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Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2012 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was kind of a different Mike than we're all used to seeing; Mike has almost likable thoughts, instead of the sexy, lustful thoughts Edward reported that mike held towards Bella! I almost sympathized with Mike's disappointment!

Reviewer: sugarglider (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this thank you!

Reviewer: rin1591 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was really good thank you for sharing

Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it! Great to see a MPOV (you rarely ever do).

Ha ha ha... too bad for Mike. I have to hate him, though. Conceited cow.

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

Awesome story. I really like the banner.

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was fun to read. i liked getting a glance into Mike's small mind.

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Brilliant, I think this series of outtakes it a great idea & so well -written!

I like how you made the teen boys realistic, and you didn't make Mike stupid or horrible, just ia boy with a crush. I liked how he appreciated that Bella wasn't the type for mindless chatter( take that Jess) And how he silently mocks Edward? THe "he 's so silent he's dreamy made me giggle!

Great job! Thanks

Reviewer: Blue_eyed (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

Haha, so cool :)

Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

shalalaalalallaallalalalal :D

Need to go study for bio now............or eat goldfish :

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Aww... Ya almost wanna feel sorry for Mike Newton!

Almost. :D

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ah yes, everyone wanted to take Bella of the Ball to the dance. Loved how this was set up like a contest of sorts. If only they knew they could have saved themselves a fair amount of heartache. Yes, or not.

Sandra

Reviewer: Love2bdazzled (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is the first one I've loved enough to review. The banter between the boys is an interesting side plot - and of course Edward wouldn't detail it to Bella - he is a gentleman!

Reviewer: Brunette1332 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

very nice! good ending :)

Reviewer: RidingonDreams (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

hee hee hee :) this was so cute!

i can just picture edwards reactions to mike's thoughts...

anyways, i loved this. :)

Reviewer: HRHLadyEsme (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is just adorable!! I love getting the guys points of view... nicely done!!

Reviewer: brooklyndodger (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey!! This was really good.... I like your characterization (I'm sure I spelled that wrong) of Mike. It wasn't too superficial, but it wasn't like a college professor was speaking. It was really cute. And by the way, is your penname a lyric from The Hush Sound, or is it just a Twilight thing? Just curious.

Author's Response:
Thanks! And yes, my penname is a lyric from the Hush Sound, aren't they awesome?

Reviewer: brooklyndodger (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey!! This was really good.... I like your characterization (I'm sure I spelled that wrong) of Mike. It wasn't too superficial, but it wasn't like a college professor was speaking. It was really cute. And by the way, is your penname a lyric from The Hush Sound, or is it just a Twilight thing? Just curious.

Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

haha

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was so much fun to read! I like Mike and think he's a good guy. So I liked how you characterized him here. And that tiny bit of Edward from Mike's perspective, just icing.

Author's Response: Yeah, Mike's a good guy, just a little oblivious, lol.

Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a great concept for a story! I loved it! Great job. :o)

Reviewer: fireonice1292 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

i love the ending....so funny

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

haha, i loved that last sentence

Reviewer: ShandyAnn (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

HAHAHAHAHA!

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