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Reviews For Eternal Dawn
Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 06:08 AM · On: 13. Declaration

OH I HOPE SHE FORGIVES HIM FOR BEING A ASS-HEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 06:00 AM · On: 12. Homecoming

Hed better tell her he loves her!!!!!  AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 05:43 AM · On: 11. Insight

OOOHHHH!!!!!  Poor EDDY!!!!  Well I hope he gets over himself and grabs her and makes everything better!!!!!!!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 03:33 AM · On: 13. Declaration

I am happy that this story is finally getting the recognition it so deserves.  Poor, tortured Edward!  I'm happy he is finally coming around.  Although, I wonder, if it will be so easy for him to "get" Bella now.  She's been hurt by him pretty deeply, and I dout the trust is still there.  Seriously, I love this story.  More. please.

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 03:20 AM · On: 13. Declaration

Carlisle's words to him were really well done.  Please let him not put his foot in his mouth again for the next conversation!

Reviewer: bella mcc (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 01:55 AM · On: 13. Declaration

I ran across this story and could not stop reading!! That Edward loves his misery! I can't wait for the next chapter and see if Edward forgives himself and allows Bella to love him. Or will it be to late???

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:34 PM · On: 10. Found

Edwards acting like such a ass-head again!!!!!  I love him tho!!!!!!!  AWESOME!!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:26 PM · On: 9. Meeting

That was too short!!!!!!!  but im super HAPPEEEEE because it had EDWARD in it!!!!!!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

 

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:15 PM · On: 8. Rules

He wishes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  NEED EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

 

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 10:52 PM · On: 13. Declaration

Wow, please don't take this the wrong way, because your writing is amazing and inspiring. But this was like swimming in molasses. I can't wait to get this sorted out. You're killing me with the angst. (But it is very well done angst nonetheless.)

 

~Mia

Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 07:49 PM · On: 13. Declaration

YAY! So glad that he finally gets it! :) Edward can be very stubborn sometimes. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 05:24 PM · On: 13. Declaration

*hits Edward's head violently with a crowbar* Idiot!

Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 02:22 PM · On: 13. Declaration

Great chapter :) I got a little closure.

Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 01:55 PM · On: 13. Declaration

wow very moving can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 01:45 PM · On: 13. Declaration

I am so scared about what is going to happen next. Will Bella forgive him easily? Not only did he betray her trust in abandoning her, but he gave up on their love AGAIN. All in the name of being right, as Carlisle so eloquently put it. I can't wait to read more! This reunion has got to one hell of a passionate one. THEY DESERVE IT. Please let them have it. Let us have it. And asap!

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 01:39 PM · On: 7. Reunion

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Not jacob!!!!  EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!

~*~ Prima Bella Donna ~*~

 

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 01:14 PM · On: 6. Demon

ooohhhh!!!!!!!  New side to Bella!!!!!  Evil vampy side!!!!!! kwl!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:52 PM · On: 5. Return

Oh sure!!!!!!  NOW he bothers to come back!!!!!!  What a total ass-head!!!!!!

OOOHHHH I LOVE HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:13 PM · On: 4. Awakening

Poor Bella!  Id be freaking out right now too!!!!!!!  Someone needs to kick Edwards ass into gear!!!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:42 AM · On: 12. Homecoming

The "coldness" between B&E is really upsetting to me. I hope this gets fixed soon, hopefully in the next chapter, as you mentioned. It just feels horribly depressing. I really need to read what happens next. Please post it asap!

Reviewer: TrueLegit (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 08:33 AM · On: 12. Homecoming

More more more! I love this story

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 05:10 AM · On: 3. Mistake

That was good!!!!!!  Not raunching, and not as good as it could be, but hot nonetheless!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 05:09 AM · On: 2. Monster

K, I'd be totally shittiny my pants right now, if I were her!!!  Will Edward make it better?????

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 05:08 AM · On: 1. Plans

HMFG!!!!!

~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 11:59 PM · On: 12. Homecoming

Edward is being ridiculous here.  Please have her or someone smack some sense into him.

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