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Reviewer: KitsunexBella (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 05:58 AM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
Wonderful wonderful as always!
Leave it to Renee to think Buffy when she learned about vampires! lol.
Loved it!
Reviewer: Mrs Pandora (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 05:04 AM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
I love how she rescued so many, it makes it seem not so hard to hand that she lost such control. As usual, I cannot wait to read the next two chapters!
Reviewer: Derryni (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 03:04 AM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
Loved it!!!!!! That was a great chapter because not only did she reunite with Charlie and Renee, but because we finally got to hear how she won the fight. Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Twilighted Lady (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:31 AM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU ADDED CHARLIE AND RENEE IN THIS CHAPTER AND THEY KNOW ABOUT THE VAMPIRES!!!!! I have wanted to see that for so long. This is a wonderful story as I've told you many times!!! I love it so much and I can't believe it's almost over, I'll have to read it again! Lol!
Reviewer: vanessa118377 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:26 AM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
Awesome job as usual! It will be sad to see this story end. :(
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:12 AM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
I loved how you wrote this chapter. I thought it was fitting that we learn how the Vicomte died in this particular segment. Well done! I can't wait for the update, but I'm stll saddened that there are only 2 chapters left. =(
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 12:28 AM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
Liz, definitely more dramatic this way. and wow, that was intense. I am surprised that it was renee behind the door, but I guess I shouldn't have been surprised. As much as I would love to have the ending dragged out, I won't complain to them being posted quickly. Bring on the last two chapters...I am impatient to see how you end this.
Manda
Reviewer: fjords (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:51 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
That was amazing! I loved all of it, especially Renee's reactions and watching Buffy. lol Oh Renee.
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:49 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
I was surprised Charlie/Renee knew the big 'V' secret. I certainly didn't expect that! I'm glad she finally told Edward -- now the two of them can move on *together*. :)
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:23 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
Love it!!! I'm glad you waited!
Reviewer: EdwardsBloodType (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:01 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
I loved the part with the hidden stash of garlic..funny and appropriate. One of the reasons I like this story so much is because it is so much more realistic than BD ever was. How, Bella became a monster when she was in the midst of the kill...that's what they all kept telling her would happen. I guess her gift is her control? This is great. I will be sad to see it end, though I am looking forward to closure for Edward and Bella.
Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:40 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
I really like the dynamic of bella's parents knowing... that was unusual and interesting...
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:36 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
Yay update, great chapter as always.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:29 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
Poor Bella. Everything she had to go through, and everything she is going through at the moment.
Great placement on what happened, by the way. It was dramatic this way.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:21 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
Wonderful And Renee I never expected that I loved her and Charlie " I watched the first 4 seasons of Buffy :) " perfect, I hope to see more of them later on. The reveal of the battle was very well paced, good effect.
I am looking forward to the coming chapters
P.S. Still Hating Demetri way to step up Heidi and am I the only one who thinks Heidi was made as a honey trap ?
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:16 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
Ugh why do you have to keep replacing my favorite chapters with even better ones? I mean really, hun. This one was AMAZING. I loved Renee, absolutely LOVED her. Only two chapters left? That makes me sad, and I'm sorry that this review is so short but it's late and I've been up ALL night writing and was just about to go to bed when I saw this updated; I just had to read it. I just wanted you to know I absolutely LOVED this chapter!
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:57 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
That was beautifully creative, love. Wonderful fight scene. And the reunion? So sweet and unexpected. Thank you again.
~Mia
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:42 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
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This was awesome and how he kept everyone prisoner I wasn't even thinking about how he could control their will! Squeal lol you know me always squealing But I was up late and again you manage to give me a bed time gift! Awesome chapter now she has made friends in the Vampire world outside of her family and I am looking forward to seeing how the 2 weeks with her parents go how they talk all about thw wolves and a promise to forever look after them ;) sniffle. A parents worst fear is that they go after their children but Bella will never have that problem she will alwasy be there for them and tehir families for generations for eternity! I wonder how life at the Cullens will go? Will you do the wedding? squeal the whole thing is rather exciting Thanks again for another great and touching chapter sniffle I know its getting close to the end but I love it and will be sad to see them go a bitter sweet request...Post again soon!
Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:04 PM · On: 48. The Olive Branch
Another great chapter...I'm glad I finally know what happened with the Vicomte. Update soon.
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 07:25 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
50 Chapters will make it even. Great update as always. It's nice Edward let her have her mental solitude.I'm wondering what Charlie will say in the next one :)
Reviewer: lisalou59 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 05:18 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
wonderful!
Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 04:25 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
More More Pleez!!!!! Love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lisalou59 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 02:28 PM · On: 37. Helpless
Lizbit, this is a wonderfully written story... I am thoroughly enjoying reading it.
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 01:22 PM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
50 Chapters YA! I love u :) Edward and Bella holding one another on the streets of Paris for two hours - that just so sweet-
That is, until the woman who would be sitting next to her for the next eight hours arrived. Then, the situation became torturesome. - This is why I hate to fly :)
Reviewer: Kel-bell Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 10:03 AM · On: 47. A Long Way Home
I just read this again, and..YAYY!! Its sooo awesome!! :) Good job (that's an understatment!)
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