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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 11:41 AM · On: August 29, 2005 Bella Writes

I have to say, I'm really looking forward to see how events will play out now! As for names, Bella has shortened her own name due to her dislike of formal names, kind of a hypocrite when it came to Nessie, so keeping that in mind, something short and sweet. Sara? Modern spelling, old fashioned name.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, snowgood!

I'm actually leaning toward Carlie Elizabeth Cullen right now...!!!

Kathie

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 08:13 AM · On: August 29, 2005 Bella Writes

I say since Bella loves classical books and Edwrards mothers name was classical you go with Elizabeth  Love love love want more sniffle



Author's Response:

Thanks for the input, ssst!

I'm leaning toward Carlie Elizabeth Cullen right now...

Kathie

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 05:58 AM · On: May 18, 1969

Hello! I am very excited to read your story. I normally only read completed works because I had my heart broken a few times... getting fully engulfed in a tale that unexpectedly is abandoned....

I adore Edward, so I couldn't resist taking a chance.... 

I cannot wait to read on..



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you for giving EAC a chance, chyla1!~

There is one more chapter coming...and epilogue...this won't be abandoned!

Kathie

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 04:45 AM · On: August 29, 2005 Bella Writes

Anthonia "Toni" pronouced An' Tha knee' ah.  DJ



Author's Response:

That's a lovely name, DJ!

I'm thinking about Carlie Elizabeth Cullen right now...

Kathie

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 11:54 PM · On: August 29, 2005 Bella Writes

Great chap Kathie, finally "the cat is out of the bag" can't wait to read Edwards entry. I'm really happy it was Bella the one to tell him what was coming 'cause this way he now knows how she feels about it insted of just assuming and taking crazy decisions without her.

About the baby's name what about

Evangeline (ee VAN jeh leen) greek name that means good news; bearer of good news. Her nick name could be Evie.

Annabel (AN ah bell) latin name that means easy to love.

can't think of another right now, if I come up with something else i'll send it to you.

Kisses.R.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, lovesurfer!

Oh, such pretty name suggestions, thank you!

I'm leaning toward Carlie Elizabeth Cullen right now...

Thank you, also, for the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: mousekemom (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 10:47 PM · On: August 29, 2005 Bella Writes

RoseMary (Rose & Mary Alice), Charleigh (Charlie), Allison (Alice), Emma (Emmett), Carlie (Carlisle & Charlie)...the list is endless.  It's been a fun story.  Looking forward to the rest!



Author's Response:

Thanks, mousekemom, for the suggestions and those lovely stars.

I'm leaning toward Carlie Elizabeth Cullen.

Kathie

Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 09:44 PM · On: August 29, 2005 Bella Writes

That was fun! "I am not engaged yet!" - Bella really wanted to make her stance clear there, didn't she!

Do we get Edward's reaction?

I agree that it's really hard to find a good name for Baby Cullen. Elizabeth could work. That would relate to a) Edward's human mother, b) Bella, since Isabella means fair Elizabeth (or something like that) in Spanish, and c) one of Bella's favourite fictional characters (Elizabeth Bennet).

Or Antonia?

Rosalice is not so bad. Sally for short.

I am hoping for lots more from The Journal of Edward A. Cullen.



Author's Response:

LOL...I think she is strongly hinting that she wants a PROPOSAL!!!

Yes, E will chat about this journal entry in the epilogue...at length!

I'm actually leaning toward Carlie Elizabeth Cullen right now...

Thank you for reading and those lovely stars, hoppyliz!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2011 09:24 PM · On: August 29, 2005 Bella Writes

Wow!  I wasn't expecting to hear from Bella, but I doubly wasn't expecting Bella to be writing about the baby.  But it was the best way to deliver the news to Edward, He Who Overreacts.  Honestly I would love to know how he reacts to this bombshell.  He's got two days to freak out.  Alice is hilarious in that she cleverly took herself out of the picture here (she doesn't have to deal with his initial freakout), but I'm not sure that was a good thing because he's going to be demanding to see her visions posthaste.  I swear I wouldn't be surprised if he goes to hunt them down in Seattle and pounce on them-Bella because he'll need to have her in his arms, and Alice for the visions.  That's actually kind of amusing... As far as names go, I got nothing.  Sorry.  I suck at naming anything, I named my cat "Baby" because I couldn't think of anything better. 



Author's Response:

I was rather startled to write Bella writing here too...LOL...

But it did seem to work out well.

"He Who Overreacts"...yes, sums E up!

We will hear his thoughts in the epilogue...good thing B kept telling him to SIT!

I'm leaning toward Carlie Elizabeth Cullen right now.

Thanks, sweets, I sure do enjoy your comments!

Kathie

Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 09:23 PM · On: August 29, 2005 Bella Writes

I have TRULY enjoyed your writing this story - of all the moments you've captured I enjoyed this one the best - Bella is so grown up as always and she's speaking up to Edward and NOT going to let him run - I'm only sorry its near the end!!!  LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Oh! Thank you, tushka!  I do appreciate hearing that...and the lovely stars too!

Kathie

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 05:49 PM · On: August 29, 2005 Bella Writes

Very clever way to wrap up all your loose threads, really liked it. Only one problem, I hate to see this come to an end. I really love reading about Edward and Bella in love and living their lives forever with the family! Looking forward to the epilogue, hope it's a long one.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kathy...I was surprised when I finished...that it felt like "the end"...!!! I'm sad to see it end too.

The epilogue will be nice and LONG!

Thanks for all of your lovely support...I do like reviews like THIS one!

Kathie

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 09:28 AM · On: March 11, 2005

Nice chapter again. Loved Emmett (as always) and his protective ways as well as his goofy ways. Gonna go see what happens in the next entry. :)



Author's Response:

Emmett gets to have fun in several of these chapters!

Thanks for reading, SS!

Kathie

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 02:37 AM · On: March 7, 2005

I think an error has been made. You wrote, "At the end of January Alice had come flying into the house after hunting with Jasper. She had seen a vision of snow falling in the predawn hours and black ice in the parking lot at the high school. None of us had wanted the vision that we had seen on January 25, 1981 to happen."  Wasn't Bella born September 13, 1987?



Author's Response: Yes, Bella was born in September, 1987... They had seen a vision in January of the accident...and in January of 2005 they fixed the parking lot and Tyler's van so it wouldn't happen... Thanks for reading, DJamethyst. Kathie

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 11:37 PM · On: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.

He actually attacked those guys! I wonder how badly he beat them up or is it mauled them?



Author's Response:

He pounded them a bit...!!!

Thanks for your review, SS!

Kathie

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 08:45 PM · On: July 23, 2005 Nomad

I feel a little sorry for Eoin right now! I'm sure he'll find some comfort food soon, though! Can't wait to see what Bella says to forever! This version has the pressure situation turned a 180!

Author's Response:

LOL...comfort food!

Kathie

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 01:55 PM · On: February 28, 2005

WOW a date and Bella pecking Edward on the cheek in front of Charlie! How crazy is that? Love it!!

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 01:10 PM · On: January 18, 2005

Ohhhhh! I get it! Your making it your own. COOL! I love it anyways, so there!

I can't wait to see your twists and turns in this world!

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 12:38 PM · On: January 1, 2005

Photos and sniffing shirts? Naaahhh, nothing stalkerish at all. RIGHT!

Poor Edward he has no idea what he is getting involved in.

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 12:22 PM · On: January 18, 2001

Hmmm... I'm not sure about this chapter. It seems... kind of... a bit out off Twilight. It could have happened, but it just doesn't play well with what really happened. Well, let me read on, it might change to make your story fall on the tracks of Twilight...

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 12:11 PM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

"congratulations! ITS A WIFE" I was practically laughing my butt off at that comment. And then Edward and Jasper attack, OMG I could not stop laughing.

 

Then you had to go ahead and make me sad :(

 

The glitter was either related to that song you had a chapter or 2 ago. And I can only imagine what you had in mind when you wrote it. But my mind can be dirty because come on! this is Emmett we talking about...



Author's Response:

Ah, Emmett...such a cutie!

So sorry that I made you sad...((((hugs))))!!!

Thanks for reading, SS!

Kathie

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 11:52 AM · On: January 25, 1981

30 Years. It's like waiting for the BD DVD: "When can I have it in my hot little hands?" ;)

For the immortals it must fly by, but for Edward it would feel like a million years :(



Author's Response:

LOL...like waiting for BD2, too...lol

I think it did feel like a LONG time to him!

Thanks for reading, Snowball Sniper!

Kathie

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 11:36 AM · On: June 20, 1976

OMG! I had to get the lyrics to understand the meaning of the song you mentioned! That's so funny. Poor Emmett LOL I wonder what Edward did to him

LOL

LOL



Author's Response:

I'm thinking he POUNDED him!

LOL

Thanks for reading, Snowball Sniper!

Kathie

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 10:27 AM · On: May 18, 1969

WOW! I loved this chapter. I am so intrigued in finding out how the puzzles all fit together. And I have not read "Midnight Sun" I put that on my bucket list or SM finishes it. So I really want to know how this all fits together. :)

 



Author's Response:

Dang...I wish that SM would finish MS!!!

Thanks for giving EAC a chance, Snowball Sniper! Hope I can make the puzzle pieces work for you!

Kathie

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 03:47 AM · On: July 23, 2005 Nomad

Squeeee!!! Love love love!!!  I am so glad hes thinking of forever and I fear a little about thisnew vamp no good can come from this...   Post again soon!!!  



Author's Response:

Thank you, SSST!

So glad you enjoyed this chapter...he IS thinking about forever!

Kathie

Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 04:37 PM · On: July 23, 2005 Nomad

I can just see Esme charming her way into Charlie's good graces. Charlie never had a chance. I wonder what Billy really made of that. Obviously he wasn't to impressed by Esme himself.



Author's Response:

Charlie really DIDn't have a chance!

Billy, eh, Esme probably wasn't that impressed with HIM either...LOl

Thanks for reading, hoppyliz!

Kathie

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 04:33 PM · On: July 23, 2005 Nomad

Take your time, girl, the holidays always keep you busy! It's really quite nice of you to get us these chapters, with all the hustle and bustle! Made me a little sad, for Eoin to find that Victoria was dead, though it must have been of some comfort to know James was gone too. Despite Paul's injuries, the wolves and the vampires managed to work well together. I'm crossing my fingers that this is a situation that may continue for a long time.



Author's Response:

I was sad for Eoin too...

Thanks for all of your lovely support, Kathy!

Kathie

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