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Reviews For Shattered Soul
Reviewer: stwin315 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 10:58 PM · On: Shattered Soul (One-Shot)

pass



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 01:12 PM · On: Shattered Soul (One-Shot)

Surprised jasper was able to keep it from Edward when Edward met Bella

Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 09:59 PM · On: Shattered Soul (One-Shot)

I'll say pass.  

You took cannon and enhanced it with enough fluff to make it a beleiveable possibility. 

I think you nailed Alice's reaction, though to be honest, Alice being Alice, she  probably saw the story before he said it and simply gave him the right words to get it off his chest and clear the air between them. 

Alice can sometimes be hard to write for.

I enjoyed this.

 



Author's Response:

Alice really can be hard to write sometimes!

So I'm even more glad you think I got her reaction right. And I'm super happy that you liked it so much and gave me a pass on it!

Thanks so much!

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