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Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 24 Epilogue

Nice story; so much happier for poor Bree and Tanya finally has her mate :)

Author's Response:

I couldn't have Fred hunting humans indefinately.  I could only see him changing his diet for his mate.  The Denali's are a good family for Bree and Fred.  There are less of them and they don't have the gifts that bother Fred.

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2012 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 24 Epilogue

  '“Hey there, squirt,” Garrett laughed as he ruffled my hair.  I scowled at him as I always did when he did that.  Between him and Emmett it was a wonder any follicles survived.  I soon gave in and gave him a hug.'        Heheh!  Karmic.

  'I smiled as I read the message from my new sister-in-law, as I'd missed her too.  I couldn't believe how close we had become.  I hated her at first.  The minute she set eyes on Fred on that first visit to Denali, our lives as nomads were overFred had noticed Tanya in Forks, when we returned to face the Volturi.'        Oooohahahahaaah!!  Fred and Tanya?  Meaning they are Denalis now.  What a pleasant surprise!        ^_^

  'When the threat of Jasper had been removed, I confessed to Seth during one of our calls that I was ready to start on Tanya again.  Seth was the voice of reason.  He made me see that my dislike for her was irrational, as I hadn't even tried to get to know her.'        And she kept Seth too.  Even better!

  So, Fred and Bree were among the witnesses.  Makes sense.  Friends the Cullens needed, and friends they are.

  'No one explained the swing of allegiance between the Cullens and the wolves.  Maybe this was a regular thing with them.  Like siblings, squabbling one moment, and best of friends the next.'        Heheh!  I wish.  But it was an endearing idea.

  That was a nice closure for Bree and Fred's story, Lizzy.  Thanks.        :)



Author's Response:

I always planned to give Bree a bigger family.  There were already too many Cullens.  I wanted her to keep Seth as a friend too.  Long distance friendship works better with Seth as she doesn't have to put up with the smell.  He he.

 

 

Reviewer: GCSJ (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 24 Epilogue

This is a great ending!!!!!!! It brought together everything really well!!!! This is my all time favorite story!!!!!!! I guess this th the only review I'm ever gonna leav that doesn't say 'please update!' ;( Great writing you should definitely write more stories!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that is such a great complement to pay me.  I thought some readers might guess where they were going to end up.  Carlisle was quite  insistant about them visiting he friend in Alaska.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 24 Epilogue

I'm glad that Tanya & Fred found each other



Author's Response:

So pleased you have enjoyed my story and are happy to see Bree and Fred with a new family.

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