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Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 01:52 PM · On: Always
They're so sweet :)
Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Always
Like it a lot! One constructive thing, though....there's this line here: "His arm slips around her tiny waste as he pulls her into his embrace"
...and it should be "waist". "Waste" is garbage, trash, or excrement. And I really don't want to be thinking about Jasper slipping his arm around Alice's tiny poop. *g*
Reviewer: Word Play (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Always
That was nice :0)
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 06:08 AM · On: Always
Aww! So adorable and sweet. I can see this happening perfectly.
Author's Response: thank you so much for reading! i really appreciate it!
Reviewer: Lady Saffir (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 01:29 PM · On: Always
A nice little Alice/Jasper moment. :)
Author's Response: thank you so much! i really appreciate it! i love them so much!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2008 01:01 PM · On: Always
"Every time I see you in the light, I'm blinded," he tells her as he joins her on their rock. That is my favorite line of all. It means so many things, not just physical illumination... Love it sis!!
Author's Response: heehee- thanks babe!!! i like that line too! and why wouldn't I? i'm ashton kutcher! I'M AWESOME! heehee
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