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Reviews For Scion
Reviewer: jmeyer (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 1


I entered the most recent Twilighted original fiction contest and have spent the past few days reading the entries from the other contestants in that contest. I enjoyed them so much that I decided to check out other original fiction pieces, and I have not been dissapointed.

This story is really incredible. Your characters are so real. You had what, 3,000 words to write this story in? I feel like I know Ishara. Her voice is really strong in this story. I love how playful this all was, and how snarky. You did a wonderful job, really. Congratultations on the honorable mention and I hope you continue to write because you are really able to weave a tale well.


Author's Response:

Congratulations on finishing an original piece for the contest! It can be quite a struggle, I know.

Ishara is indeed a strong-voiced character; she's still knocking around my head, getting herself into trouble--I have more than a few pages of her in ridiculous situations written out.Thanks to this contest/story, she really has taken on a life of her own.

Thank you again for your kind words!

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey you!


 I finally made it onto this story!

your writing - its just great. Always beautiful & lyrical. .

LOVE Tallis - he's hot. & like this story. Will there be more?I think it could be - quite easily. But I would beg you to focus on Aegnus first!! He's such an arrogant hunk of Rarr! :D

Anyways - gorgeously written & very interesting piece this.




Author's Response: Emmy. you're so good to me. THANK YOU for taking the time to review this. I'm glad you enjoyed!

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