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Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:59 PM · On: 37. Helpless
I can't believe Charlie hasn't tried to arrest them all!
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:39 PM · On: 35. Justifiable
I think..Jake is going to hurt Edward.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:32 PM · On: 34. Debt Outstanding
Yikes, will Bella turn on Edward for this?
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:20 PM · On: 33. Summons
you.made.me.sniffle. I.had.to.get.Kleenex.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:18 PM · On: 32. Reality
who cut off the freakin' phone call? And I don't blame Jake for hightailin' it
outta there.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:11 PM · On: 30. An American Werewolf in Volterra
Ew, Heidi. Jake your standards have slipped.
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:24 PM · On: 50. Two Steps Back
you're evil ma'am! lol
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Kel-bel Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:56 AM · On: 50. Two Steps Back
Wow..I feel so guilty. I haven't reviewed in like, forever! Sorry, I've been really busy and certain family members kept hogging the computer! But this cahapter (s) was really awesome!! I can't believe it's finally over!! You should totally write some more after this, you write very well! :) Loved the chapters, and great job!!!
Reviewer: Lestatia (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:53 AM · On: 4. Awakening
why did it randomly switch to 3rd person??
Reviewer: hbedell (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:57 AM · On: 50. Two Steps Back
Absolutely a wonderful story! Can't wait to read the ending, and I love the cliffhangers!
Reviewer: Twilighted Lady (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:47 AM · On: 50. Two Steps Back
You evil evil writer you!!!!!!!!!! Lol, don't worry actually when people call you evil it's a good thing. You wouldn't be evil if this story wasn't so damn good....people wouldn't care if you left em' hanging. Lol. I can't wait for the last chapter yet I'm so sad :( it's over!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:50 PM · On: 50. Two Steps Back
This chapter was great. I really enjoyed Bella's reply to Billy's question:
"You see?" Bella said, as if having just proven her thesis. "Life never turns out the way we think it will. It doesn't matter if I'm talking about a job, a relationship, or even how you imagine the rest of your life. No matter how you plan it, life is always going to intercede. Do I regret my decision? Absolutely not." At last Edward's eyes lifted from the floor, meeting hers. They were filled with hope. "Actually, I think I'm kinda lucky. All things considered..."
Perfect answer.
I feel bad that the wedding is getting the rush job. I hope Bella feels like she wants it- and not needs it- before Sunday.
Super chapter.
You're seriously going to wrap all this up in only 1 chapter?!!! I'll believe it when I read it.
Remember the book I told you about before? Squeezed everything into the last ridiculous 14 pages, and it sucked! BECAREFUL!
No one would be upset if you had to make it longer to make sense, and to have a logical conclusion.
I might have to use my ninja skills to get a copy of the last chapter before Friday though, because I'm leaving for vacation in a couple of days (BC here I come). Stealing or waiting... stealing or waiting. You better lock your doors and windows.
Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 09:54 AM · On: 50. Two Steps Back
Ohmygosh, Liz. Killing me here. I'd say I hated you, but I don't. Coz I love your story and never ever want it to end. Buuuut, you keep leaving me hanging! It's nerve-wracking! But, I will live through it. And keep checking for updates on this wonderful story (:
Reviewer: lisalou59 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:28 AM · On: 50. Two Steps Back
I'm actually really glad there's another chapter... I don't want this story to end! Great job!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:46 AM · On: 50. Two Steps Back
That was so so so mean. My soap is coming to an end :( And it's ending with a wedding, Aro and Jane all included I hope. I was glad the visit with Billy went so well and it was funny for everone to know who was the Alpha in Jacob's new family.
Reviewer: nross (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 08:11 PM · On: 50. Two Steps Back
wow. very well written and i was truly engrossed. just read the whole thing straight. good job.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 03:46 PM · On: 29. Crossroads
<3 charlie.....
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 03:35 PM · On: 28. Hellos and Goodbyes
smooth love
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 03:18 PM · On: 27. To The Death
So did Edward bring Bella's passport??????????
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 03:08 PM · On: 26. Verdict
you are evil
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 02:37 PM · On: 22. Arias and Endings
Ah so sad
Dana A.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 02:29 PM · On: 21. Plots and Schemes
you are sick and twisted
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 02:23 PM · On: 20. Monotony
Stalwart Edward trying to absolve himself. We likey *
Dana A.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 02:04 PM · On: 17. Adoption
Damn I hate the Volturi! Great chapter.
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 12:21 PM · On: 50. Two Steps Back
Oh my goodness, can't wait for the wedding and what will happen when they tell Charlie and Renee about Aro. Of course, I'm also anxious about what Jane has planned. I know there is one chapter left so please tell me it has a happy ending.
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