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Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:41 AM · On: 46. Perdition
Edward's thoughts were wonderful; sad, but wonderful. I had a few tears over the quick conversation between Vladmir and Edward. His heart was breaking.
Loved the building tension and angst; concern to worry to panic to defeat. Edward was going to lose it.
I don't mind not seeing the end of the fight. I'm sure you have your own manical reasons for torturing us further.
Want to explain the ugly grey tux and Edwards ackward expression in the photo?
Fantastic chapter. Can't wait for their reunion!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:37 AM · On: 46. Perdition
sweetie I think you did a marvelous job with good ol' Eddie's emotional rollercoaster and I absolutely loved the little pep talk Jacob gave him. It was very sweet. Ohh I'm getting sadder and sadder with each chapter cause I know it's going to be over soon :( Great job hun!!!
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 01:57 AM · On: 46. Perdition
Hey loved it, but could't Sancha have just seen an image of Bella in Jacob's mind?
Reviewer: Derryni (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:22 AM · On: 46. Perdition
I am dying to know what happened in the duel, but am so glad that Bella is alive and that Edward found her. I can't wait to see how this all ends
Reviewer: vanessa118377 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 10:55 PM · On: 46. Perdition
Awesome chapter! My only complaint it that it was too short! LOL
I would have liked to read about the rest of the battle between Bella and the Vicomte but I'm not that upset about it.
Great job and can't wait to see what you do next! I know it won't disappoint! :)
Reviewer: kellbell0 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 10:49 PM · On: 46. Perdition
awww yay EDWARD & BELLA together again :)
now .... lets take care of jacob ....
wait i know in a prev. reveiw you said one outta 3 was right - i guessed it - charlie is a poor lonely man !!!
but alas there are more chapters to come - more mischeif to be made anywho...
howzat??
peace xx
Reviewer: L_Hill (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 07:36 PM · On: 46. Perdition
One of the best I have read so far. I am very eager to read the ending. I am so pleased with the way you have developed this great story line. It's not just about Belle and Edward screwing like rabbit's, thats all great but I like the depth of the story more then the sex in most other's. Anyway this is the first review i have made, so hope I got my point accross, I am enjoying your writing very much.
Reviewer: paper_hearts (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 06:35 PM · On: 46. Perdition
i hate it when you do that lol
but that part about the iphone was great
good job i cant wait for then next chapter
Reviewer: Vampgurl20 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 05:35 PM · On: 46. Perdition
awww so cute, i cant wait for their meeting.
Reviewer: stylishy (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 05:29 PM · On: 46. Perdition
*Squeal* Woo! Bella and Edward are finally standing right in front of each other. :)
Mhh...I wonder what happened in the second half of Bella's duel? *Sigh* Yes, I shall wait for the next chapter!
Hehe. Wonderful job, Lizzy. You have mastered the art of 'Brooding Edward and Sarcastic Jacob stuck sitting next to each other on a plane'.
~Yelda XD
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 05:25 PM · On: 46. Perdition
Awwww. SHE GOOD.
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 05:19 PM · On: 46. Perdition
Ouch that hurt to read it must have been agony to write, and reading about the fight wouldnt have had the emotional impact that sharing Edwards pain does
Update soon
Reviewer: volvo_cowgirl (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:34 PM · On: 41. Sacrifice
Ohh... I'm kind of sad that Demetri was a spy. Maybe a spy with good intentions though? I was kind of intrigued by the possibility of a new Cullen without a mate... that could lead tto a new storyline of Demetri finding love.
Hopefully Jacob will stay with the German werewolves so they can be done with him. Sorry, but I just get so sick of his crappy personality.
Reviewer: Darcell (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:28 PM · On: 46. Perdition
I thought Edward was gonna go a lil new moon pre mature suicidal there for a second. oh and i totally understand the intoxication of reviews because i finally got validtated!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:28 PM · On: 46. Perdition
I can't wait for the next chapter, and I am eager to find out what happened during Bella's fight....I'm glad Edward has found Bella again...I loved it!!
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:02 PM · On: 46. Perdition
YAY!!!!!!!!!! Bella is ok. I'm doing a happy dance now. Lol. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 03:36 PM · On: 46. Perdition
Squeal! Shes there YEAH!!!!
Let me guess Bella went all she devil on the Vicomte and almost didn't come back but When Demetri bit her and weakened her Bella calmed the beast and came back to being Bella! Just my wild silly idea who knows...Youe ideas are always better thats why you write and I review!
I loved it you playe dup to Edwards over worried fear the worst and barely hope for the best personality! I am glad you didn't actually have him try and stop her although a fight between Bella and Edward would be interesting...I liked the fact that instead of freaking out 100% and thinking its all over he went to the Tower and waited its like hes learning lol slowly to have faith in Bella....
Post again soon as alwasy I loved it! I am glad I stayed awake late tonight and just felt like checking the site yeah sweet dreams now to be NIGHT!!!
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 03:26 PM · On: 46. Perdition
Ohh, she's there! But at what cost? What happened with the Vicomte? Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 03:16 PM · On: 46. Perdition
I wanna know how the second half of the battle went. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.
Reviewer: volvo_cowgirl (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 01:34 PM · On: 35. Justifiable
This is a great story-very exciting. I've not reviewed yet because I was too anxious to continue on to the next chapters!
Have to say, Jacob has always been an annoyance to me, so if he dies in this story I won't be upset. Maybe even relieved.
Reviewer: Ror (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 07:06 AM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
I can't wait until this series is finished! Written better than Breaking Dawn.
Reviewer: Derryni (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 03:22 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
Oh no, I need to know what appens next. Please post again soon. Great story
Reviewer: isra_almisri (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 03:12 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
Amazing! It's killing me to wait for the rest. I love the look into the Volterra.
Reviewer: Southern_Magnolias (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 12:37 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
More please!!!! I am totally captivated! Now stop reading your reviews and go write! ;-)
Holly
Reviewer: vanessa118377 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 02:46 PM · On: 45. Le Vicomte du Toulon
No, no, no!! This can't be the end!!
I just found this site within the past week. Yours is the 2nd story I've added to my favorites and the 2nd one I couldn't stop reading until I reached the end. It is so well written that it kept me on the edge of my seat!
I can not wait to read the next chapter!
I have truly enjoyed the twists and turns you took with the characters while still maintaining their personalities from the Twilight books. Bravo to you!
I can't wait to see how you end this story but at the same time I will be so sad that I won't get to read anymore. You have managed to keep me attached just like SM did.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us! I will be eagerly waiting to see what else you send our way!
A new fan,
Vanessa
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