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Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2011 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 10

  'The second the words left his mouth I knew I didn't want to leave without him.  He had given me a way out, but I didn't want it.  I wanted a family, but I wanted to be with Fred too.  I didn't know why, we weren't that close really; we had barely spoken before today.  I just needed to know that he was okay.'        In other circunstances, I would think he is her mate.  But, since Jasper didn't feel the corresponding vibes between them, I will stick with the friendship option, until proven otherwise.  Probably her first real friend.

  “There's something not right about this coven.  I know Jasper said Carlisle didn't change him, but he changed the others.  Don't you think they're all a bit odd?  I mean we don't know what sort of doctor this Carlisle is.  Maybe he's a psychiatric doctor and he's changing his patients.  That could explain their reaction to my comment to Alice.”        A psy...?  Heheh!!  I will grant Fred that, he has imagination.  His theory is completely off the mark, of course, but makes sense.        :-]

  “Hi, Bree.”  The trill, bubbly voice came through the receiver.  “Could I have a quick word with Fred?”        Oh, Liz!  A cliffie!  That was mean.  Now we will be on the edge till next update, eager to know what the pixie is up to.  ACK!!        :-P



Author's Response:

You've caught on to how I see Bree.  It's not unusual for children that grow up in an abusuve home to not have close friends.  She also longs for what seems on the surface to be a 'proper' family.  She feels she has a chance to have both.

Fred just thinks they're all a bit odd and is trying to find a logical reason for the way they choose to live.

Not too long 'til the next update.  Alice is not very patient.

 

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2011 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 10

I like the idea of Bree & Fred meeting the others.  I don't know how they're going to take to animal drinking



Author's Response:

The animal blood is a big deal.  Bree and Fred are happy hunting traditionally.  The Cullens find it hard to stick to their diet even though it's their choice.  Imagine how hard it would be without any real motivation.  I don't think acess to hot showers will be enough of a motivation for Bree right now.

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