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Reviews For Seducing Ms Swan
Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Innuendo

Yes Duh I want to finish reading this story. This is a great story keep going please. Oh yeah I really don't like Tanya.

Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Motorbikes

oooooooooooo I loved this Chapter I like her on the Bike she should ride it more often lol

Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Fear

Edward Edward get a clue. I wonder if Jasper got a feel of Bella's emotions ooo that would be freaking awsome

Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Lullabies

What What have you done indeed. OMG are u serious why would u hurt Esme and Lie to her at least u could visit with her or something please and why hasn"t any of the other Cullens especially Alice came and talked to you

Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Dear Edward...

Oh Claire that was beautiful! That letter was perfect. When you look at a story like this, a story where Bella finds out who she really is and developes healthy feelings for Edward, it really throws into light how ridiculous she is in the real series. I'm so proud of you for this. It's excellent.

I hope you're well. I'm following you on twitter now. :)

Reviewer: Amberlynn (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:24 AM · On: A Meeting

The letter was so good!

Reviewer: Banriona (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Fear

OMG you're only just 16?  Your writing is awesome :) x

Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:39 AM · On: A Meeting

I'm so glad I decided to read this! I'm instantly hooked. I listened to "Do What I Have To Do" throughout the chapter and you were right...that was the perfect song for the chapter. I'm pumped about this story :) Warning: you have a super fan here ;)

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Motorbikes

Okay....now that was cool

Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 02:36 AM · On: Siberia

oooooo they almost kissed yeah!!!!

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Dear Edward...

I LOVED this chapter! The way you had Edward realize the things he had been doing and then Bella's letter - it was just so good!

Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 01:50 PM · On: White Walls

I was waiting for this EPOV and was not dissapointed loving this story can't wait to read the next chapter

Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Mrs Robinson

Ahhh still reeling me in very interested to see what happen to Brady did he try to protect Bella form Victoria and land in a coma or something

Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 12:45 PM · On: A Meeting

Omg first chapter I'm hooked now reel me in lol here we go chappie two

Reviewer: dephenrhea (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Innuendo

Please finish it.  I hate when stories just stop and besides it gives me something to read when I am bored at work overnight.  :-)

Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Dear Edward...

Wow, that was alot to take in, GO BELLA!!! and CONGRADULATIONS EDWARD on doing the RIGHT thing for once, lol

Reviewer: Shade of Blue (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Dear Edward...

Beautiful ending.  I absolutely loved your story, thank you for sharing it.

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Dear Edward...

So glad to see the update!  Just the right amount of angst, and bravo on the letter!  I can see why it was so pivital and can only imagine how difficult it would have been for me to write if my story had needed such an element.  So empathy and kudos for an element well done!

It fun for me envisioning how their life posing as humans would go at this point (assuming she'd still turn vamp at some point).  She's now similar in age to Esme when she was turned.  Quite a shift in the societal dynamic and coverstory.  But it makes me wonder if she at this point thinks she could live out her human life.  Kinda think even if she did, the knowledge that he'd suicide at her death would still have an enormous impact on that decision, so she wouldn't do it.

As eager as ever for more!  Thank-you for sharing your talented imaginings with us!!!

Reviewer: edwardsisobel (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Dear Edward...

Beautiful chapter.  That letter was amazing,  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Suz

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Dear Edward...

I loved it.  I agree that the letter was extremely important.  It does address some great flaws that always bothered me about her character in the fics, and it was sweet and uplifting to read.

I can't wait for them to finally talk in person. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Dear Edward...

WOW, that is truly some letter. So Bella is going back to Washington, she'll have to go back to NY to pack and give notice, I wonder what will happen there. I can't wait to see what Edward's reaction is to the letter.

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Dear Edward...

The letter was definitely amazing. Your Bella said things I have long wished SM's Bella would have said to Edward. You have turned Bella from a victim into a victor. Thank you for that!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Dear Edward...

The letter explained a lot of what she is feeling although I don't know if I read it wrong or what does she want him to come out when she moves there or to wait awhile?

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Dear Edward...

Great chapter and the letter from Bella was amazing she understands herself so well and put it in away that I think Edward understands to. Thank you for this wonderful story. Till next chapter.

 

Lilly

Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Dear Edward...

I look forward to more!!!  I agree with you about Bella.  It was nice being able to see her grow and learn.  At the same time it was also nice to see Edward to the same.  Please update soon!

Bethanne

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