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Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2011 02:50 AM · On: January 1, 2005

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. I get excited when I see the new post every day.  What a wonderful imagination you have.  I LOVE IT!!!

twimom1960



Author's Response:

Well thank you NOW for reading, twimom1960!

I do appreciate it!

Kathie

Reviewer: rabbit681 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2011 02:22 AM · On: January 1, 2005

Edward was always a stalker - he watched Bella sleep for months before he told her, so this is very in character.  I can't wait to see if all this "preparation " will make their first meeting different.  Will he be able to talk to her the first meeting or still give her the "evil eye"!



Author's Response:

He really IS a stalker, isn't he?  But at least this stalking is to keep her SAFE.

Thanks for reading, rabbit681~

Kathie

Reviewer: Lovesbooks (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2011 12:55 AM · On: January 18, 2001

Fantastic! Keep Writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I will...can't see an END for this one yet...lol

Kathie

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 12:25 PM · On: January 18, 2001

Great plan. Can't wait to read more...

Author's Response:

Thanks, sweetie...

Putting the next bit in the line-up now...

Kathie

Reviewer: archgirl (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 09:44 AM · On: January 18, 2001

I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, arachgirl!

More to come!~

Kathie

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 09:36 AM · On: January 18, 2001

Interesting for him to know it is coming



Author's Response:

He's getting a little peek...I think it really would have changed things for him...giving him TIME to get used to the idea of BELLA!~

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 08:57 AM · On: January 18, 2001

I am loving these daily updates! I don't know how you do it, but thanks! Great chapter. I'm glad this issue was brought up ahead of time so it doesn't take him by surprise.



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying this, potterfan922~!  My validating beta, nikkipattinson, is wonderful!

Ah, he has OTHER surprises waiting for him!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 07:02 AM · On: January 18, 2001

Love it!  This is so different from anything I've read on here, and it's so well done!  I really like Rose in this.  She's had lots of time to get used to the idea and I love how she described Edward's change an his happiness since Alice's visions began.  I really enjoyed this chapter.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Dydear! Lovely to read your thoughts about this little sotry.

Rose was a surprise to me as I wrote it...I like that when it happens.

Kathie

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 06:05 AM · On: January 18, 2001

Rose! Who would have thought? It actually kind of makes sense, she's a no nonsense type of person and if something has to happen it just does! So can't wait to see what Alice sees next!

Author's Response:

I KNOW!!! ROSE!!! She shocked me as I typed...lol

Thanks so much, for your support!

Kathie

Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 05:55 AM · On: January 18, 2001

I think that's a great idea - especially having Rose make the suggestion! This is just so much fun! It's kind of like having a slumber party with Edward and listening to him talk about the girl he has a crush on! So sweet and romantic!



Author's Response:

Hi, Mav...ROSE surprised the heck out of me when I was writing this.  I love it when characters do that!

Ah...a slumber party with EDWARD...nice to think about!

Kathie

Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 05:41 AM · On: January 18, 2001

Yes, I can really picture the scene: everything happy and peaceful, and then -wham- a real shocker of a vision.

Poor Edward. How long will it take him to recover from this? For even with the plans that have been made, he still seems a bit anxious.



Author's Response:

LOL...yes...SHOCK!!!  Poor dear...

He's got more TIME to get used to this idea too...TIME is very helpful here.

Thanks for the lovely stars, sweetie!

Kathie

Reviewer: rabbit681 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 05:30 AM · On: January 18, 2001

I liked how Rose, who is usually so negative, is encouraging to Edward even though she maybe is still not thrilled that Bella is human.  She could have just said that this proves her point that Edward should not be with a human.  Instead, she takes the higher gorund of saying that she knows Edward can overcome this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, rabbit681~

Yes...she's had TIME, also...I think SAGA Rose might have come around with TIME too...instead of just with the baby...

Kathie

Reviewer: redauntie1 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 03:33 AM · On: January 18, 2001

good plan. so rose is on board sort of.



Author's Response:

Hi, redauntie1~

Yes...she's had time to get USED to the idea too!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 06:26 PM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

The birth entry really is something. Edward is so happy to know that Bella is there now.



Author's Response:

Hi HL!

Yes, he's glad to know that she is actually on the earth WITH him...even though not CLOSE to him!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 03:50 PM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

Great - he and the Cullens are learning more and more about Bella. But I'm betting the lure of her smell will be a total surprise...

Author's Response: Ah the scent of his singer! That will play into this! Thanks for reading and the four lovely stars, rubyred_fm_tx! Kathie

Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 12:39 PM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

I really love this.  Emmett is HILARIOUS in this fic!  HAHAHA!!! Please, please continue! 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you are enjoying this Emmett...he is such a JOY to right!

There will be more!

Thanks for reading, Dydear!

Kathie

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 06:54 AM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

Loved the tossing Emmett around part



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Gelsamina!

I think they thought that was fun too!

Kathie

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 06:12 AM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

Ah Emmett! He knows he's going to get a beating! He's kind of like a big playful dog who likes to wrestle over a chew toy! Don't tell him I called him a dog! It must be strange to know your wife as a baby when you're an adult! Alice is right that he should wait, it would be weird! Not to mention the singer thing...

Author's Response:

Hi, snowgood!

Yes...Emmett had better run FAST...lol...although I don't think that he can outrun Edward!

I won't tell him you called him a DOG!!!  WE have to save THAT for Jacob...lol

Ah...and even though Alice's visions are subjective...he's already thinking of her in that way...but NOT in a pervy way...LOL

The singer thing...yep, it will come up!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 05:06 AM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

OH WHAT I WOULD NOT GIVE TO BE ABLE TO CURL UP ON A RAIDNY DAY WITH A HANDFULL OF HIS JOURNELS  OR HIM  



Author's Response:

That's a lovey visual!  If I ever find them I'll send them over!

Thanks for reading, twilightgma1954!

Kathie

Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 02:21 AM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

Again, wonderful entries! This really feels how Edward would have reacted to knowing Bella was coming. I can imagine the theoretical idea of a wife bringing him happiness, without all that soul nonsense getting in the way!



Author's Response:

Hi, Mav!

I'm thinking that having TIME would help him with all of his issues...lol

Kathie

Reviewer: qlsm (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 02:19 AM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

This approach to the story is amazing. Lokking forward to updates. keep them coming. i know it means borrowing freely from Midnight Sun, But this is a chance to interject a lot of Edward's inner turmoils that are in Midnight Sun but not in the pure Twilight canon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, qlsm!

I am trying to stay with the canon timeline...but things are changing because they KNOW some of what's coming...

Makes for a much more cheerful, or at least, HOPEFUL, Edward!

Kathie

Reviewer: redauntie1 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 01:18 AM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

This is really cool.  But how is this going to keep her scent from gettting in the way.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, redauntie1!

Ah...hopefully something WILL help!

They will come up with something...I'm sure!

Kathie

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2011 12:51 AM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

I really like this story!  I always love reading things in Edward's POV and I love how sweet and caring he is in this story.  I am wondering why Alice won't let him just go to Fork's to see her without anyone knowing he is there.  Maybe she saw that doing that would somehow turn out badly - maybe he wouldn't be able to handle the scent of her blood at this time or make him think that he can never overcome it? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, anon...

I know that Alice saw something BAD happen...and he really has to TRUST Alice here...

Kathie

Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 12:42 AM · On: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

This is such a wonderful story - I love seeing bella through alice's eyes and reading the background thoughts of the family members - would love a chapter on each of them thinking about what was happening - thanks for the enjoyable read!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and those lovely stars, tushka!

I'm actually going to write a journal outtake for the FANDOM FOR TEXAS WILDFIRE relief....let me know WHOSE journal entry you'd like...I"m taking a poll.

http://texasfires.ysar.info/

Kathie

Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2011 12:43 PM · On: January 25, 1981

Ooh! This is really good! Are you sticking exactly to canon or are you changing things up a tad? What a great idea! Love it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Mav!

There will be changes...since Edward KNOWS she's coming...and some of the visions will give him a "head's up" on what may be coming in his future...

Hope you enjoy the rest!

Kathie

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