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Reviewer: stylishy (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 05:13 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
Lizzy,
I really like this chapter! Especially since the Vicomte made his appearance. At first I was thinking he was nice, a little too nice...
Lol. He may be friendly, but can be a big meanie when he wants to be!
And don't worry, you can take your time with the chapters! :)
~Yelda XD
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 05:12 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
Ohh, evil man. Go, Bella, Go!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. So close!!!
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 04:50 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
Vicomte might be another hottie if given the chance. But that child killing part is a deal-breaker for any hottie. Love a pissed off Bella.
Reviewer: Kel-bel Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 04:37 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
OHHH....Wow.....I am in shock...... YAY!!!! That was so awesome!! So, no edward yet? thats okay!!! In fact, if it means hes safe, its great!!!!!!!! Wow. That was a great chapter. I can't wait for the next one!! I give a smattering round of applause! GO BELLA!!!! (*I will Survive* playing in the backround)!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 04:34 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
I really liked this chapter--it was so original. The Vicomte was an interesting character. And the fight scene--at least the beginning of it--was well done. I can't wait for the rest.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 03:27 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
Great chapter!!! I already sent a better review to your email, but had to say it here too. I love this story! :)
Reviewer: paper_hearts (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 03:14 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
i love it i've followed this story from the beggining and i truly love it
Reviewer: IndecisiveMe (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 03:13 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
What a horribly, wonderful place to end the chapter. You definitely know how to keep the reader wanting more!
Go Bella!
Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 03:11 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
oooo excitingZ!!
Reviewer: pavelowwife53 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:59 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
Hurry post more, Bella's kicking some ass and I'm loving it! Part of me wishes she wouldnt have to kill the vicomte, he was kind of charming and could have been a fun character to develop more but at the same time, you knew he was toast...
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:37 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
The Vicomte reminds of that French guy in the Matrix...the annoying frenchie with the beautifully tight dressed wife...haha...what is Edward's reaction to being delayed? does he know that it was Bella and Demetri that did it?
Reviewer: Darcell (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:36 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
That was so not cool to end it in the middle of the battle! I feel like I'm watching those old episodes of Batman with Adam West where they stopped right in the middle but now I have to wait half a week for another episode! lol The Vicomete is pretty interesting though, its like you need another fanfic to tell his backstory.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:24 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
I loved this chapter! I like the idea of Bella giving into the 'demon within'. That's good. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:21 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
I feel terrible by what the Vicomte did to Demetri. I have faith in Bella to hold her own. She is much stronger than she gives herself credit for. I can't wait until Edward, Jasper, Alice, and the wolves arrive. This is getting better and better with each chapter. As always, I LOVED it!!!
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:21 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
AGH!! Have you not tortured us enough! How can you leave such a damn cliffy? I don't think I can forgive you for this one. Its a great fight scene. Please hurry and update. :)
Reviewer: Mrs Pandora (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:02 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
Love it!!! Can't wait to find out what hapens.
Reviewer: Mrs Pandora (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:02 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
Love it!!! Can't wait to find out what hapens.
Reviewer: KitsunexBella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 10:39 AM · On: 44. Destiny Calls
Love it!! Can't wait for more! <3
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 07:54 AM · On: 44. Destiny Calls
I would love to know more about Vicomte but I guess that is coming.
I can't wait to find out what happens, I am sure each person will play a special part in the duel or maybe Bella will just kick butt and surprise them all?
Looking forward to the next update! :)
Reviewer: Twilighted Lady (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:00 PM · On: 44. Destiny Calls
AWWWWW, I'M SO GLAD EDWARD DIDN'T KILL JACOB!! NOW THEY CAN HOPEFULLY SAVE BELLA TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WOULD LOVE FOR CHARLIE TO SEE BELLA, FOR THEM TO REUNITE TOO!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED ABOUT THE END OF THIS STORY, IT'S BEEN SO WONDERFUL SO FAR AND I KNOW YOU WON'T DISSAPOINT, YOU NEVER DO!!!! LOOKING FORWARD TO YOU NEXT POST :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:36 AM · On: 44. Destiny Calls
Squeal! Damn Jasper at least hint at the myths so they see whythey can't go ugg god!
Man sorry it took me so long to review i was out of town shopping yeah me! But this chapter kicke my ass the calls she made to everyone she forgot the Cullens though if these calls were suppose to be a farewell of sorts in case she doesn't return then well she forgot her other family!
Look forward to the next chapter but I do so I will be so sad to see it end!
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 01:22 PM · On: 44. Destiny Calls
4 more chapters?!? AHHH!!!!!
Very sad phone calls. I'm assuming they'll make it in time, but I'm shuddering at what the Vicomte will do to them...
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 11:06 AM · On: 44. Destiny Calls
Good chapter--I kinda hate that they're going though because I don't want them to get caught in the crosshairs with the Count's powers. But I loved the phone conversation between Edward and Bella and I loved Jacob fighting to go. I also thought Edward teasing Jacob there at the end was very good.
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 10:38 AM · On: 44. Destiny Calls
Getting even more exciting! Poor Charlie...
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 09:43 AM · On: 44. Destiny Calls
How much does Charlie really know? What did Esme tell him?
Isn't Bella in greater danger with others there. Aro is suspecting that the Count can't break through Bella's thick skull, but he can still get to others around him. He can turn the others against Bella. Now, that's scary.
Only 4 chapters? Sadness/excitment. Can't wait!!
Wonderful job as always. Still needing to get over the Dimetri anger. Bella is much more forgiving than I am.
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