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Reviews For Seducing Ms Swan
Reviewer: abbythebollix (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Siberia

Wauw, this is so good. I hate the misunderstanding! Ugh. Can't they just kiss and make up?

 

" so really, really, ridiculously good-looking" - did someone watch Zoolander? lol



Author's Response:

Yes! I adore that film xD

Reviewer: abbythebollix (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Mrs Robinson

ooh, this is gutwrenching

Reviewer: abbythebollix (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 09:15 AM · On: A Meeting

Beautiful.

Reviewer: MrsHannahCullen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Leader

Worth waiting for

=] x

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Leader

OM!!!

I cant wait for the next chpater.

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:03 PM · On: The Truth

Why would people send you hate mail??? I think the story is good :D

im giving you a 10

Reviewer: ryudo911 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Leader

i really like this story. it is sad, but it makes you think.

Reviewer: Cyartia (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 05:16 AM · On: WEREWOLVES?!

Haha.

Okay. Yes, I'm re-reading this chapter again, shoot me. 

The ending line is just classic. Love it. :)

There is actually a real reason for this review, not just to comment on how fantastic your story is and how the ending is hillarious. I would like to recommend two songs; "Issues" by the Saturdays and "Why Does It Always Rain On Me?" by Travis. Both songs I think fit perfectly with your story. 

Already having deprivation problems; I'm off to read Chapter 10 ii. xx

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:23 PM · On: A Meeting

This is going to be in interesting

:)

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Leader

I have really enjoyed this story and hope to read more in he near future keep up the ggod work can't wait to rea about what happens next

Reviewer: lostlamb07 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 03:21 PM · On: WEREWOLVES?!

i am so entrhalled by this story! i can't wait to see what happens next.. and i seriously hope someone rips tanya's head off her pretty neck :)

Reviewer: Kayten (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Leader

I absolutely LOVE this story - it's so well written and thought out! I hope a new chapter is coming super soon 'cause I'm dying to know what happens!!

Reviewer: edwardsmyluvr (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Leader

i loved it u need to make more!

Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Leader

what happens next???  does bella wake up, is she really okay.  do her and edward get back together, i just have to know??

Reviewer: tiderider (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Leader

hey this is my first time EVER commenting on some thing like this, and i hav to say , my fisrt time really reading anthing off a site like this, and i had opened a few titles and was shaking my head "sick puppies, pretty turned off, but i read your story and was BLOWN away, it felt like it could slide right in with the series! was up until 3am reading!!! the interaction with the cullens and finally bella reacting wth passion and letting herself be heard, it draws you in like the series, with the anticapation and angst, and i love how  the story is allowed to be adult .  and  i really like edwards point of view being allowed,  it sounds like you hav a look of requests to continue, so i'll  add mine to the list

thanks again

Reviewer: valmaldo75 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Leader

This is an amazing story SOO well written.  I haven't been able to do much of anything since I started reading it Please don't give up on it ---  anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: valmaldo75 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:19 AM · On: The Truth

Awesome chapter --- finally relieved to see Bella grow a backbone -- great writing

Reviewer: annienow (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:30 AM · On: The Truth

This story is probably one of the best I have read on here.  Way to go Bella for not giving in!!  I hope you'll be updating soon.  I have to see how this all plays out.

Reviewer: twilightedtwilighter747 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Innuendo

tanya is such a frikkin b-yotch!!!

Reviewer: twilightedtwilighter747 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Lullabies

I was literally laughing wen bella was like "go back to your seat edward" and he was like "or what you'll give me detention?" LOLOL I was imagining Bella giving detention to Edward ROFL!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightedtwilighter747 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:20 PM · On: A Meeting

omgomgomomg i nearly fell off my chair when edward appeared. i am so favoriting this story!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Leader

You promised to update soon!!!!! Do it!!!! I just love your work so much. Bella's awesome, so real! Great job!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:36 AM · On: A Meeting

It's just amazing! You're definitely my favorite author here!

Reviewer: shead (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Leader

I love it so far!!!  I love to see Bella in controll the was she has been.  Its a side of her that doesn't seem possible!  I would like to see her keep it up for a while and really make Edward earn her trust back!  He should really have to work for it.  Also it was kinda funny when she treated him just like a student and he got so mad about it!  Sorry I just started to read this the other day, and now I can't wait to read the next ch.

Reviewer: xjennjennx (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Bloody Hands

Wow. this story is crazy-angsty. I love it but at the same time it's soooo overwhelming. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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