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Reviews For Eternal Dawn
Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:46 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home

Juuust started this! And I LOVE it! Now I'm dying to know what happens!
Update soooooon, please!! :)

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:42 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home

You and I area goin gto have one hell of a fight if you don't quit screwing with my sanity.

I want to know what happen in Paris. I want to know about the fight. I want to know how she won. 

And what was behind the damn door. I swear to God if Charlie is now a vampire.....

Reviewer: KitsunexBella (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:36 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home

Forgot to add! I sooo wanna know how she defeated him too!! D=

Reviewer: KitsunexBella (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:35 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home

The cliffies are killing me!! Ahh! lol.

Loved the chapter though! Yay for adding another! Can't wait for the next!! <33

Soon soon soon I hope! =D

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:33 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home

Reunions...They're great. So, what's going on with Charlie?

Great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next!!!!

Reviewer: Isabelle Vaughn (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:16 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home

I'm dying to know how Bella survived the fight with that vampire. I can't wait to find out. I wonder who Charlie is with inside the house. Great job.

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:09 PM · On: 46. Perdition

Everyone's alive!!!!!! but where's Jane in all of this? Too many questions and very few chapters left :( But I love this story so much more then breaking dawn.

Reviewer: abettynamedjass (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:33 AM · On: 46. Perdition

im hooked to the story..good job honeyy!

Reviewer: Southern_Magnolias (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:03 AM · On: 46. Perdition

Woo hoo!  Brilliant!  More More More!!!

Reviewer: lisalou59 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:38 AM · On: 18. The New Girl

you're doing awesome... love this story!!!

Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:07 PM · On: 46. Perdition

*gasp!* I am utterly speechless.

Seriously.  I've got nothing. 

You never fail to deliver the goods! =)

Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:54 PM · On: 46. Perdition

awww!! beautiful!!! so how did she beat him???

Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 01:42 PM · On: 46. Perdition

Holy crap- more please!!!!

Reviewer: cullenboys4ever (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:36 AM · On: 46. Perdition

omgod! i am jsut happy that she is alive!

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:47 AM · On: 46. Perdition

I love you I love you I love you. Thank you for the happiness at the end. This was like eating bitter chocolate truffles. You have to get through the unpleasant tannin flavor before you hit the chocolate sweet gold in the last bit. Thank you.

 

~Mia

Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:42 AM · On: 46. Perdition

WOOOO HOOOO.

awesome.  Ok... more please.  :)  greedy, aren't I?

Now, I'd love a little more details on the fight... can't wait for details.

And for Casius to go to hell... I hope they leave those poor folks alone and in peace for all they've had to go through... Can't wait to see what you've got in store for the rest of this.

Surely, though, once Aro gave his word, it should understandably be recognized as an agreement w/the Bretheren... so Casius will have to stand down, with whatever he's got up his sleeve, won't he?  Perhaps if Bella calls Aro & the Bretheren on it face-to-face... hmmm... drama, drama... and I'm loving it all.

By all means, continue... not to rush you, but please, update SOON!!!

(I used to be a patient person once upon a time...  but no more!)

 

Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:26 AM · On: 46. Perdition

Awww! I loved it. So good. So good. I can't wait for another chapter.

Reviewer: Dragonfly (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:19 AM · On: 46. Perdition

These cliffie's are driving me nuttie. Please update soon. I really hope you dive into Bella's duel with the Vicomte. Can't wait!!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 06:37 AM · On: 46. Perdition

Lizzie,

YAY!  She didn't die,  I didn't think you would do that but I wasn't sure, sometimes you surprise me.  I actually liked this chapter, even if it was incredibly difficult to write.  You and these damn cliffies, I can't take it, hehe.  You better explain in a future chapter what happened to that sick, sadistic vampire!  Can't wait for the next chapter in a few days.

Manda

Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:43 AM · On: 46. Perdition

Don't worry about the Cliffie's babe. It was a great chapter, I was wondering how easy it was for them to get on the flight seeing how Demetri called ahead to delay it.

Reviewer: EdwardsBloodType (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:37 AM · On: 46. Perdition

Awww, I just got chills. I didn't want details of the fight..just the reunion!!!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:33 AM · On: 46. Perdition

I hate cliffhangers, but this was a great chapter, I didn't think it was too dark. Alot has happend and I expected Edward to be his usual masochistic self. I am SO looking forward to the next chapter to find out what happend and what is yet to come :)

Reviewer: Mrs Pandora (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:01 AM · On: 46. Perdition

Again I loved this chapter, as I do all of yours. Your writing is incredible.  I do hope there is a good reason for not seeing the second half of the fight, can't wait to find out what it is!

Reviewer: cullen-gal (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:56 AM · On: 46. Perdition

aaarrgghhhhh! so she is alive...how? what was with alice's vision with demetri? Oh my! i can't wait!!!!

Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:58 AM · On: 46. Perdition

Yeah, I was really hoping for the 2nd part of her fight...but...if you have a good reason then you're forgiven lol :)

As always, another great chapter!

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