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Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 11

  '“I know she's not keen on the wolves.” There was another pause, then sounding very unsure she added.   “I'm sure they wouldn't attack her, but she would feel safer if she had someone with her.” Ooh she was clever, playing on his protective instincts.'     HAHAHAHAAAHH! Good one! Oh, I love that pixie!     X-D

'As I climbed the stairs I wondered why Edward wasn't here. Why hadn't he just come home when Bella had gone to sleep? What did he do while she slept? Did he just watch her? No, he wouldn't just watch her sleeping; that would be kinda weird.'        Er, well, huh, you know...

'The first voice we heard was Rosalie’s. “I want this; everything’s not always about you!” She was practically screaming.        “That’s rich, coming from someone who spends the whole of her existence rarely thinking of anyone but herself.”'         My intuition says Edward didn't like the news. As expected.        :)

I'm glad that Fred and Bree are thinking about staying a while. Too bad they want to keep their hunting habits, but I suppose this is natural for them (yikes!), and the Cullens can't force the issue. I'm very curious how things will go with Bella.

You are portraying everybody very well. Keep it up, Lizzy!       ^_^

Author's Response:
Edward's not too happy about having 2 newborns around, but he also knows that Rosalie has Bree's future all planned out. His thoughts are in line with Jasper's. He and Rosalie are not that close, but he doesn't want to see her get hurt. He was just advising her to step back a bit. Unfortunately Rosalie wants what Rosalie wants and doesn't want advise from anyone right now.

Reviewer: godschild4ever (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2011 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 11

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! It is so amazingly well written!!!!!! The way you wrote the characters is absolutely perfect! I also really love the story line so far! I hated how Bree died at the end of Eclipse, and I've read some other fanfictions where Bree doesn't die, but none of them did the characters Justice! You did such an amazing jpb I can't even describe it! Thanks so much for writing! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your comments. I'm so pleased you are enjoying my fic. After reading Bree's story I thought it was a shame she had to die, especially as her human life had been so awful. I thought I'd give her another chance at a better life.

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