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Reviewer: porche911turbo (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:46 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
ha way to leave us on a cliff hanger. so unfair.
update??
Reviewer: Twilighted Lady (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:01 AM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Cliffie.....cliffe....and yet another cliffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They are always worth the wait though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: princessjosei20 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:39 AM · On: 2. Monster
Great so far
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:31 AM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
50 is a good number; so long as it makes sense to the entire story - which you NEVER have a problem accomplishing.
The reunion was wonderful. Very sweet and personal. Loved the wording.
"There are many kinds of kisses, just as there are many kinds of love. For two people who have believed their affinity might be lost forever, a single kiss is an astounding thing. No kiss can move mountains, or break down walls. But to the on-lookers in the street seeing Edward and Bella’s love so purely expressed, none could help but be moved."
Beautiful...
Was there a specific reason the four vampires couldn't go on the same flight? Seattle to Forks and Portland to Forks is almost the same distance. 1 1/2 to 2 hour drive from either direction to Olympia, where you turn off to go west to Port Angeles and Forks. So, not really saving time to go to Tacoma (the airport isn't in Seattle). Was that just your mischeivious brain working to get Bella and Edward alone?
The woman on the plane was hilarious. Nice touch.
I can believe that Edward really would worry for hours and hours, thinking the worse case scenerio. He gets the girl, and is still fretting.
"Oh my!"?? Ok... how bad can it be? Charlie with a shotgun? LOL... No, Charlie with a supersoaker filled with Holy Water, (I loved that movie!) a giant cross around his neck, and garlic strung all over the windows sills and doors! LOL.
Looking forward to the next update!!! Super job!
Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:25 AM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
I liked it alot, and I dying to find out what happened while Bella was in Paris.. I think I know what Edward gasped about when he was at Charlie's door in Forks, but I am not going to voice my theory and ruin for other people.. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: vanessa118377 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:46 AM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Seriously...your cliffies KILL me!! LOL
Great chapter as usual! Love your writing style!
And I wouldn't care if you added 50 more chapters...I'm so hooked on the characters from the books that I hate when their story ends. It's the same with the really good fanfics...you get the characters back but eventually the fanfics end too. Grr...!
Seriously though....fabulous job!!!
~Vanessa
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:08 AM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Lizzie! Yay! 50 chapters...that excites me. so that means almost another two weeks of Eternal Dawn updates, Yay!!!!!!!
Now onto serious things. These damn cliffies of yours are starting to piss me off, but in the best possible way. I really really loved this chapter. So happy that Jake asked Bella to talk to Billy for him, let him know everything. I'm also happy that he will be returning to the states with tatiana and her brothers at some point. I can't wait for chapter 48 sometime this weekend so I can find out what edward's 'Oh My' was for!
Manda
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:02 AM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Lovin' it. I think Charlie must have Sue in there comforting him. Love your story so much that I am constantly telling other people to read and REVIEW.
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:55 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
What happened in the fight??? Great chapter, but your kiling me with the cliff hangers!
Reviewer: EdwardsBloodType (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:19 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Aww Come on! What is Bella hiding????
Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:54 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
o you're cruel!!! more cliffhangers!!!
great chapter though
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:15 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
I really liked these chapters very much in the spirit of the books not so much the action but focusing on the fallout and emotions caused by those actions
And hey another chapter means more to read *thumbs up*
Reviewer: Princessrosary (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:01 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
cliffys are fun to end with when your the writer, but if your the reader it drives you mad!
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:27 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Amazing chapter. I can't wait to see Charlie's reaction to Bella and find out what Bella is hiding.
Reviewer: stylishy (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:14 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Lizzy, YES!!! You updated! Just when I was going to turn of my computer! Why must you leave me with all of the what if's and headache-worthy pondering?! I have to know what's behind that door. *Gasp* Maybe Billy turned out to be gay!! Hehe, just kidding. I only wanted to leave you with that lovely mental image as payback for the evil cliffy!
Bella and Edward's reunion was so sweet. Now, everyone say it with me!!! "AWWWWWW"!!!!!!
Wonderful job, as always, Liz! Maybe, just maybe, I'll survive until Saturday. Mhhh...you've got me obsessed with this more than should be healthy. I think I need some help. :)
~Yelda XD
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:07 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
As sweet and wonderful and provoking as I have come to expect of you. I loved your southern yahoo. I loved Bella's panic attack. I love that home isn't with Charlie anymore. But I especially love the number 50 right now. Yay, another chapter.
~Mia
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 03:13 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Doh! You are evil. Evil.Evil.Evil.
You give us their sweet reunion but NO details. How can you leave us like that? And what on earth did Edward hear?
*POUT*
Reviewer: Derryni (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 03:05 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Nasty cliffhanger. I need to know what happened, you're killing me here. Great job as always.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 02:14 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Squeal another bed time delight!
So thrilled before I shut down my comp for the eveningto see it up and posted I was so hopingto hear what happened how it happened and all the good stuff. TEASE!
Edward and bella are not going to let you ned thestory untilits just right so be patient the ending will come naturally plus I love your story!
Until next chapter good night this was a good comfort chapter and I loved it very much!
Reviewer: isra_almisri (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 02:08 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
I am going to spontaneously combust if I don't find out how things ended with the Vicomte! And I can't wait to read the meeting with Charlie. I love your story.
Reviewer: strwbrryflds (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 02:03 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
I loved it. I can't wait to find out what happened with Bella and what is going on with Charlie.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 02:02 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
And you leave me in suspense yet again! This was a great chapter, I am dying to find out details. I personally love that you add chapters :) Once it's done I plan to reread it from the beginning. Looking forward to the next update!!!
Reviewer: suyapa (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:50 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
these chapters have been really good. hope to read more of your stories.
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:50 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
YESSSS!!! You've added a chapter! I love you!!!
And how dare you leave me on such an evil cliffy! That was evil! My mind is going crazy with what if's. Tsk tsk. Ok...deep breath...I can make it to the next update haha. Great job hun!!!
PS I loved Gertie!
Reviewer: bbwhisperer (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:47 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
Awesome. LOVE IT, start to- well, chapter 50????? or ?????
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