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Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 08:53 AM · On: 16. Futility
It sounds a lot like a Jacob going off before he can really think this through. Hopefully his lack of funds will give him some time to cool off and realize that he just can't do this alone.
Reviewer: EdwardsGirl1117 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 08:52 AM · On: 16. Futility
Hey!!! I adooorrrr ur story!!!! so sad! please write fast and please kill jacob for me bc hes the asshole lol jk jk i love it!
Reviewer: bella mcc (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 07:09 AM · On: 16. Futility
Ack!! Such a cliff hanger!! I was hooked on every word.
Excellent chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next. This is as good as BD!!!
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 07:04 AM · On: 16. Futility
Wow!
Reviewer: Raven Von Absinthe (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 12:44 PM · On: 15. Crime and Punishment
I really like this.
im excited for the next chapter =]
Reviewer: TrueLegit (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 11:29 AM · On: 15. Crime and Punishment
I love this story. So much better than Breaking Dawn! Sounds like there is going to be some good action coming up that was definitely missing from BD, hopefully some sexy action too?? It's been a while ;) Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: bella mcc (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 10:04 AM · On: 15. Crime and Punishment
Oh no!!! You can't just leave us dangling like this!!!
I need to know whats happens! Please update soon. This story is too good.
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 12:17 AM · On: 15. Crime and Punishment
I adored this! It wasn't what I expected, and I heeaaart it.
Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 11:27 PM · On: 15. Crime and Punishment
OMG!!!! Your chpater sumry made me LOL!!!!!!!!
BUT I dont want Bella to go!!!!! POOR EDWARD!!!!!! Will he go after her??? Was that Alices vision???? I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~
Reviewer: EdwardsBloodType (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 10:34 PM · On: 15. Crime and Punishment
Loved how Jacob gave Aro his middle finger to read..very Jacob. The turn of events is making me anxious..great story so far though.
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 09:51 PM · On: 15. Crime and Punishment
Amazing job...didn't throw me for a loop though...Aro is a pretty predictable character, i figured there would be punishment for both Edward and Bella, and I knew he would not kill edward. I am eagerly awaiting the explaination of what Aro wants Edward to do though, that was the only thing I didn't expect.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 01:32 PM · On: 15. Crime and Punishment
Not loving this turn of events but I'm definitely along for the ride.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 01:29 PM · On: 15. Crime and Punishment
I am actually depressed now.... I can't believe they are going to take her away. This was not a very good "Happy New Year" chapter for me. As always, I am an addict. I want more. Soon, please. More.
Reviewer: Ross (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 04:18 PM · On: 14. Mixed Messages
Um.....No. Why did you stop?
Edward leaving without even knowing about it.
Bella in a semi-catonic state.
Jasper.....wanting to have killed her?
All in all it was wonderfull.
Im just wondering if you are going to make Bella forgive Eddie boy easy?
I think he should grovel for a bit.....or a while after all they are Immortal ;)
Reviewer: jakeward (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:59 PM · On: 14. Mixed Messages
Ok, so last night, when I couldn't sleep for thinking of this one, I wondered if the reason Alice say Edward leaving, alone on the plane, was because he was going after Bella. Hmmm??? Twists are my fave as is how you are writing both Edward and Jake! Yeah!!!
Reviewer: paigecullen (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 01:55 AM · On: 14. Mixed Messages
Yay good story so far I can't wait for the rest.
Reviewer: PrimaBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 11:30 PM · On: 14. Mixed Messages
OH NO!!!!!!!! This is too cliffy!!!!!
~*~ PrimaBellaDonna ~*~
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2008 10:55 PM · On: 14. Mixed Messages
I just read this whole thing in one sitting, it's soooooo good! I can't wait to see what happens next with the Volturi.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 08:43 PM · On: 14. Mixed Messages
ahhh! wtf? now I have NO idea what's going on... :)
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:56 PM · On: 14. Mixed Messages
GRRR....cliffies be damned! Haha...great chapter, like always.
Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:36 PM · On: 14. Mixed Messages
The only thing I like more than cliffies is plot twists! Makes the story much more interesting :)
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2008 04:05 PM · On: 7. Reunion
Ewww jacob is totally taking advantage of that situation (sorry I'm not a big jacob fan haha)
I've really enjoyed your story so far! And I can't wait for Edward to find Bella...
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 12:02 PM · On: 14. Mixed Messages
Aaaarrrghhhh! Cliff hanger! I want more Edward and Bella! I need more!
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 12:02 PM · On: 14. Mixed Messages
You're a terrible tease. =P Love the story though.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 06:23 AM · On: 13. Declaration
So why is Carlisle pitying him? Is there still more trouble on the horizon? Edward is such a dumb@$% - I think you've hit the nail on the head with that one. He never knows a good thing when he's got it... Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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