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Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 22

'I staggered as he temporarily increased the intensity of his gift. When the feeling ebbed, I turned around to see Fred clutching his upper arm.'        Whew! After last chapter, I expected to find him resting in pieces.        :-P

'“And how did you feel, Bree? When you became aware of what you had done.”        What kind of question was that? Did he think I was pleased with myself? That because I was upset, I thought what I did was okay? Did he think I was that much of a monster?'        More likely assessing, rather than having an ready answer. Or trying to make her see that she isn't. Both would be just like him.

“She didn't leave, Bree. She was murdered by your father. Her remains were discovered soon after you ran away. When the authorities discovered he hadn't reported you missing, he was charged with both of your murders. He is currently in prison awaiting trial.”        Jeez, that was heavy!! I will check next chapter asap for her reaction. Revenge? Closure? Anyone's guess.

Author's Response:
Just as well Fred has his gift, Bree would have been distraught if she had caused more damage.

You're so right. Carlisle was just assassing her. If she's going to live with Rosalie and Emmett he needs to know that it's just her newborn state and she's not naturally violent. It's not unusual for childen from violent homes to become violent adults.

Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2012 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 22

Poor Bree. I probably wouldn't have wanted to know.

Author's Response:
I know. The poor girl can't get a break. At least she can let go of the resentment she held about her mom for leaving her.

Reviewer: GCSJ (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 22

Oops I left that review twice... Oh well :D

Reviewer: GCSJ (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 22

OMG! I love the part about Bree's dad! I cnt wait to see what she does and how she reacts to it! I'm just saying its a good thing Fred has his gift!!! This is gr8!!!! It's by far the best book I've ever read; including the twilight saga!!!!!! Please update!!!!! Pretty pretty please!!!! With sugar on top!!!!!!

Author's Response:
The bit about Bree's dad is not mine, I'm afraid. It was in her bio in the illustrated guide. Most of Bree and Fred's human life is from the bio. I used it to try and keep the story as canon as possible.

I'm so pleased you enjoy reading my story.

Reviewer: GCSJ (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 22

OMG! I love the part about Bree's dad! I cnt wait to see what she does and how she reacts to it! I'm just saying its a good thing Fred has his gift!!! This is gr8!!!! It's by far the best book I've ever read; including the twilight saga!!!!!! Please update!!!!! Pretty pretty please!!!! With sugar on top!!!!!!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 22

Wow. Interesting about Bree's dad

Author's Response:
Bree's dad's being in prison is not my idea. It was in Bree's bio in the illustrated guide. I've tried to keep Bree and Fred's humann life as close to the guide as possible.

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 22

Wow... things are moving fast all of a sudden. Someone in the Cullen family really needs to sit down with Bree and lay it out for her. A ton of her problems is caused by paranoia. :-)

Thanks for sharing your talent!

Author's Response:
Yeah, poor Bree, she just can't cope with her new brain capacity and she starts seeing ulterior motives everywhere.

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