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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 08:49 AM · On: March 12, 2005 The Meadow
Yes, he was grumpy! I had a big ole laugh at how stalkerish it would be to watch her as she sleeps! It seems that this Edward has had more time to acclimate himself to her and so could indulge in more than one measly kiss! It would probably make one less grumpy!
Author's Response: I was actually quite shocked when I reread the chapter! No wonder she had whiplash through the book!
MORE kisses will cheer him up...lol
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 07:11 AM · On: March 13, 2005 Meeting the Family
I love that Rose is friendly in your story
Author's Response: Thank you! Sometimes Rose really can be a good girl!
But not often...lol
Thanks for reading, sweetie!
Kathie
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 07:05 AM · On: March 13, 2005 Meeting the Family
Lovely visit was had by all! It's nice that Rose is working on Bella's ole truck, instead of snarking on her humanity. You have fixed a few things that needed fixing! Bella and Esme trading recipes and so forth in the kitchen, and Edward sharing his journals and art work were just right. Now, for that bedeviled baseball game! (p.s., I'm a Kathy, too!)
Author's Response: I thought you were, Kathy!
I like Esme and she never gets enough air time...I'd think she would have worked at cooking for all those years...as she waited for her DAUGHTER!!!
Yes, now for those pesky NOMADS...
Thanks for reading, sweetie!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 07:43 PM · On: March 12, 2005 The Meadow
Lovely! Bella is so accepting of everything. I enjoyed this a lot.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Looby Luscious!
SAGA Bella seemed to be accpepting too...and I think she would have had an easier time of it with a NICER Edward...no whiplash, you know!
Kathie
Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 06:55 PM · On: March 12, 2005 The Meadow
That was beautiful.
What a difference it makes that Edward has already accepted and welcomed the fact that he and Balla are meant to be together.
Author's Response: SO glad you like this one...yes, I'd think with all that TIME to get used to things, he'd have been much more accepting of all things BELLA...
Thanks for reading, sweetie, and those lovely stars!
Kathie
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2011 01:38 PM · On: March 12, 2005 The Meadow
Canon Edward acted positively bipolar in the meadow. The temper, the back and forth with whether or not to be there with Bella, honestly is it no wonder she was so insecure in their relationship? With one hand he pushed her away while with the other he was pulling her in. He was much nicer here. And honest! Oh, how we appreciate honesty in my corner. It was a lot to take in from bella's perspective I'm sure, I mean you don't get told often that someone had a vision of you getting married before you were even born. Not to mention the whole vampire aspect. As a sidenote. Lol.
Author's Response: He really DID...I had to reread it to see what was said (even though I've read it like 10 times in the past)...and his SNARK was high in this...and WHIPLASH for sure!
Honesty is important to me too...
THIS Edward has had TIME to come to grips with the thought of a wife...a mate...and a HUMAN Bella...that HAD to help...at least I think so!
Thanks for your insights, Sheeijan!
Kathie
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 10:58 AM · On: March 12, 2005 The Meadow
Loved it! It was cute when Edward was acting like the seventeen year old that he physically is. Bella seemed to take the running much more easily than expected. She also took the visions very well. Good job!
Author's Response: His 17 y/o inner self wants to come out to PLAY!!!
SM kept saying how mature Bella was...well, I'm letting her be so!
Thanks, so much, potterfan922, for your lovely reviews!
Kathie
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 08:18 AM · On: March 12, 2005 The Meadow
Great day at the meadow
Author's Response: It certainly was nice..and cheerful!
Thanks for reading, Gelsamina!
Kat
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 08:17 AM · On: March 12, 2005 The Meadow
I'm liking your Edward meadow reaction better, too. But then, I already told you that, didn't I? I know we've all read the SM books over and over, but this is still expanding and improving those wonderful stories. Whatever I'm trying to say here, just know I think you're doing a great job!
Author's Response: He certainly is MORE cheerful!
Thanks, so much, for your support, sweetie!
Kathie
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 07:33 AM · On: March 12, 2005 The Meadow
Ok no stalking but ehy aren t they like on the phone all night. Teenagers and lovers would be. Or im or email or text.
Author's Response: LOL...he's doing the HUMAN thing...chatting on the phone...but not being IN her bedroom!
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 11:30 AM · On: March 11, 2005
Looking forward to the meadow=-)
Author's Response: Me too!!!
Coming soon!!!
Thanks for reading potterfan922~
Kathie
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 10:46 AM · On: March 11, 2005
I just love reading that Edward can feel and act like a 17 year old! With his glee of holding Bella's hand in public and showing her off, and his gloating over poor Mike, next thing you know he'll be showing off at sports! Oh....
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying this Edward, snowgood! His inner 17 y/o pops up later on...!!!
NO showing off at sports...LOL
Kathie
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2011 09:11 AM · On: March 11, 2005
Yeah, I think Bella would thank a freak tornado if it kept someone from asking her out. Anyway, it was looking forward to the meadow and the nomads in particular. Emmett will be so happy to get to fight. Baseball, then a battle? Probably a perfect day for him.
Author's Response: Hello, Anonymous!
TRUE...she really does had that whole dance thing...
Baseball and then a battle...sounds good!
Thanks for reading...
Kathie
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 08:44 AM · On: March 11, 2005
These chapters are fairly short, but it's cool that they come every day! It's very nice to see Edward so happy, getting to know Bella and she to know him. I'm supposing the nomads Alice has seen will be Laurent, Victoria and James. Oh brother! See you tomorrow, I hope.
Author's Response: THey are rather short...but I just finished one that is 5k...I'm thinking of calling it: THE NEVERENDING CHAPTER
LOL
You would be write about the nomads...pesky little critters that they are...
Thanks for reading, sweetie!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 02:18 AM · On: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.
Not thought about changing her? Tut tut Edward! I can't imagine that it hasn't crossed someone's mind! Emmett wouldn't be backwards about it, but then he wouldn't hide his thoughts either.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: I know! Poor dear had no thought about it...he was just focused on the thought that a HUMAN would love him enough to marry him...
Also...Alice has been hiding a vision...or ten...!!!
The next bit is in the queue right now!
Thanks for your support, LL!~ I do appreciate it!
Kathie
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 04:58 PM · On: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.
I guess Edward has just accepted Alice's vision of his human bride for so long, it never occurred to him to question it too much. It will certainly be foremost among his thoughts now I'm sure. The ease with which Bella accepts Edward and all that entails always tickles me. I've always thought I would be the same, in her place. Just my little fantasy! Allow me to repeat myself and tell you how very much I'm enjoying this story!
Author's Response: He really was surprised by that thought...and I think that Alice has been HIDING things from him...
I think I might be the same...when you FEEL that connection...it's just right..
Thanks, so much, k1942, for all of your support!
Kathie
Reviewer: IANticipate (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 12:32 PM · On: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.
More please.
Author's Response: Thanks for you lovely stars, IANticipate!
I'm putting more in the queue right now!
Kathie
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 12:11 PM · On: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.
I knew that she knew about the Cullens from Jacob! Great job!
Author's Response: Clever girl!!!
Thanks for reading, sweetie!
Kathie
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 09:31 AM · On: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.
Hmn. So will she be as desperate if thete is so little threat? I wait to see.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, angelblue!
Ah...but there is a threat coming!
Kathie
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 09:03 AM · On: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.
THis is really great
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie...I do appreciate your support!
Kathie
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 06:04 AM · On: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.
I've always wondered about the eye color thing. I just never could get how in the books, people were not to notice their eyes. I mean, if you're watching someone, even from across the room surreptitiously, it's noticeable. *shrugs* Oh well. SM must have done something right to make a gazillion dollars on the series and have so many fanfic addicts to boot.
I think Alice must be keeping visions from Edward again. She has to have had flickers of Bella being a vampire, especially now that she knows. I wonder how Rosalie will react to that thought?
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I know! THE EYE COLOR!~! Ah well...WE noticed...lol
Shhh...yes, she is keeping just a couple of things from Edward...but she thinks it's for his own good...
Hopefully Rose has had time to ADJUST too!
Thanks for reading, Sheeijan!
Kathie
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 05:03 AM · On: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.
He certainly is more hopeful and optimistic than before! I guess just knowing that there is someone out there for you can change your outlook! Life had splashes of color for the last 36 years, he can't possibly want to exist without her!
Author's Response: I think that's true...he's had so much time to adjust...and he has been hopeful, finally!
Nope, he doesn't want to BE without HER!
Thanks for reading, snowgood!
Kathie
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 04:50 PM · On: January 18, 2005
This is so sweet! I was anticipating reading of his first meeting with Bella too much to reply to the last chapter. I love it! I'd love to read more! :D
Author's Response: Thank you, Dydear!!! Being engrossed in reading is a good reason to not review!
I do appreciate your support!
Kathie
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 03:12 PM · On: March 7, 2005
gosh this entry is sooooo great... of course they could see the accident snd prevent it... makes so much more sense...
Author's Response: They certainly WERE prepared! Sand and SALT!!!
Thanks for reading, sweet khans!
Kathie
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 03:08 PM · On: February 28, 2005
loved this journal entry good job
Author's Response: Ah...he really has fallen, hasn't he?
Thanks for your support, I really do appreciate it!
Kathie
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