Loooovvvvveeeee the new twist!!!
Great writing keep it up!

I am so happy for Jacob.  It's nice to know that there really was someone out there--- to mourn him after Edward rips him to pieces.

Great chapter.  Truly unexpected.  Nicely done.

What's 27 years! Besides Jacob been with older woman. Heidi's what 200- 300 years old. :) I agreed with the imprinting on the infant - didn't like it.  My head spinning with this chapter. Edward is on is way to find Jacob with the plan of killing him and now he is with a new pack and found the love of this life. So do you speak Russian? I love all the ven and vill I could almost hear her accent.

Loved the line - This was beyond Demi Moore and Ashton Kutcher... What would she say? What if she rejected him? “Eighteen.”

Honestly, what is age to an immortal?  If, physically, they both appear in thier early twenties; then what does it matter?  Whole argument is moot to the ageless, for little more then humor.

As far as Imprinting goes... I'm not a fan of the concept.  Perhaps, if it applied at some future point in a chosen relationship, and enforced it, I might be good; but the "out of the blue" lack of choice is places on both parties, particularly on the female, just smacks of something criminal.  If it happened to MY daughter... 

I'm glad you choose the partner for Jake you did, yes, better then a child.  Are you going with the position that Jake is a Shifter or an actual "Child of the Moon"?  I get the impression that Tatiana is not quite teh same type of "werewolf" Jake thinks he is.  Just curious.

Liz, wow hun that was intense!  I'm so happy Yacoob (hehe) imprinted.  That is wonderful, if only he had his phone so he could call Bella and tell her, I'm sure she would be very happy with that news.  I have to agree with you, when Quil imprinted on Claire I was majorly disturbed by it, and then in BD when it happened with Jake and Ness I was disgusted, she was only a few minutes old and he was in love with her, YUCK!  I like that you made Tatiana older, I really think it is what jake needed, someone with more life experience than him.  The cougar angle was definitley the way to go.  I think you did an amazing job with the imprint scene, although I like the russian's veiw on it better, Love at first sight, since I do beleive that does happen for some people.  Imprinting always sounded weird, too other worldly to me. 

Please do not feel obligated to read my story, i did not tell you as a way to get another reader, I just knew I would not be able to read your updates as quickly, and didn't want you thinking I had abondoned you after all of that time. 

Are we going back to Edward or Volterra next chapter?  because obviously I am interested to find out what is going on in both places!  Gah, with every update now it gets closer to the end :(  !!!!!!  As always I await the next chapter as well as your response!

Manda

Interesting...It's about time Jacob imprinted (I liked your take on it, esp. that they saw each other's past). I'd disagree with your mother, 18yrs old is not like a child (even if she is in her 40s). While the new pack can help defend him, it doesn't erase Edward's debt :( Not many chapters left, I'm anxious to see how you tie things up...

i truly love your story i have been keeping track of it since u first strted writing it cant wait for the rest keep up the good work

 

 

sincerly mariam

Bloody hell you really got this storyline going with a bang.  The marble apple was a nice touch.  I've got no way of predicting where this storyline is going to go, and I like it!

AWWWWWWWWW

that realllllly realllly CUTE!

hope he can just live secretly with her.

Nice job on the Russian accent dialogue.

UPDATE

x x Cassie

Wow, I totally didn't see that one coming! And I agree with you, having Tatiana older than Jacob isn't the same as imprinting on a child (though that doesn't bother me too much either...)

I can't wait for the next Chapter-I truly love your story!

OMG! yah! he imprinted! now he won't act like a bumbed out hobo all the time (just my way of saying depressed) but what about Edward and Bella? Nobody would even think or suggest killing Edward or Edward getting hurt, but it would be really sad if Jacob died now that things are really working out for him! I know you have though of something good that will keep both Edward and Jacob alive and each happily with their partners and families. Update soon!

That was the one big problem I had with Breaking Dawn. I teach preschool and the thought of Jacob imprinting on a baby just really bothered me to no end.  Really really bothered me, so I'm really happy you had him imprint on someone who's actually older than he is hahah. 

Oh that was such a pleasant twist to the story! Yay! Jacob imprinted, now he has to live right? ANd he'll live without lusting after Bella! :)

Ooh you just made my night Yay!!!

I am confused...I got a notice saying that ths story had been updated - I was expecting 40 - why is this 39 and not 40? DId your amazing Beta not validate the correct chapter or did I mess up and have a deja vu experience...knowing exactly hw the chapter was going to end!

Another blond shrink moment. Sigh...note to self: contact neurologist...those "moments" are happening eith greater frequency! LOL

 

KAH