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Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 06:03 AM · On: 37. Helpless
Liz, I don't feel reviewing is scary, but I do have to agree that writing and posting new chapters is extremely scary, and tough!!! Oh man, I can just imagine what is going on at the Cullen home between Charlie and Carlisle. That is interesting that Felix gave Edward Jake's passport, if he's supposed to kill him, then why bother? He wouldn't need it anymore. Grrr, your story always leaves me wanting more and I am very impatient until the next chapter is uploaded. I don't know what I am going to do once it has reached its end! Until the next chapter Liz.
Manda
Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:06 AM · On: 37. Helpless
Oh, oh, oh, what if the whole plan was to lure Bella back to Volterra? Those sneaky Volturi. I don't know what they've got planned, but I'm sure it's some shady business!
Tough work indeed! You've kept me waiting on the edge of my seat for updates, but I would say that you're doing freaking awesome!!!!
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:57 AM · On: 37. Helpless
*bites lip* Serves that douche right for not telling her. But... oh, Charlie. XD.
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 03:15 AM · On: 37. Helpless
Tough work, indeed! :)
I'm impressed Edward figured out what Bella was doing -- speaks a lot to how he knows her. I'm still stumped as to how you're going to work this out -- can't wait!
There is definitely another game afoot since Felix gave Edward the passport before Bella and Demetri called. Hmmm....
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 03:10 AM · On: 37. Helpless
GRRRR. I know she's going to the volturi, I just hope that she finds a way out of staying and is able to save both Jacob and Edward from death and themselves. I love it as always. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:04 AM · On: 37. Helpless
Great chapter, you are doing such a good job on this story (and i have read LOTS lol). I am still hoping Jacob doesn't have to die and they can find another way, but I also want Edwards debt to be paid so him and Bella can be happy (no more jacob/bella romance). Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 01:42 AM · On: 37. Helpless
creative, interesting, original, mysterious and sexy
Babe, that's your mo. You always pull that off to the fullest effect. And it's why I am obsessed with your story.
~Mia
Reviewer: Twilight131 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 01:29 AM · On: 37. Helpless
This is getting interesting. I can't wait to find out what's really been going on w/ the Volturi. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 12:45 AM · On: 37. Helpless
creative, interesting, original, mysterious and sexy
- Creative- check
- interesting - check
- original - check
- mysterious -check
- sexy - CHECK-A-ROO
You're good. A+
Reviewer: nelisse (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 12:41 AM · On: 37. Helpless
OMG.......I don't want this story to ever end!!! I always look to see if you've added another chapter and it totally makes my day:) please find a way to keep it going . Please. Please. Please.
Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 12:01 AM · On: 37. Helpless
As always another great chapter! I can't believe we are nearing the end soon...what will I do for my daily ED fix now? :(
Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:53 PM · On: 36. When it Rains
Poor Charlie and Renee...Bella should have just faked her death from the very beginning.
Reviewer: Darcell (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:29 PM · On: 37. Helpless
The suspense is killing me!
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:03 PM · On: 37. Helpless
what the hell is Bella doing??!!
Reviewer: shasta (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:03 PM · On: 1. Plans
I'm so behind! Three chapters! I can't believe Demetri told Bella and aahhh what a mess! Couldn't Jacob just died easily? I guess not haha. Ooh and Charlie.. I had forgotten all about him!
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:57 PM · On: 37. Helpless
Great chapter...you always leave me craving more...:)
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:44 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
Oh Bloody Hell... I can't stand this suspense!!! please post again soon :)
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:01 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
Just let Jacob die already shhhesh!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 07:52 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
I KNEW it. I love it, keep it coming.....Charlie calling was a surprise thou what are they going to do with him, poor Esme. You can add as many chapters as you want, you have my blessing. :0)
Reviewer: stylishy (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 07:00 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
*GASP* So intense!
Ok, things are coming at Bella from all sides. Edward has to kill Jacob, if he doesn't, then he dies. Not to mention Alice and Jasper are now involved and could get killed too. Edward lied to Bella about his task and now she's a little pissed because Demetri told her what he really has to do and now she's going after him and Jacob. Then I think they will all, possibly have to face the Volturi. BUT, Charlie is now involved in their little web of lies...lol. Maybe Charlie gets turned into a vampire? *Mental image* Err...
Wow, what a mouth full!
Brilliant! Please, keep updating!
~Yelda XD
Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:42 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
Ah, the plot thickens. Great update!
Glad to hear you have 12 more chapter - I don't want this one to wind down any time soon!
-Alyx
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:41 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
no.no.no.no.no.no. she can't go back to Volterra :(
Reviewer: sweetblood1145 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:58 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
I to love Demetri I hope he finds love maybe hopefuly with one of the Denli girls
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:49 AM · On: 36. When it Rains
I adore Demetri.
Reviewer: jacobdoesntsparkle (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 03:41 AM · On: 1. Plans
ahhhh! The suspense kills! I am eternally grateful for your consistant updates :) I don't know what I would do w/o them. Keep up the amazing work
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