
Wow. Rosalie's actually feeling symphony for Bella. You don't see that very often, it makes me like Rosalie :)
As always a very good, intense, chapter!
P.S. Edward!! NNNOOOOOO!!!!! (Ok, I had to do that :D)
~Yelda XD
Reviewer: verlore (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 06:55 AM · On: 33. Summons
Grrrr....
*Stabs pins into a Jane doll before setting it aflame and dancing round the pyre.*
I've never been so aggravated with a fictional character!
So while that indicates a fair bit of good writing on your part, you know what you need to do now, right? Mortal Kombat FINISH HER !!
Reviewer: alice cullen rocks socks (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 06:44 AM · On: 33. Summons
OMG OMG OMG!
I have been following this story for weeks and i've finally burst! This is amazing! It's all that i wanted Breaking Dawn to be before it sort of fell apart with the plot device that is Renesmee!
All the characters are completely in keeping with what they would say and do. I was a bit worried at the beginning when Bella appeared to consider Jacob, but now im just bathing in the gloriousness that is your fanfic!
I loved Bella in Volterra and the Demetri twist feels so natural and not at all forced. He appears to be such a believable member of the Cullens. There was a point when i so wanted Demetri and Bella to have a one-nighter just to let off steam, but i think it may have gone against Bella's character.
Edward is going to fight Jacob isnt he? I can see it now - that is such a cruel twist! What is Bella going to do? She strikes me as the kind of stubborn mind that would follow after Edward anyway. Perhaps she can persuade Aro?
Ooooo! Please hurry - i'm dying to know more! *jumps up and down in seat* I don't think i've ever been THIS hyped up for a story!
:)
Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 06:40 AM · On: 33. Summons
He's gonna have to hunt Jake dwon and kill him, isn't he?!
Reviewer: emmy84 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 06:39 AM · On: 33. Summons
I have a bad feeling its Jacob since Alice couldn't see :(
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 05:52 AM · On: 33. Summons
I'll be honest, I didn't like this at first and I still think the chapters are a little bit short. But I do love the story line and it is well written. Looking forward to more excitement.
Reviewer: twilightedaway (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 05:49 AM · On: 33. Summons
*Sobs*
Please, please, please deliver Edward home alive!
(Still loving it)
Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:49 AM · On: 33. Summons
Gah, how can we go from light, fluffy tux fittings to a summoning? Are you trying to give me a heart attack? =) Really, I love it. I can totally feel Bella's pain. I just hope Edward is able to keep his promise and come back to her. And I really hope it doesn't involve Jacob. That might just break my heart. Waiting for the next chapter! =)
Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:34 AM · On: 33. Summons
Ok I have the worst feeling that Edward will be fighting or hunting down Jacob.....
Poor bella.. Keep up the great writing!
Reviewer: Gattina (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:18 AM · On: 33. Summons
oh...what a line!! Jane is truly the devil, though I'm thinking Aro is also pretty evil as well. Man, seems like Edward is going to become a hitman for Jakey-poo. I have nothing against Jake, but he sure was dumb for thinking that he could get away so easily. I do feel awful for Edward if that's what he has to do, ooo update soon!!!
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 02:35 AM · On: 33. Summons
Not again. Please tell me Edward makes it back to Bella safely. Oh, I hate cliffies. lol. Update Update Update!!!
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 02:32 AM · On: 33. Summons
Oh dear. I don't think it's Jane he's been summoned to hunt down, I think it's our dear Jacob...
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 02:10 AM · On: 33. Summons
Edward would kill anyone to come back to Bella. Somehow, I think this won't be as easy as he thinks.
Is Rosalie the only one who stayed?
Dang, Italy means Felix. Edward is forgiving, isn't he?
Nicely written.
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 01:45 AM · On: 33. Summons
NOOOOOOOOO! I know what he is being summoned to do and he'll never be able to go through with it. He's going to have to hunt down Jacob, that's why Alice can't see it. He's not going to be able to hurt him because it would kill Bella. ARG! I hate the Volturi. And yes, the devil does have a name, but right now I might have to disagree with you, I don't know that it is Jane, I think her name might be Lizbet, HEHEHEHE!!!!! J/K, you aren't the devil, just a very skilled story teller who is interested in torturing her poor readers, hehe! I guess this means next chapter in a day or 2, can't wait.
Manda
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 01:40 AM · On: 33. Summons
I loved the line at the end! And NOOOO! He is going to have to kill Jacob isnt he! AAARRRRG! I dont know how they could possibly get out of this one.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 01:40 AM · On: 33. Summons
I loved the line at the end! And NOOOO! He is going to have to kill Jacob isnt he! AAARRRRG! I dont know how they could possibly get out of this one.
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2009 01:16 AM · On: 33. Summons
Oooh that last line gave me goosebumps!!! Seriously...Creeeeeepy!!!!
I cannot even imagine what Aro has planned for Edward, but I certainly doubt that it is a simple easy task and I'm only assuming that the final line is foreshadowing Jane's involvement (I really hope she's dead by the end of this, btw....lol)
Could it involve Jake as well? Since Alice couldn't actually see things clearly? I'm a little wary about what's to come but OH MY GOD I cannot wait for another chapter! This is one of those moments where I am eternally grateful that you update so quickly!!!!
Reviewer: EdwardsBloodType (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 01:13 AM · On: 33. Summons
Aww, I was so loving this chapter in the beginning because they were doing something normal and happy and I had no anxiety!!!! Damn you!!! He's going to have to fight Jacob isn't he?
Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 12:17 AM · On: 33. Summons
Oh no...Edward's going to Volterra...probably to hunt and kill Jacob...especially when he hears from Felix about Jacob & Bella...drama, drama, DRAMA! :)
I LOVE IT! and I love you for creating this awesome story!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 11:46 PM · On: 33. Summons
I DO like your story! That's why I'm always writing questions and comments and being so invested in it!!!! So, clearly, Edward's task is going to be to kill Jacob, right? Am I right? Ahhh! Bella's best friend and the guy who saved him from Jane. Ugh! There's no rest for the weary in this story!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 11:27 PM · On: 33. Summons
Squeal are you goingto make Edward go after Jacob! The angst in that hehehe!!! Wow I am so sacred and so excited at the same time!!!!
I was loving the tux trials Alice is a trip know what they'll pick but still putting them through the ringer! But since he has a tux for so many other occasions you think he would want to own the tux from the day he married his soul mate!
So if Edward say was killed Bella not having all the info May blame Jane! Does that Mean Bella and Jane will finally get a go at it? Squeal one fight I always wanted to see!!!
I love this story and its no where near an end right! LOL Post again real soon!!
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