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Reviewer: syaoran7 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great writing! Love it!

Reviewer: syaoran7 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great writing! Love it!

Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was an excellent take on their first hunting trip together. And concidering you wrote it as if Breaking Dawn Never happened it was a smart way to progress the story. I noticed that you wrote this shortly after Breaking Dawn was published. id you not like BD and want to write your own take or were you just having some fun with the Cullens? Either way I enjoyed it very much. I loved how he was forceful, but loving with her too. Great scene. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

what a fun story .... love the playful feel even during a hunt

Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Good.. Enjoyed

Reviewer: Sumsums (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

very cool :)

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

heeheehee... ahahaha. lols squirms in delight! rofl-worthy! :D

Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

woot! hot vampire sex in the woods! one can never have enough of that! lol. XD!!!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked Bella's apology to Edward for all she put him through as a human. I have always wanted to see that in a fanfic, and I almost resorted to writing one myself for it! I still might do that, but I am so glad that someone else felt it important to include in their story. :)

Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Favorite line: "It was entirely possible that if I concentrated, I could identify every single nerve ending that was frantically firing as it came into contact with his skin, and every muscle that trembled at his caress. It thrilled me to know that Edward must have felt the same every time we touched." That's the best way I've heard it described in any fic, hands down.
Amazingly, entirely hot. Very, very nice. ;o)

Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this version of Edward! So loving and sarcastic all at the same time. Great job!

Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

It was so well written with great characterization. I can't wait to read your next story!

Reviewer: IntoTheTwilight (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it! I really hope you'll consider writing another hunting session :)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked it. Well done!

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