I was trying to figure out the connections the while way through. The fact that Trisha has the same features as Edward, and Dominic sounds like a Quiluete. So he's the werewolf Aro found? Can't wait to see how this all links up. 

Dang it.  So many questions.  Mainly for the end there.  What changed?

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review!!  I love creating a mystery -- though I don't know if I am very good at doing so...  I believe our man Dominic, who has been attracted to Gianna, after his transformation may have, IDK, imprinted...  Anything else you want clarified, please just PM me!!

So I feel I must appologize. I haven't writen a review yet. So heres a really long one. I really like your new character, you did so well creating him I also like the fact that this is a Volturi story not many of those come out. Instead everyone writes about the angsty whining heart break of Bella Swan and Edward Cullen. To be honest I hated the books. SM repeats herself and can't actually come up with any solid content. I believe that all the books could have so easily fit into one. There was no build up of a relationship it was.... hmm im complaining aren't I? Sorry. Back to your story. I really enjoy the way you write Aro's point of view and the little back history is a nice touch. I find my self constantly thinking and trying to explain how certain things came to be when they aren't explained, and I have to say how Aro found Dominic is one of them. Good work all the way around. Thank you for sharing.

BTW there were little boxes and " throughout your story where there shouldn't be.

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Oh, please don't apologize -- I am very happy to get this review!  It's been like pulling teeth lately!  Anyway, I did try to write something different -- with not too much angst -- I prefer to call it drama.  How Aro found Dominic is going to remain a mystery for a while -- as is Dominic's father.  But I hope to get thos answered eventually.  And thanks for the heads up on the misc. boxes and quotes.  I saw them too, but when I went to edit, they were gone.  So I'll keep checking it out -- obviously a fluke with Twilighted.  Anyway, thanks for the rant that made me smile, the kinds words about my story, and I hope to hear from you again.

Well, well, well... you just had to jump onto the lemony band wagon. Couldn't we get a little futhre into the story before the hump session? Okay, it was appreciated (laughs). But, is this setting up the forth-coming Edward/Bella dynamic for this story, hmm?

And, just how will Edward, Bella, and Dominic's paths cross? What does Aro have in store for our love birds?

Where are the rest of the Cullens? That family is never to far apart.

Plus, now you've got me thinking about Gianna a lot more than I initially cared to. What's her part in everything? Besides playing kissy-face with the American, of course.

Hmm. So much to think about until the next update. Can't wait.

Author's Response:

Starnani21, so sorry I'm just getting to respond to your reviews -- been having massive computer problems!  Anyway, do you feel my lemon was ill-timed?  Well, maybe I was playing to the readers...or maybe I just like some loving!  I really thought Bella and Edward deserved some intimate time.  Where's the Cullens!  Now that you will have to wait further into the story for!  And I do hope I make you feel for Gianna -- it will make the story that much more rewarding in the end.  Thank you again for your faithful reviews and I hope not too disappoint -- too much.

This was an interesting read. Can't wait to check out the rest.

Mmmm, I love me some Volturi action and I love fuzzy’s banner on the black background.

I still wonder how Aro can be so sure that he can succeed in making Bella a part of the Volturi. After all he has to take into account that Chelsea’s gift might be useless with her…but then, Aro has been on this earth a lot longer than me, and he knows people so much better.

Caius stating that he “could tolerate almost anything” makes me laugh every time I read it. I wonder what he fears more, werewolves or the Cullens? I almost pity him…

Thanks for the intro. xoxo

 

 

 

 

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aw i kind of like it can't wait for an update

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