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Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 - one shot

this was cute. 

I loved how you started it with the shoes- so original and i could picture it totally. 

So Edward isn't homeless- he's engaged to bella and the whole homeless thing on the sidewalk was just his...dream during his coma? If so... I didn't see THAT coming. 

again- it was a really enjoyable read. thanks for posting!



Author's Response:

Thank you! The shoe thing kinda just came to me and resfused to be pushed away =)  And yes, E isn't homeless it's just what his brain decided to broadcast while he was in a coma.  Glad you enjoyed it!

-Kate

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 1 - one shot

good job



Author's Response:

Thank you!

-Kate

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 - one shot

That did not end the way I expected it to at all, but it was wonderful all the same. Thank you for such a lovely story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!! I'm glad you didn't see the end coming! I didn't either when i first wrote it lol it kind of snuck up on me! I'm glad you enjoyed it. =)

-Kate

Reviewer: LaceyBlack (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 - one shot

awwww that was so adorable! I sorta wish the story was longer, but it was perfect :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! As for it being longer, I don't think I'll be extending this one.  I think it says all it needs to say, but I'm glad you enjoyed it and wanted to keep reading! Thanks for the review and the read =)

-Kate

 

Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - one shot

Cute story. Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And thanks for reviewing!

-Kate

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 - one shot

Aw, sweet story!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review =)

-Kate

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 - one shot

Aw! I like a happy ending, and I didn't see this one coming! Very nice. I hope you get the courage to post some more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you didn't see the end coming =) And yes, I love a happy ending as well! Thanks for reading and reviewing, and after the positive response I've been getting, I just might post more!

-Kate

 

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