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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 05:11 PM · On: What's Your Name?

Aw! I'm guessing he's going to become her knight in shining armor too!

Author's Response: Hmmm... would be cute, wouldn't it? *cocks eyebrow*

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 01:37 PM · On: What's Your Name?

Awww they are so cute together. :)



Author's Response: Right??

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 08:21 AM · On: From The Very Beginning

Oh. Geez. I felt that last paragraph in my stomach. My older son was hospitalized with viral meningitis when he was 5 months old, and it was the most terrifying time of our lives. He is now a happy, healthy, and totally hormonal 14-year-old who fully recovered, to which my grocery bill will attest.



Author's Response: Sorry to hit home for you, bb. Glad your little one is all better!

Reviewer: Tana (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 07:23 AM · On: What's Your Name?

Awwww! Little Edward and Little Bella are so cute! Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Glad you like!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 03:49 AM · On: What's Your Name?

Wow, is it posiblw for little five year olds to make your heart swoon, because mine is! Edward is clealy smitten with his five year old best friend. The holding hands, and watching the fireworks together, swoon. Still think Renee is to blame for Bella's illness, and I hope they can stop her soon! Damn! Lovin this story!! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: You have me lol'ing hard over here. Glad you like it. Little Edward is a bit cute.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 03:39 AM · On: Meeting Bella

No, no, no, please don't tell me she's one of those sick parents who make their own children sick, just so the can keep them under their care, Munchaeuson Syndrome...gah! That icky orange juice is giving me the creeps, That Bella always dislikes the orange juice...gah!!!! That Bella doesn't like her mother's cooking or the medicine usually! Gah! You've got my attention. Loving it all! Reading on!

Author's Response: Looks around aimlessly....

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 03:32 AM · On: From The Very Beginning

Wonderful background! Understanding the past is going to help us understand more later, I am sure. I really felt bad for poor Charlie. I could hear the crying all around when they came home from the hospital! Poor Charlie. Now Bella has been sick. Damn! Reading on! Great job!!

Author's Response: Having background is very important for this story...yes. thanks bb

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 03:24 AM · On: Prologue

Such a sweet beginning. Sad and yet so hopeful. We get a true idea of the ages of the kids. So damn cute! I can feel the future love! Yes, your writing is so special, and I can't wait for more!!! Reading on!!

Author's Response: Glad you like it so far!!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 02:21 AM · On: What's Your Name?

Cute



Author's Response: Thanks, bb!

Reviewer: sweet_lp_girl (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2012 09:20 PM · On: What's Your Name?

Hmm I'm wondering if it isn't her mother making her sick...bitter tasting oj?



Author's Response: Hmmm... I've had some pretty gross oj in my day. You never know! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Tana (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 11:37 PM · On: Meeting Bella

Oh shame! That's terrible. Just want to give her a hug. Poor girl.

Author's Response:

I hate a sick little one :(  Makes me sad.

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 04:40 PM · On: Meeting Bella

oh no is Renee making her sick.



Author's Response:

Good question! Do YOU think she is? I mean, Bella's been sick since that nasty bout with meningitis. *shrugs shoulders*

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 04:19 PM · On: Meeting Bella

That is so sad!   It's probably the oj, since it tastes so bad to her!



Author's Response:

*shrugs* maybe...maybe not. My little one HATES orange juice :)

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 11:09 AM · On: Meeting Bella

Awww poor Bella I understand how she feels, it's hard being sick all the time.



Author's Response:

I know! I hate it too.

Reviewer: Tana (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 12:07 AM · On: From The Very Beginning

Blonde? LOL! That shocked me, but I say good start. :)

Author's Response:

Yep! Blonde. Stick with me here...it's a long and windy road. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 06:20 PM · On: From The Very Beginning

 I enjoyed all the love between everyone & picturing Bella as a little girl. :)



Author's Response:

Cute, right? Glad you liked it! I can't wait to post more for you all.

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 03:29 PM · On: From The Very Beginning

I liked it so far. I enjoyed how Charlie and Renee met and that they are happy in their parenthood. So I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

I can't wait for you all to read it! I'm so excited about this story.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 03:20 PM · On: From The Very Beginning

Can't wait for another chapter. Renee and Charlie seem like fun people to hang with!

Author's Response:

See? I knew someone would like Charlie and Renee! :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 06:33 AM · On: Prologue

I thought how sweet little E was to Bella. Am looking forward to the rest when you have time.

merrily

kat



Author's Response:

Hoping to update again soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 09:55 PM · On: Prologue

Awww how cute, that was very sweet of little Edward. :)



Author's Response:

Right?? I love him already!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 04:25 PM · On: Prologue

Can't wait for more! Don't torture us too bad with the angst!

Author's Response: *looks around perplexed, trying to figure out how to not lie to you* yeah...umm... Okay, so here's the deal. THis will have some angst. BUt not the kind that makes you want to flounce a story. We're talking about a sick little girl...there will be angst. But I hope I write it in such a way that you stick with me :) THanks for reading and reviewing, as always, bb.

Reviewer: Tana (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 05:27 AM · On: Prologue

I enjoyed the first chapter and can't wait to see where the story will go from here. :)

Author's Response:

Alas...that was only the prologue. It comes from somewhere around chapter 4, roughly.  We'll start at the beginning...the very beginning.  Full chapters will start posting after the new year.

Reviewer: LauraEmily18 (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2011 10:49 PM · On: Prologue

I've got to admit, I was a bit apprehensive when I saw the title but the summary encouraged me to take a peek anyway. Your authors note at the beginning gave me all the confidence I need to read this story and, as you asked, give it a chance. A nice first chapter, interesting to see what happens and what is Bella's illness; looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

See! I wrote that author note for readers like you (like me) who will see a title and say, "nu uh."  Thanks for giving it a chance. I hope you love it just as much as I'm excited about sharing it!

Reviewer: jeena (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Prologue

I like it so far and look forward to more....



Author's Response:

Good! I'm glad. I'll start posting more after new year :)

Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 04:09 PM · On: Prologue

Hi- I think your story definitely deserves a chance. I appreciate your hard work and I will be waiting to see where you take our favorite characters. 

Thank you for sharing your story and Merry Christmas!

Kathryn



Author's Response:

Thanks bb :)  I'll start posting after the new year. What you read was only the prologue. I've got a few chapters finished to date and working on more now!

Merry Christmas!

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