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Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 02:21 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
"Does the word vampire mean anything to you?" I LOVE IT!! I am so worried for Bella! I just hope Demetri is able to help her save everyone she loves... As always, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 01:08 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
Again you have wanting more...what the hell is Esme going to do with Charlie...
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 12:52 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
Man oh man she just left there now shes going back.
(Beats you with Edward doll!)
This chapter was so intense no fair! Ithought you were gonna take out Jacob and here you find a loop hole grrr LMAO
I thought I knew where this story was going now I have no clue but I am still so excited to be along for teh ride!
POst again soon!
Reviewer: Gattina (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 12:52 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
Whoa! GO Bella!! Jacob should have known better than to mess with the Volturi, but I still agree with him that both of them (Edward and Jacob) are not going to survive this... Right now I'm not sure who's worse, Edward for lying or Jake for being a tool (sorry!XD) I'm so happy that Demetri supports Bella's insanity and I'm definitely curious as to what is going to happen next! Send a snippet of the next chapter please!! And update soon!!
Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 12:28 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
aww... hell bella what are u doing? no, no for real what the hell is about to happen I'm so excited can't wait for the next!! ;-)
Reviewer: Twilighted Lady (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:09 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
Once again, you have me on the edge of my seat with the twists and turns of the drama that is.... Eternal Dawn. I'm getting ready to go to class and all I'm going to be thinking about is how Bella BETTER NOT GO BACK TO VOLTERRA!!!! No f'in way!!! Lol. Please let Bella and Edward stay together!!?!?!?! They just got back together and it was soooo sad when they were apart. Honestly, Jacob made his own decisions. He left Volterra and he has the bad attitude. I know he's heartbroken, and I have always loved Jacob, but all is fair in love and war! Bella has sacrificed herself too many times!!! AND CHARLIE!!!! He needs to know she's a vampire, I have wanted to see that in a story for so long. Let him guess at it, well hell, he already knows. I want to see their reunion. There is so much to look forward too and you are already at almost 40 chapters. No one else on this sight has a story that's this long and still just gets better and better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've said it a thousand times...I-LOVE-IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 10:11 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
Liz,
HOLY SHIT! Ok, i was not expecting that in the least. What the HELL is Billy thinking telling Charlie, doesn't he realize it will get Charlie killed? I can not believe Bella is going back to Volterra. I mean she will never be able to leave again. She will be stuck there, forever! I know she wants to save Edward and Jake, but she won't be able to be with either of them if she locked up in Volterra, so why even bother? At least if Edward goes through with his mission, she gets at least one of them. Grrr. Ok, bring on the excerpt so I can just get more anxious for the next chapter!
<3 Manda
Reviewer: luvtwilight (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 09:49 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
ahhhhhhhhh!!
I can't wait for the next chapter... I hope you post it soon..
So I can't help and think that this was the "game" Aro was playing...
He probably knew bella would do this!!
Love your story
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:20 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
Hmmm well this isn't expected.
update
x x Cassie
Reviewer: Darcell (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 04:29 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
Liz I dont know where you are going with this but I cant wait for the next posting!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 03:23 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
ok, i promised i'd review again, right? - i'm pissed at bella. if she gets trapped at volterra and doesn't go to edward, i'm going to be sad. ...and probably a little angry.
alright, that's my rant for right now.
Reviewer: alice cullen rocks socks (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 02:48 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
OMG! Another amazing chapter! They just keep coming.
The suspense keeps building...it's horrible! But my thoughts on the storyline - 'yes yes yes!'. I love the idea that Bella is going to try and sacrifice herself to Aro. There's something very drawing about a martyr storyline!
I guess Jacob and Edward are going to hear about it? Or is Aro going to get Bella in a deal where she has to stay but conviniently forget to send someone to stop the fight between Edward and Jacob? Ooooo! - Will Demitri sneak out and go?! ....
Argh! It's too much - im going to burst! You might actually cause the death of a twilighter here! *heart attack*
BRAVO! MORE MORE! :)
Reviewer: kellbell0 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:17 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
oh no ... things are getting hellish - there is NO way youre going to only write 48 chapters !!! haha
love it
xx
Reviewer: MissLucy (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:08 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
Ahh, so many twists and turns, I don't know where thsi story is going to go next, and I love it! You write so wonderfully, Keep up the great work! I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:06 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
Whoa!! Way to pull Charlie out of now where!! That was a surprise! Excellent job as usual. Really liked this chapter!
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 12:45 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
Holy Hell woman! You amaze me beyond belief. I left you a pathetic two word rreview last time, and you graced me with a monologue of information and love. You rock this thing babe. I love this story, and I had not even a hint in my mind of how this was going to play out. Your subtlety is perfect and flawless. Thank you, once again. You made my day.
~Mia
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 12:44 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
I absolutely love this story... I hope Charlie is ok with what Bella is.. well if she comes back from Italy
Reviewer: Nia (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 12:06 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
i am lovin Demetri right now. I would love to read more stories with him in them!
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:55 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
OH NO! I don't want Bella to go back to Volterra. Please tell me she figures away to stop Edward from killing Jake, and is able to save his life as well and go home to him. Please upadate soon!!!!!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:53 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
Amazing! Well...looks like it is BELLA, the super-Vamp to the RESCUE!!!
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:30 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
The anticipation is killing me...update soon!!!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:28 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
No! No! No! Bella can't go to Volterra! And you can't leave me hanging like that!!!! Nooooo!!!!
Agh...and Charlie, oh my God Charlie's gonna be pissed when he gets to the Cullens and wham bam no Bella is there. I'd love a Charlie POV btw hehe.
Oh I'm so excited for more! And I really like Demetri, he seems like a good fella!
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 09:13 AM · On: 35. Justifiable
Or, if you really have no idea what to say, just tell me that you like it! :)
Yep. Hard.
~Mia
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 02:04 PM · On: 35. Justifiable
OMG..what is going to happen? I am so curious to find out how Edward will handle Jacob. More so what their confrontation over Bella will be like. Please Please update soon.
Reviewer: Nia (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 01:48 PM · On: 35. Justifiable
Hmmm...I dont know what to predict on this matter, only that somehow, whatever happens will get back to Bella and she may be tempted to return to Aro...
Im not good at predictions, but I am good at reading so post another chappie please!!!
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